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With checking it with another program, looks like the corrupt file is in the Linux folder. I have Windows 11, so it runs fine with me, but maybe people who have Linux may have a bit of a problem with it, not 100% sure, but might.
I'll go ahead and download to find out for the dev and everyone, since I'm on Linux.
A couple suggestions if I may. The text for speech needs a black border so that it doesn't blend into the background, the english needs an overhaul, and someone to make sure the male/female pronouns are consistent, and the options need to be written clearly for an english speaker. Other than that it's a really promising alpha version, with a good potential storyline.
- Jul 13, 2018
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Looks good so I'll try it. I do love me a good revenge story. I also saw some nice ass in the preview pictures. With all these in mind, as well as the Big Ass Tag and visuals, I'd say I'm going to enjoy this a lot.
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This is what I really, truly hate about amateur prenpy VNs is this:
It's a damn imposition, isn't it?
It's a damn imposition, isn't it?
- Mar 6, 2021
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North River [v0.2][BoldPilot] crunched
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WOW just WOW. The english versoin of the is so bad I had to quit playing it. I believe this would be a good game if you had someone who is better with the english language to help you proof read and make corrections.
- Oct 4, 2017
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I tried this game in the first release but waited for the next update before I give me feedback.
First off what I must agree with the people here is the bad "engrish". I see that some dialogs got improved but there are still some left and I still dont know what is happening.
Like here:
or the first interaction with Bella scene:
There are more of such scenes, I dont think this post can handle the .png file sizes tho.
There are also some graphic errors like this:
I dont think they were in the first update before.
And some content it seems is missing when I read this:
And here guys, check this out:
But expect that, the game is pretty nice. In the beginning you get introduced to all different girls. Not all tho yet. I personally cant wait to get more content of the Flight Attendant and MC
Where the story goes I cant really tell since the "engrish" is hit or miss and I think we can safely say its more about chad MC who bangs chick after chick, conquers one after the another while some bigger plot unfolds in the background.
I like it what we have, and I also like where the game is going. Thats why I dont really want to see this game ignored or abandoned because of the bad english translation.
If the orginal Language is Russian I can help them to translate into english. It wont be perfect but better what we have currently.
First off what I must agree with the people here is the bad "engrish". I see that some dialogs got improved but there are still some left and I still dont know what is happening.
Like here:
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or the first interaction with Bella scene:
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There are more of such scenes, I dont think this post can handle the .png file sizes tho.
There are also some graphic errors like this:
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I dont think they were in the first update before.
And some content it seems is missing when I read this:
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And here guys, check this out:
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But expect that, the game is pretty nice. In the beginning you get introduced to all different girls. Not all tho yet. I personally cant wait to get more content of the Flight Attendant and MC
Where the story goes I cant really tell since the "engrish" is hit or miss and I think we can safely say its more about chad MC who bangs chick after chick, conquers one after the another while some bigger plot unfolds in the background.
I like it what we have, and I also like where the game is going. Thats why I dont really want to see this game ignored or abandoned because of the bad english translation.
If the orginal Language is Russian I can help them to translate into english. It wont be perfect but better what we have currently.
- Aug 24, 2020
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I'm sorry man but the english in this game is so bad that i almost felt physical pain.
Most of the time you can't understand what's going on with the dialog, and sometimes you can't even tell who is supposed to be speaking.
If you want people to enjoy the game and support you, you need to fix the english translation as soon as possible.
Most of the time you can't understand what's going on with the dialog, and sometimes you can't even tell who is supposed to be speaking.
If you want people to enjoy the game and support you, you need to fix the english translation as soon as possible.