VN Ren'Py NL Corporation Reboot [v0.01] [SuckylittleD]

[venerabledaoist]

andriod version is available

Where

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

For a non english first language.. and first attempt at a game.. not bad. A bit Choppy and the punctuation could be better... but I've definitely since worse games make it. Keep on plugging away my friend.. keep on plugging away.

 

[MrBenny]

Just finished playing through. As I said before, the English is nowhere near as bad as your warning implied it would be. The overview is pretty vague, so I wasn't expecting much story-wise. However, I was pleasantly surprised that the plot seems quite a bit deeper than I expected. Would have liked to see a bit more of the girls, as they're very cute so far. Bit disappointed at the lack of any lewd content. Some future tags would be nice. So far it seems like a harem setup, but I'd love some confirmation so I don't get my hopes up.

If you'd like, I can proofread the script for you, free of charge. Should only take me about an hour to clean it up nicely. Send me a DM if you're interested. Reading over my corrections could help you with your goal of improving your English.

(Bump) Still no response confirming a harem.

 

[battali0n]

3DCG, Big Ass, Big Tits, Male Protagonist, Oral Sex, Romance, Teasing, Virgin, Vaginal Sex, Animated, Romance

Hi,
Please list your future tags.
We would like to know what kind of non-vanilla fetishes you plan on adding: Lesbian, Harem, Female domination. etc.
Will any of them be:
optional, as in the player decides whether they happen or not?
skippable, the player doesn't see them but they still happen?
or forced and unavoidable?
The planned fetishes are a really important factor in whether many people will try your VN.
We know at the very least that you know what you like and what you will never put in your game.
I wish you the best.

 

[Ghost__667]

Is there any Android version of this game ?

 

[giqui]

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NL Corporation [v0.11.00] [SuckylittleD]

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[DeemLeem12]

northernlion has a porn corporation?

 

[Niuul]

Was honestly surprised by how coherent the writing was for the most part. Usually when you see that the dev isn't a native speaker it can be really hit or miss. As others have said the main thing to improve upon would be punctuation, capitalization and tenses.

So yeah. The dev in this case:

 

[YogSothoth1982]

And this is why I prefer to have at least one default name: hitting the keyboard to bring up a name can produce things that are difficult to pronounce:

 

[Ille.]

Hey, I was trying to port it to android but when I open it on the device, it closes instantly, does anyone know what it could be?

 

[skyrfen]

NLCorporation-0.11.30

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[Saint Blackmoor]

You take on the role of an MC who graduated from university two years ago, couldn't find a job,
and now has nowhere to live and decides to end his misery.
In the moment of truth, you meet a mysterious fellow who offers you an alternative to start a new life and work in his company.
He will give you housing with girls in the same stage as you. Share this house and create a new life for you and the girls.​

I tried my hand at an alternative overview.
Thanks for the share. SuckylittleD

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Yet another 5 star review that reads like an AI shill.
Another dev trying to boost his own rating?

Are you sure you're on the right post? I see a 4-star review that doesn't read like AI.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

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[DWYA8888]

2 new animations

 

[PeggyBlackett]

Description of game:

You take a role as MC who just graduated from university got no job and no place to live and by many reasons you decide to kill yourself, but it didn't work because there was a guy that help you in this situation he help you to start a new life and work in his company and then he move you into a shared house where everything begins.

I hope the text in the actual game is going to be closer to actual English than that...​

 

[shamtiiomi]

i missing something here?the games is bad...story is a mess and those flying kick girls dont do any good...sorry not for me maybe if the script wasnt so bad

 

[joryh]

Was honestly surprised by how coherent the writing was for the most part. Usually when you see that the dev isn't a native speaker it can be really hit or miss. As others have said the main thing to improve upon would be punctuation, capitalization and tenses.

So yeah. The dev in this case:

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I used to know french too. Was comfortably fluent in it, reading, writing and speaking. One of my fave shows as a kid was Le Petite Vampire, on CBC's french channel.

Then I found out what Bill 101 is. And all the other unconstitutional laws (shielded from challenge by the Not Withstanding Clause) trampling language rights of non francophones in QB. And I've refused to use it since. And wont. Until those unconstitutional laws are repealed.

I speak one language as a political statement against institutionalized bigotry and oppression in The Bastion of Bigotry known as Quebec.

 

[Ryes]

Idk how this game has 2 positive reviews. I don't really care enough to leave negative comments normally but man. The characters just do not interact like people.

It feels severely autistic. Not in an insulting way. Just genuinely like characters are just autistic.

 

[Jeycii_]

Im already digging the models and premise. Definitely gonna try it out later and am gonna follow this!