Hello.
Though the artistic side is still very good, the new content of the story was annoying. I was very angry towards the police officers, particularly the woman, even hoping not to have any romantic path later on with her. If that's how you deal with a missing person, you should have just killed him, there was no difference. Plus, the humiliation of leaving him nude was too long.
I appreciated the different angles for the erotic dream. It's a really good find.
I found something that doesn't make sense :
Since it's an action and not a dialog or thought, the "Bill" in blue isn't necessary. And it would be more clear with something like "Bill brought a blanket and found some clothes"
Good continuation.