VN Ren'Py No Fap Island [Ch.9] [FapYeah]

[FatYoda]

do we have to start over? i think i'm bugged. I'm on a date day and i've gone on all the dates the girls are all greyed out, but i can't do anything.

Edit: I did start all over and it went through fine...not sure why it bugged here on the second date day. But my old saves weren't useable.

 

[TheRetroAiden]

I hope this is a good story

 

[youraccount69]

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[IamPsychoTheRapist]

I am confused what should I do?

 

[SamualHand]

I am confused what should I do?
View attachment 4847538

Fap or Not Fap, that is the question..... is your member ready? Ortherwise it's Not Fap!

 

[Thanny]

The dialog needs to be changed in the latest iteration. It refers to the girls wearing swimsuits for volleyball, but they're all wearing athletic outfits which are definitely not swimsuits of any kind.

Also, it says it's going to be a best out of three sets, but only one set is played according to the dialog. Furthermore, volleyball must be won by two points. 14-14 is deuce, and 15-14 is not a winning score. Maybe not so important for what's supposed to be a porn game, but these kinds of mistakes do harm immersion.

 

[FapYeah]

Vaginal sex in new update?

Sort of. There's a scene where MC fantasizes about having sex with the girls. But the next chapter should have full blown sex

 

[SamualHand]

Also, it says it's going to be a best out of three sets, but only one set is played according to the dialog. Furthermore, volleyball must be won by two points. 14-14 is deuce, and 15-14 is not a winning score. Maybe not so important for what's supposed to be a porn game, but these kinds of mistakes do harm immersion.

Before writing a porn game, you have to learn the volleyball rules! Otherwise you are not supposed to do porn!
You are only allowed to talk about bread, after learning how to bake it. Talk about girls if you have become one yourself and talk about space travel, after visiting at least the moon!

 

[FapYeah]

I did start all over and it went through fine...not sure why it bugged here on the second date day. But my old saves weren't useable.

Thanks for checking with a fresh playthrough. Sometimes I end up going through the old script to add new variables which aren't present in old save files. Hopefully, from now there shouldn't be new variables required for the next chapters. I say that but there's probably something I haven't thought about that requires it, but I'll try to minimize this.

And super sad to see no creampie planned.

That can be arranged. Creampie activated!

I am confused what should I do?

This is the question Shakespeare famously mulled over (The answer is to always fap, no one care about the rules )

The dialog needs to be changed in the latest iteration. It refers to the girls wearing swimsuits for volleyball, but they're all wearing athletic outfits which are definitely not swimsuits of any kind.

Also, it says it's going to be a best out of three sets, but only one set is played according to the dialog. Furthermore, volleyball must be won by two points. 14-14 is deuce, and 15-14 is not a winning score. Maybe not so important for what's supposed to be a porn game, but these kinds of mistakes do harm immersion.

Thanks for catching this. I'll be sure to change that.

 

[7642g]

Has anyone figured out how to keep calm during the volleyball game? Pressing the spacebar doesn't do anything for me.

 

[getridofme12345]

Has anyone figured out how to keep calm during the volleyball game? Pressing the spacebar doesn't do anything for me.

Hold it down.

 

[BasedDenier]

The problem I have with this game is that women talk too much and tease too little. It's not like they're even trying to win the game. The lewd-to-words ratio is messed up.

 

[bidone]

For anybody running Linux like me: the "PC" compressed version is Windows only.
Hope anybody finds the time to make a compressed for Linux in the future ...

Here a simple script to add linux support to any renpy game:

#!/bin/sh
set -e

if test $# -eq 0 ; then
  echo "usage: $0 <game> [renpy_version]"
  exit 1
fi

ARCDIR="$(dirname $0)/cache"
mkdir -p "$ARCDIR"
echo "=> $ARCDIR"
BASEDIR="$1"
cd "$BASEDIR"
BASEDIR="$(pwd)"

# trap 'cd "$BASEDIR" && rm -rf __tmp' EXIT
#trap 'cd "$BASEDIR"' EXIT


echo "==> Determining game information..."

# Read Ren'Py version.
if test $# -gt 1 ; then
    RENPYVER=$2
else
    if [ ! -f renpy/__init__.py ]; then
        echo "!! Could not read renpy/__init__.py -- is this a Ren'Py game?"
        exit 1
    fi

      if [ -d "lib/python2"* -o -d "lib/pythonlib2"* ]; then
            PYCODE="vc_version = 0; $(fgrep --color=never 'version_tuple ' renpy/__init__.py | head -n 1 | tr -d '\n\r'); print ('.'.join(str(i) for i in version_tuple[:3]))"
        #echo "$PYCODE"
        RENPYVER=$(python2 -c "$PYCODE" || echo "0")
        else
        PYCODE="vc_version = 0; from renpy.vc_version import official, nightly, version_name, version; from collections import namedtuple; $(fgrep --color=never 'version_tuple ' -B1 renpy/__init__.py | tr '\n\r' '; ')print ('.'.join(str(i) for i in version_tuple[:3]))"
        #echo "$PYCODE"
        RENPYVER=$(python3 -c "$PYCODE" || echo "0")
        fi
    echo "check vc_version"
    if [ "$RENPYVER" = "0" -a -f renpy/vc_version.py ]; then
        RENPYVER=$(python3 -c "$(fgrep --color=never 'version ' renpy/vc_version.py | head -n 1 | tr -d '\n\r'); print ('.'.join(str(i) for i in version.split('.')[:3]))" || echo 0)
    fi
    if [ "$RENPYVER" = "0" ]; then
      echo "Failed => Ren'Py version: ${RENPYVER}"
      exit 1
    fi
fi
echo "=> Ren'Py version: ${RENPYVER}"

# Extract game title.
PYEXE=$(echo *.py)
TITLE=${PYEXE%.py}
echo "=> Game title: ${TITLE}"
SDKDIR="${ARCDIR}/renpy-${RENPYVER}-sdk"

if ! test -d "${SDKDIR}"; then

    cd ${ARCDIR}

    echo "==> Downloading Ren'Py SDK..."
    # Get the appropriate Ren'Py version SDK to supplement missing files.
    SDKFILE="renpy-${RENPYVER}-sdk.tar.bz2"
    SDKURL="http://renpy.org/dl/${RENPYVER}/${SDKFILE}"
    if ! wget -nv "${SDKURL}"; then
        echo "!! Download failed -- aborting."
        exit 3
    fi

    echo "==> Extracting Ren'Py SDK..."
    if ! tar -xf "${SDKFILE}"; then
        echo "!! Extraction failed -- aborting."
        exit 4
    fi
    rm "${SDKFILE}"

    echo "==> Finding SDK directory..."
    for x in "renpy-${RENPYVER}-sdk" "renpy-${RENPYVER}" ; do
      if test -d "$x" ; then
        SDKDIR=$x
        break
      fi
    done
   
    if test -z "${SDKDIR}" ; then
      echo "!! Couldn't find Ren'Py SDK directory -- aborting."
      exit 5
    fi
fi



echo "==> Linking directories..."
# Copy the required platform files.
cd "${SDKDIR}"
for x in lib/*linux-x86_64; do
  echo "=> $x"
  if test -e "${BASEDIR}/$x" ; then
        rm -RI "${BASEDIR}/$x"
  fi
  ln -sf "$PWD/$x" "${BASEDIR}/$x"
  ln -sf renpy "${BASEDIR}/$x/${TITLE}"
done
for x in lib/python*; do
  echo "=> $x"
  echo "${BASEDIR}/$x"
  if test -e "${BASEDIR}/$x" ; then
        rm -RI "${BASEDIR}/$x"
  fi
  echo "$PWD/$x -- ${BASEDIR}/$x"
  ln -sf "$PWD/$x" "${BASEDIR}/$x"
done

# Copy over the launch scripts.
for x in sh ; do
  if ! test -e "${BASEDIR}/${TITLE}.$x" ; then
    echo "=> ${TITLE}.$x"
    ** renpy.$x "${BASEDIR}/${TITLE}.$x"
  fi
done

# if test -d "../../${TITLE}.app/Contents/MacOS/lib" ; then
#   echo "==> Fixing up ${TITLE}.app..."
#   rm -rf "../../${TITLE}.app/Contents/MacOS/lib"
#   ln -s ../../../lib "../../${TITLE}.app/Contents/MacOS/lib"
#   ** "../../${TITLE}.app/Contents/MacOS/renpy" "../../${TITLE}.app/Contents/MacOS/${TITLE}"
#   sed -i -e 's!<string>renpy</string>!'"<string>${TITLE}</string>"'!g' "../../${TITLE}.app/Contents/Info.plist"
# fi

cd ..

echo "\o/ Done!"

 

[BYK370]

FapYeah are there any lesbian scene in future update? so far i only saw Angel and Kiko only are there other girls action as well?

 

[7642g]

Hold it down.

Thank you

 

[FapYeah]

Has anyone figured out how to keep calm during the volleyball game? Pressing the spacebar doesn't do anything for me.

Some people have stated that the bar depletes quicker if your fps is high. I don't know how to change that unfortunately, which is why there's a skippable option.

The problem I have with this game is that women talk too much and tease too little. It's not like they're even trying to win the game. The lewd-to-words ratio is messed up.

That's a fair critique. I'll be sure to address that in my future projects.

FapYeah are there any lesbian scene in future update? so far i only saw Angel and Kiko only are there other girls action as well?

Not planning any additional lesbian scenes. But there are plans for sex with multiple women at the same time where they can be involved with each other as well as with the MC.

 

[SamualHand]

Not planning any additional lesbian scenes. But there are plans for sex with multiple women at the same time where they can be involved with each other as well as with the MC.

FFM is automatically considdered NTR, you can only make MMF without NTR, when the MC is fucked.
Only solution believe me!

 

[ytfninefive]

Off to a great start imo, but some small feedback:
- Day two I sometimes get two dates or four dates before volleyball triggers, instead of three dates?
- Volleyball and nurses end-of-day activities need to be swapped, or volleyball needs to be way less tame, it's a huge letdown after nurses (honestly nurses might also just be too much too soon).
- I assume the women are vying for some sort of reward in the show as well, to encourage their behavior, but I don't think that's ever made explicit?
- To tie in to the previous point, the only non-MC character that seems to be actively attempting to "win", whatever that means for them, is Julie, via her book research. Everyone else just wanders off to do yoga or hike or whatever, outside of the end-of-day activities. Why aren't they all trying to be more flirty or suggestive, etc? Michelle date 2 is almost like she's trying to help you win?
- In the same vein, the dates with Angel are really tame compared to how she behaves the first night. She might actually be the least aggressive character on dates (Kiko's behavior on the other hand seems consistent). That first night the two of them act like they're trying to "win", and then Angel just seems to stop caring? I think at one point in one of the dates she suggests you come over at night again or something like that, but then nothing comes of it?
- The first night scene is great, I know you said you're not planning on adding more of this, but you should reconsider. I mean I don't know what all you have planned, but that scene, nurses, Kiko and Tatiana date 2, some of the post-date texting, is all great teasing and I think it makes sense to run with it. It doesn't have to be hardcore, but the women playing with each other in order to break you really seems to fit the theme.
- There's too much internal monologue telling the player how they're supposed to feel upon learning about the characters, I don't have an example handy, but you don't need to tell the player "Golly I'm learning that this character isn't a one-dimensional person, how interesting!", you can just let the player learn about the characters themselves, like you're doing, and allow the player to have these thoughts themselves. Some inner monologue is fine, but the amount of this particular kind of internal monologue feels a little overdone.

Anyway, keep up the good work, looking forward to the next day!

 

[FapYeah]

Hey ytfninefive, thanks for the in-depth feedback.

Regarding the bug where you get too many dates on the second day, did you load a save from a previous build? I think the variables I've used get bugged out sometimes with a new update.

Now that I look at it, I think you are valid in your observation that the level of teasing could be ramped up from the dates. My initial intention was to focus on building the relationship between the characters before having too much lewd scenes, but I think I could have balanced that better. It might be a thing I revisit later or bring these lessons into my next project. Sometimes development work feels like you're building the tracks as the train is speeding along so while I'm in the thick of writing, I don't always have the foresight to see these details.

I've also come to learn that having scenes of women playing with each other is a tricky subject and can be a bit divisive for some players. When I first added that FF scene some players didn't like that the LIs were doing stuff with other characters while some really enjoyed it. So this is the dilemma of do; I add scenes like this and piss off some fans or just exclude them? This is something I haven't fully decided yet, but I may find a way to add them and make them optional.

Thanks again for the detailed feedback and the kind words.

 

[ytfninefive]

No, only played this current build. I can try to repro and/or debug it if it would help.

Totally get it being hard to see some of this stuff when you're in the weeds. I think Angel was the one that really stood out, so if that's something you feel like addressing in this game that might be the place to focus on.

Yeah, people definitely have strong opinions on this stuff, that's mine, do what works for you!

Good luck!