VN Ren'Py Abandoned New Life with My Daughter [v0.6.1b] [VanderGames]

[Burt]

Just keep playing. In the end, all will become clear.

Dont bother to reply to baiting its a porn forum no one is forced to play or download anything any non game discussion should be in general not game thread

 

[V.A. Laurie]

Ok. Maybe not very fair to judge this quickly... and I know that it is translated... but:

"I'm your daughter"
- "No way, I don't have any children. You're obviously talking nonsense."
- "Want to go have sex?"

... really? ...

Edit:
LoL

And the alternate path:

"I'm your daughter"
- "What??? It can not be!"
"*He seems very sensitive.*" +1 love
followed shortly by (paraphrase cause I already deleted the game):
- Why did I let this imposter in my house. Oh well, I can just have sex with her.

/sigh...
Well... I suppose it's a good thing that the CG is available separate, cause the attempt at a narrative is quite simply too poor to suspend disbelief enough to become engaged.

Sorry Dev. I sincerely recommend you seek assistance with the storytelling.

This is something I want to redo in the next version. I mentioned yesterday that I had initially tried to simply edit the translations, but keep it as close to the original as possible. The english text on the next version should update a lot of these things that we would find odd as native english speakers.

 

[VanderGames]

Dont bother to reply to baiting its a porn forum no one is forced to play or download anything any non game discussion should be in general not game thread

did not understand a single word)

 

[buttlovinmagic]

ok seen 3 versions now and its not getting better.
still confused as only one character looks female despite the boobs....like someone took a photo of ken and Barbie and used ken as model for all characters except a Barbie daughter.....

game screams incest but apparently its not focused there in the devs mind.....only his/her fingers failed to get that memo when typing

renders and story can be beaten hands down many times on this site so.......trashcan 1 future purchases 0

 

[Wis Lim]

This is something I want to redo in the next version. I mentioned yesterday that I had initially tried to simply edit the translations, but keep it as close to the original as possible. The english text on the next version should update a lot of these things that we would find odd as native english speakers.

I agree. Making the dialog viable for this game is going to have to take more than simply translating or making minor modifications.

There is an apparent disconnect between the dialogs intentions, never mind it's literal translation, and what is within the boundaries believability. Whether it stems from the Dev's vision for the project, culture, understanding of storytelling mechanics, or basic life maturity level, they ought to consider reaching out for assistance.

I don't mean to sound harsh or judgemental, but I think the Dev shows promise. I am not familiar with what it takes to actually create one of these games, so I can't speak to the level of talent but while I don't think this project is a success as is, I hope the Dev keeps trying and utilizes the resources of the community in order to learn and improve.

 

[KiGa]

This Margarita thing looks like a man (or an alien lol)

 

[anne O'nymous]

The void link is corrupted, the file you get have half the needed size and is, obviously, not openable.

 

[Londo_Mollari]

Not really a cutie ... not really anything left to corrupt ... but like the concept and her similarity to

Spoiler: Lydia

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[Londo_Mollari]

Cheats:

Entered in console (Shift + O)

Total heart points:

v_stat_d_like=x

(x is number of total heart points)

Total heart points are a sum of number of full heart pieces (*10) + number of current heart piece progress

E.g. You want 5 pieces of heart + 3 progress with current piece:
5*10 + 3 ==> v_stat_d_like=53

Note: setting v_stat_d_like will not change the shown stats immediately, but after next change of heart points during play.

You can also change the shown heart pieces and progress points of current heart piece immediately but after next change of heart points ingame the value in v_stat_d_like will overrule this! So it isn't quite helpful.

Number of shown full heart pieces:

v_untit=x

Number of current heart piece progress:

hart_serdce=y

And sorry, didn't find a variable like

v_use_pretty_female_models=True

 

[Flame0123]

Everything in this game is Bullshit.... i mean..
Daughter come of nowhere and start treating her father's home like she own it...
then mc learn about his ex wife
we insult his deceased ex wife, mc is an asshole
the reason of divorce, if we put the blame on his ex wife, mc is an asshole... so mc have to take the blame... its bullshit
Daughter masturbate, mc enter without knocking, mc is an asshole or creep and daughter told him "Did mom ever taught you to knock" shit... its bullshit... she have no right and mc own his home, not the dauther...the daughter just want to be treated like a queen... its bullshit...

 

[JustGuilty]

New version is out today.

 

[V.A. Laurie]

New version is out today.

I let Vanderbor know, and so I will let you all know - translations are a little behind because of my day job taking up so much time. However, the fully adjusted text for all parts will be implemented in this update and will be very much worth the wait.

I hope you all enjoy the edits I'm working on!
(and don't blame Vanderbor for any lateness on this release. His Russian side is done, but it is my fault that there may be a holdup on the full release!)

 

[Andy02]

Coming soon Version 0.4.0 (Approximate release date November 9th, 2017)

 

[JJadams]

0.4 available on svscomics. Any hero here ? Don't want a 3h download ^^"

 

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Luckily I got premium lolz.

 

[Andy02]

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Luckily I got premium lolz.

Very, thank you !!

 

[eatthecat]

The women in this game look like pre-op Transgenders.

 

[eatthecat]

Cause porn isn't setting up Patreon accounts to support their work that's the big difference here. Patreon is a site made for content creators to get support for their work & content. With most now days trying to sell it too Steam afterwards. So when there is someone like this dev & others popping up & making content very similar too theirs, it is rip off. Now if this was just made & didn't have it's own patreon account & just free to the public there be no issue. The fact is their trying to cash in on someone else idea. This isn't like porn where the market is so over filled with similar stuff/rip offs & multiple studios making millions. DMD is made by a small group trying to make something & a name for themselves, having someone like this Dev pop up & try to cash in on the same idea, stealing stuff from DMD is messed up.

This is something I have dealt with as an artist many times, with people even stealing my content & altering it trying to claim it as their own & make $$$ off of it. This isn't a negative remark this is just me stating facts & you taking it as negative cause you don't agree with it. Someone could say your comments are negative cause you feel the need to follow them around & call their post out like some stalker.

The only thing special about DMD are the attractiveness of the renders. The story is standard maybe even a little on the bad side and the developer has dragged it out to the point that I've actually lost interest.

 

[Paprika]

No incest? No interest!

 

[ReJoe]

The women in this game look like pre-op Transgenders.

OMG I thought it was just me... The daughter looks like a woman, but everyone else looks like men! Creeps me out when they stare! I like the story but the trannies are such a distraction.