VN Ren'Py Completed No Expectation [Ch.3] [Mr Georgie]

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hirikumo

hirikumo

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A nice, sweet game. It was also longer than I expected it to be as well. Even though I didn't dislike "Hearts under the Red Sky", this game was a definite upgrade. When this game is finished, I look forward to reviewing it and sending some bucks your way, Dev.
 
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onknight

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This is very well written. My compliments to the author I'm looking forward to the rest of the book
Here's my opinion so far although we had a great time with the female leader the first chapter. I'm thinking something special is going to happen with that stripper. if she gets a job as writer at the same company he works for . I think the distance is going to be too much for the other relationship. He'll end up with the stripper cause Long distance never works.
 
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Blue5591

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Pleasantly surprised. The initial conflict was dealt with in a way to show inner growth of the protagonist, while introducing another character to lessen the burden. The chemistry was there and nothing felt forced. It also ended at a point where I'm actually interested to see what's next. Dialogue felt awkward at points, but it wasn't too distracting.
 
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onknight

onknight

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THE KILLER 13 said:
no incest, no harem, no ntr, just weak tags, in short: weak game
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A game doesn't need those things to be good just a decent plot and this has the start of a really good plot
Give the author a chance to get going before you say it's awful
I for one I'm not in the incest Harem games are fine but they don't necessarily need to be in this one

I think he's off to a fine start I'm sorry you disagree
 
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THE KILLER 13

THE KILLER 13

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onknight said:
A game doesn't need those things to be good just a decent plot and this has the start of a really good plot
Give the author a chance to get going before you say it's awful
I for one I'm not in the incest Harem games are fine but they don't necessarily need to be in this one

I think he's off to a fine start I'm sorry you disagree
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I wish him to move forward and be successful but I won't change my opinion. Even though the plot and gameplay are cool, these fetishes (tags) don't turn me on, but that's okay, everyone has their own opinion
 
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ArhraCole

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JenMistress said:
So, gave this game a chance.

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Thank you for this game, and looking forward for more.
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Yeah I had a very similar reaction to the end of the story for this chapter of the game, and other than a few phrasing issues and one or two instances of the wrong character talking during a scene (one point in the shower comes to mind) this was a very very good first chapter and I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story develops.
 
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Mr Georgie

Mr Georgie

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Vualen said:
Quite promising start, though still not much content. I wish a good luck for developer and not to forget sounds during animated scenes (y);)
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It's hard to find good-quality sounds. Most of them are awkward or just weird. I'm sorry if it's a turndown for you, but If I do this, I'll do it with the best quality I can.

Thanks for the good wishes, I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
 
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Mr Georgie

Mr Georgie

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ArhraCole said:
Yeah I had a very similar reaction to the end of the story for this chapter of the game, and other than a few phrasing issues and one or two instances of the wrong character talking during a scene (one point in the shower comes to mind) this was a very very good first chapter and I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story develops.
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Glad to read you enjoyed it! I'll check the instances you mention.
 
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TheDick69+

TheDick69+

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As I'm a very emotional guy (HSP for they that now), this was a real rollercoaster with my feelings. But in a good way, both the happy parts and sad parts made me feel a lot. :cool:(y)

I just love the humor also, just my kind of humor. :ROFLMAO:

Waiting for unstallment 2 then!
 
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4.40 star(s) 18 Votes