VN Ren'Py NL Corporation [v0.11.30] [SuckylittleD]

[SuckylittleD]

Overview:
You take a role as MC who just graduated from university got no job and no place to live and by many reasons you decide to kill yourself, but it didn't work because there was a guy that help you in this situation he help you to start a new life and work in his company and then he move you into a shared house where everything begins.​

Thread Updated: 2024-02-26
Release Date: 2024-02-26
Developer: SuckylittleD

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Version: 0.11.30
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Zemax]

SuckylittleD congratulations for your game.

please submit to the Developers Badge, make a ticket here, And good Luck with your game Dev.

 

[rKnight]

You take a role as MC who got no job and no place to live and by many reasons you decide to kill yourself, but it didn't work...

...but it didn't work cause you found a pair of big reasons to live.


THX for the share...

 

[JennaJJ]

shared house where everything begins

... Thx 4 the share ...

 

[Moosica]

Thanks for sharing.

 

[A Common Crab]

English not very good indeed

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[TsubameYui]

Honestly, your grasp on English is pretty solid for a non-native speaker. You seem to have some trouble with things like tense, punctuation, singular/plural words, and articles(a, an, the, etc.). These are all very common problems for non-native English speakers.

One thing that really stands out, that's easy to fix, is your lack of proper spacing. There should always be a space after any punctuation.

 

[TsubameYui]

Just finished playing through. As I said before, the English is nowhere near as bad as your warning implied it would be. The overview is pretty vague, so I wasn't expecting much story-wise. However, I was pleasantly surprised that the plot seems quite a bit deeper than I expected. Would have liked to see a bit more of the girls, as they're very cute so far. Bit disappointed at the lack of any lewd content. Some future tags would be nice. So far it seems like a harem setup, but I'd love some confirmation so I don't get my hopes up.

If you'd like, I can proofread the script for you, free of charge. Should only take me about an hour to clean it up nicely. Send me a DM if you're interested. Reading over my corrections could help you with your goal of improving your English.

 

[TyphoonNL]

i am going to think that the dev is Dutch, just because it says NL as in Nederland (Netherlands)
but i can be wrong

 

[Tyrranus]

1.5gb for that? brother you gonna need to get yer file size optimized or youll be over 5gb before the first plot point...

Aside from that it wasn't too bad of a start but yeah your english is pretty bad.
Even beyond the language issue, the dialogue was a bit on the childish side.

Over all needs polish and proofreading by an english native speaker but there is a solid start here

 

[BlasKyau]

One thing that really stands out, that's easy to fix, is your lack of proper spacing. There should always be a space after any punctuation.

I would say that this is true in basically all languages, it isn't something unique to English.

 

[TsubameYui]

i am going to think that the dev is Dutch, just because it says NL as in Nederland (Netherlands)
but i can be wrong

I was thinking NL maybe stands for New Life. Seems to fit the function of the company.

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

That overview is hilarious please don't change it.

 

[DeUglyOne]

Yet another 5 star review that reads like an AI shill.
Another dev trying to boost his own rating?

 

[Glorified_ignorance]

How's the game? Cuz the overview is written horribly.

Is that mustard on hes junk?

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[KingRocket]

>Just graduated
>Have no job and no place to live
>Want to uninstall from life

True and real.

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

How's the game? Cuz the overview is written horribly.

Is that mustard on hes junk?

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A lighting/shadow glitch.

 

[Limmi]

Thx