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3Bliksems

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Man alive, the models for the npc girls are scary.

This has got to be one of the worst porn games I've played in a long time.
 
Sep 4, 2017
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Now i can live with the girls looking like they do, but he really needs to get some help from other than google translate, my head hurts from reading and im not sure i understood half of it.. :O
 

V.A. Laurie

Game Writer & Editor
Game Developer
Oct 9, 2017
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Now i can live with the girls looking like they do, but he really needs to get some help from other than google translate, my head hurts from reading and im not sure i understood half of it.. :O
I think you'll enjoy the update with the new translations! I'm doing a lot of rewriting from start to finish!
 

lockhear

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Oct 10, 2017
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Is this game purpose celebrating transgender people? Because after meeting a few NPC in the game i started telling to myself silently "wtf... wtf.. wtf..."
 
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V.A. Laurie

Game Writer & Editor
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Edits have been submitted, updated version should be out tomorrow or the next day.

Be sure to play all the way through from the beginning if you have found the language and speech to be troublesome throughout. -- I spent a good amount of time going back to all 4 days to ensure that the entire game feels better.

If you see any glaring issues or spots that need tweaking, editing or adjusting moving forward, feel free to DM me. Note that I am only working on the English Text, and some menu options/dialogue choices cannot be easily adjusted by me.

I am hopeful that you will all see a lot of improvement for the overall way the game reads. It should be much more like a real visual novel now. I know that a lot of things get lost in translation; that's simply how it goes. Keeping that in mind, I think that everyone will find that the current text gives new life to the game.

I know that Vanderbor is trying to please you, as well, but I don't want to speak for him. I will just say that I hope in the next few updates you find reason to truly love the game, rather than simply play it 'just because'.


also... i may have thrown a line into one of the earlier days as a bit of a shoutout to the people in this thread. I found the line hilarious, but you be the judge.
 

V.A. Laurie

Game Writer & Editor
Game Developer
Oct 9, 2017
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I hope everyone enjoys the updates to the translation. I wanted to get everything complete as quickly as I could for you all since Vander had wanted to get the game out a few days ago. With that in mind, a few small tweaks here and there may pop up through the previous days as updates come along, but nothing major will be changed on the first 3 days moving forward. I played the game through once more after submitting the edits and I feel like in days 1 and 2 my writing my still be a bit stiff, but as the days move on it eases up and feels better. Day 5 should be a fun one, so stay tuned :)
 

Wis Lim

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Sep 18, 2017
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@Vanderbor @V.A. Laurie

Looks like a rough start, and I'm going to hold off a bit longer before trying your game, but wanted to let you know that I recognize and appreciate the effort and perseverance though negative feedback.

I don't pretend to understand what it really takes to create one of these games, much less design it for a global market, but I do recognize your commitment and wanted to provide a little encouragement your efforts. /salute

I'll keep an eye on it and be happy to provide an honest and constructive review in the near future.
 
2.30 star(s) 26 Votes