VN Ren'Py Abandoned Nobody Knows [Prologue/Demo] [SeveredRealms]

[SeveredRealms]

my only question is what happend with severed realms....that was a good one

Well the update for it was posted before I even set up this post it just has not been updated to latest yet for some reason.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Fappable One]

What came to mind when I saw the title:
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She's a bass!!

 

[Ghost'']

Nobody Knows [Prologue/Demo] Unofficial Android Port

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[SeveredRealms]

Nobody Knows [Prologue/Demo] Unofficial Android Port

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Thanks for the port

 

[TONYNICHOLAS]

any animations?

 

[NakedSingularity]

what are the incests of this game to justify its tag?

"Nobody Knows" My guess is that's a spoiler at this point, so you'll just have to wait and see. First impulse thought without even playing it yet is the secretary is a sister he never knew he had or something, but MC's unaware of that fact at the moment (and only finds out after knocking her up and she's 6 months along in the final chapter or close to it, that would be a hilarious middle finger to Patreon, kinda like Shortcake turning out to be MC's other half-sister in Sunshine Love, with only readers being aware of that fact at first).

 

[SeveredRealms]

any animations?

Will be coming later. This is just to introduce you all to the game. More girls and the 1st full sex scene with animation's will be in the next release.

 

[NakedSingularity]

After playing I would say: The farewell he got before leaving to college was his wife's sister Dawn, i.e. his sister in law. He creampied her virgin pussy. Now 16 or 18 years later he still thinks Willow, Dawn's daughter is his niece. But I would guess she is his daughter, concieved when his sister-in-law rode him in the strip club.

So in-laws count as incest now? Or does he creampie his niece or daughter too?

 

[SeveredRealms]

"Nobody Knows" My guess is that's a spoiler at this point, so you'll just have to wait and see. First impulse thought without even playing it yet is the secretary is a sister he never knew he had or something, but MC's unaware of that fact at the moment (and only finds out after knocking her up and she's 6 months along in the final chapter or close to it, that would be a hilarious middle finger to Patreon, kinda like Shortcake turning out to be MC's other half-sister in Sunshine Love, with only readers being aware of that fact at first).

Well there are surprises coming but Jennifer is not related to him. As for who is pregnant first.... nobody knows..... but it will eventually happen to someone

 

[xiphe116]

Lmao, the writing is cringy af. Those brain cells working on comedy should really focus on the renders instead

 

[Burgh917]

I'm gonna keep an eye on it. Really like the fact that the MC is an actual adult male (not an "18" yr old with a 2' dick) which is rare for some reason. Should be interesting to see where it goes.

 

[THE KILLER 13]

Incest game is always welcome, it would be even better if it was incest m/s, but I'll try...

 

[Porthas]

Some but not all I have told my doctor to fuck off and went to a new one. I have major issues going on and one of them effects my hands both from pain and shaking so bad even holding a mouse has the pointer all over the damn screen. 1st thing the new doctor noticed.... the shaking.... which had been ignored by my other doctor. He has referred me to a neurologist. I have been trying to get through to my other doctor for a damn year to help me figure out whats going on with my hands and the bitch kept fucking ignoring it and worrying about dumb shit.

Hope you get to feeling better.

If you do continue work on these games I have some humble requests/suggestions.

You listed this:

Potential Tags
Pregnancy, Lactation, Group sex, Spanking, Voyeurism, Lesbian, Bdsm [Light stuff], Exhibitionism, Teasing, Titfuck, Interracial, Masturbation, Milf, Oral Sex, Groping, Handjob, Anal Sex, Ahegao, Big Ass & Big Tits[Mainly for the milfs]

I'm a fan of most of them. If we can have choices regarding some of these, like anal, the girl-on-girl, etc. That would be grand. And maybe even some even more cosmetic stuff like "prefers blondes" instead of redheads.

Not that I have anything against redheads. I like 'em as much as blondes. But just some ideas to give the player more ownership over the MC.

Same request with the other game.

But of course your health comes first before games. And also it's your game so I'm not trying to tell you what to do. Just some feedback if you're interested.

I also would request a "delete save" button. Looks like you already have the text box opacity and save naming stuff implemented - good stuff.

I'd also be happy to volunteer my services to proofread to catch spelling errors and some grammar. Not that grammar is as much an issue for this format as, say, writing a formal essay.

Also, if we're going to plug in relationship tags, like with your other game, I suggest auto-capitalization for the labels. Like if we plug in "mommy" it will auto-capitalize to "Mommy" if the word starts the sentence.

I like the story ideas so far and look forward to more of your games, should your health allow.

Cheers!

 

[Slayerz]

 

[I_Only_Support_Real_Onez]

Very solid for the demo/prologue. They're usually short but this was an easy 40-50 minutes on auto. A certain lady has some explaining to do later which will be probably be part of the "drama". Looking forward to more of this

 

[VN..reader]

After playing I would say: The farewell he got before leaving to college was his wife's sister Dawn, i.e. his sister in law. He creampied her virgin pussy. Now 16 or 18 years later he still thinks Willow, Dawn's daughter is his niece. But I would guess she is his daughter, concieved when his sister-in-law rode him in the strip club.

thanks for clearing that up. i seem to have missed the Dawn to MC relationship.
However i think you might have missed something.... his wife and 'Daughters' disappeared around oh i don't know,... 18 years ago. much like another game where 3 beautiful young girls show up at the door cause , you know their Mommy died. gotta be fair. if the Daddy is Alive ...well .. somebody's gotta pay
....at least that's what happens in MY Mind....

 

[VN..reader]

and i think Jennifer needs some attention. a few scenes her face looked ...off. she seems to have some Asian/Oriental features and from angle shots her nose and mouth seem to Pinch to a point. kinda like when ya screw up the skeleton when modding Skyrim, umm but, not badly
Overall i think you are safe to push forward on this project. a little graphic polish and another banger on the net. Ilike your work.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Thanks everyone for the kind comments so far. This last year has been a fucking nightmare and they are still looking for the reason(s) my health took a royal shit. Yes they have found some stuff I wont talk to much about it here but do mention stuff on my discord. Again though thank you all for the kind words and criticism so far. The game is still raw and still will need tweaking here and there.

thanks for clearing that up. i seem to have missed the Dawn to MC relationship.

sakuyas has figured it out Dawn has not kept it a secret from Willow but has kept it from the Mc for (reasons) she will be explaining in the next release because the mc is going to be questioning something in his mind after he walks in the door the 1st night back. As for the missing girls your kinda sorta right in some ways. The wife and girls disappeared when the youngest was a couple months old. I know not fully explained yet making the youngest just 18 when the story starts and Willow just under 17. No I am not going to hide their ages because in the world they live in 16 is the legal age of consent and the game is based on a real place where that IS the law in place. Also VN..reader......Mommy ISN"T dead..

 

[Steve70]

Will be coming later. This is just to introduce you all to the game. More girls and the 1st full sex scene with animation's will be in the next release.

I'm not trying to push you to do anything in particular with your game, but the question and answer reminded me of something. I keep thinking it would be a good idea to make animations optional. A majority of the time, they are actually less appealing than some good stills would be. I have no idea how easy that would be to implement, though.