I should start by saying I am not a fan of incest games, but there are so many on this site, if you don't take the plunge periodically, it is hard to find something new. I tried to take my bias into account into this rating.
So... the good. The women are all hot. They are familiar models but the dev did a good job with the MODs to give them all a unique look. The renders are pretty good and the staging/scene blocking is pretty good as well. The story, while not original, is solid enough. And while the incest makes me uncomfortable, the dev is easing into it which is helpful.... for me anyway...
The not so good... The renders, while clean and well staged, need some work. The clothing assets on some of the women are not fitting right. The school uniform looks horrible on the sister and needs to be fixed. Even mom has some clothes that are just way too clingy.
The MC is also a bit of a Gary Sue. I can almost buy getting a job on your first try, but the dialogue during the interview was just laughable and beyond ridiculous. I am not looking for super reality here, but it was just silly. Also, if this is supposed to be set in the US, you have to have a license to sell Real Estate. You have to take a course and pass a relatively difficult test in order to just get a license. You just can't get hired and start selling right away. I won't even get into the whole motorcycle scene... lol.
I know I am being a little hard on this, and I am not looking for a lot of realism as this is escapism after all, but I do want the story to have a grasp of reality. When it goes too far afield, it starts to pull me out of the story and that's not what I want. Plus, and I have made this observation frequently, there are so many good, well written VNs out there that mediocrity just isn't good enough.
Personally, I think the dev is talented enough to really produce a solid VN here and, to be fair, I am looking forward to see more of this story. I just think the story and the images need to be tightened up a bit.
So... the good. The women are all hot. They are familiar models but the dev did a good job with the MODs to give them all a unique look. The renders are pretty good and the staging/scene blocking is pretty good as well. The story, while not original, is solid enough. And while the incest makes me uncomfortable, the dev is easing into it which is helpful.... for me anyway...
The not so good... The renders, while clean and well staged, need some work. The clothing assets on some of the women are not fitting right. The school uniform looks horrible on the sister and needs to be fixed. Even mom has some clothes that are just way too clingy.
The MC is also a bit of a Gary Sue. I can almost buy getting a job on your first try, but the dialogue during the interview was just laughable and beyond ridiculous. I am not looking for super reality here, but it was just silly. Also, if this is supposed to be set in the US, you have to have a license to sell Real Estate. You have to take a course and pass a relatively difficult test in order to just get a license. You just can't get hired and start selling right away. I won't even get into the whole motorcycle scene... lol.
I know I am being a little hard on this, and I am not looking for a lot of realism as this is escapism after all, but I do want the story to have a grasp of reality. When it goes too far afield, it starts to pull me out of the story and that's not what I want. Plus, and I have made this observation frequently, there are so many good, well written VNs out there that mediocrity just isn't good enough.
Personally, I think the dev is talented enough to really produce a solid VN here and, to be fair, I am looking forward to see more of this story. I just think the story and the images need to be tightened up a bit.