I played through everything there is in one sitting today and while rough in multiple places, I am enjoying it. Roughness is absolutely to be expected and is okay for this though, in my opinion. This is a first project by someone who is doing this with their spare time rather than as a full time job. Is it the most unique and original piece? No, but it's enjoyable and not just a meet and fuck. I personally like characters to have stories and to act like actual people.
To the people complaining about how navigation is, I'll be honest, you need to play more Renpy VNs. That is just how movement tends to be handled. Could it be better? Yes. But the map does absolutely help.
To Kaind, I think you've got a good starting point and I look forwards to seeing more. I would recommend running the translation to English through DeepL which generally provides a more accurate to the original result than Google. I would also like someone proofreading after that to make sure it flows naturally, but it is generally sufficient as it is. I think that in general, the character models are different enough to stand out from other games.
I do hope that after you get a few more content updates, you are able to go back and polish the intro sequence which in my opinion hold the worst of the perspective framing as has already been pointed out in the thread.
The last thing I will say is that I think after the Trust 30 with Rika and Dragon Girl has happened, that Dragon Girl's model in the Sunflower Field at least show have her new clothes.