Edits have been submitted, updated version should be out tomorrow or the next day.
Be sure to play all the way through from the beginning if you have found the language and speech to be troublesome throughout. -- I spent a good amount of time going back to all 4 days to ensure that the entire game feels better.
If you see any glaring issues or spots that need tweaking, editing or adjusting moving forward, feel free to DM me. Note that I am only working on the English Text, and some menu options/dialogue choices cannot be easily adjusted by me.
I am hopeful that you will all see a lot of improvement for the overall way the game reads. It should be much more like a real visual novel now. I know that a lot of things get lost in translation; that's simply how it goes. Keeping that in mind, I think that everyone will find that the current text gives new life to the game.
I know that Vanderbor is trying to please you, as well, but I don't want to speak for him. I will just say that I hope in the next few updates you find reason to truly love the game, rather than simply play it 'just because'.
also... i may have thrown a line into one of the earlier days as a bit of a shoutout to the people in this thread. I found the line hilarious, but you be the judge.