VN Ren'Py Abandoned Not a Girl's Name [v0.6] [Pestus Games]

[Takkertje]

look's good

wanna borough my glasses?

 

[Roninsoul7]

It's a nice start and one of the few that starts off with a bang rather than promising and delivering a candle slow burn. I just wonder how there is going to be a story attached from here.

 

[Walter Victor]

wanna borough my glasses?

Come on! You've already said you don't like the game. That's fine, but why criticize someone just because their opinion differs from yours?

 

[Cigzag]

Are...are those genesis 2 models?!

 

[Acerbic Games]

Wow I didn't realize this thread was here, I started a development thread with the intention of creating a proper release thread once I finished the first chapter.

The preview pics raise lots of important questions:

Which one is the MC?

Will this game have NTR? Sharing? Gay?

Is anyone related by blood?

Is this a harem game?

Will it remain a VN, or turn into a sandbox?

Not trying to be critical, but these are questions that a lot of people need to have answered before downloading and playing any game.

Well, at least the characters shown look interesting. So there is that.

1. Leslie is the "mc" for lack of a better term. Future chapters will have you play as other main characters for extra scenes, but Leslie is definitely the main focus.

2. NTR/Sharing is a possibility with the current script, but it will be avoidable (for Leslie anyway.)

3. There are two sisters that will be introduced in the next chapter, but no incest is planned at this time.

4. Harem is a strong word, let's say you may find some opportunities to bone different ladies, but it will be your choice.

5. It will remain a VN, the story is quite linear although the few choices that will be presented in the game will ultimately affect the ending.

I didn't take it as critical at all, I'm happy you think the characters look interesting and I appreciate your questions. Hopefully I've answered them well enough.

 

[Acerbic Games]

Looks good, but reading the description, I have one question - is this a story about the relationship between Les and a girl, or will there be a group sex?

The story does revolve around Les and a girl, but there will be choices in later chapters that open the possibility for promiscuity and a threesome.

 

[Acerbic Games]

not animated ?

I'm rendering animations as I type and will hopefully have an updated version out in the next couple hours. I think I might have gone a little too long on some of the animations even, but too much is better than not enough right?

 

[watsonguptill]

I like this, it's a slow burner, but good.

 

[m4pII]

1. Leslie is the "mc" for lack of a better term. Future chapters will have you play as other main characters for extra scenes, but Leslie is definitely the main focus

To be honest, I'm not a fan of multiple protagonists.
To clarify, will they have their own stories, or will we just see Leslie's story from a different perspective?

 

[Acerbic Games]

To be honest, I'm not a fan of multiple protagonists.
To clarify, will they have their own stories, or will we just see Leslie's story from a different perspective?

The playing of other characters is really just to expand on the plot and help the player get to know the supporting cast. And also to explore sex scenes that Leslie isn't a part of.

 

[Walter Victor]

The playing of other characters is really just to expand on the plot and help the player get to know the supporting cast. And also to explore sex scenes that Leslie isn't a part of.

I suspect that means we will have the opportunity to see sex scenes between two characters, neither of whom is the MC and one of whom might be a male? Whether I can handle that will depend on how it is handled. Options are always good in cases like these regardless of how it is handled. Just know that some will be repulsed no matter how you handle it.

Oh yeah, earlier you said that sisters would be introduced. If they are the MC's sisters, many (including me) would like to see an incest tag appear. If they're not related to him, no problem I guess.

 

[Acerbic Games]

I don't own the OP so I can't update it right away, but I've just published version 0.11.

The update includes revised art, around 12 minutes of animations and the conclusion to the first chapter.

For download links check my f95 Development thread, my

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(the game is not and never will be paywalled.) I will try and get this thread updated asap as well.

I appreciate any and all feedback and thanks for giving my game a chance!

 

[Acerbic Games]

I suspect that means we will have the opportunity to see sex scenes between two characters, neither of whom is the MC and one of whom might be a male?

That's correct.

Whether I can handle that will depend on how it is handled. Options are always good in cases like these regardless of how it is handled. Just know that some will be repulsed no matter how you handle it.

I'm sure you can handle it, I believe in you! lol

Oh yeah, earlier you said that sisters would be introduced. If they are the MC's sisters, many (including me) would like to see an incest tag appear. If they're not related to him, no problem I guess.

Without giving anything away story-wise, I will say the sisters are not related to MC. I currently don't see a path forward that would necessitate an incest tag, but I never say never.

 

[Canto Forte]

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[Canto Forte]

Not a Girl's Name v0.11 release

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[RIC0H]

MC Renamer

This will allow you to rename the MC (default Leslie) at the start of the game.
(note that some dialog may be off depending on the name you choose. Example "{player_name}?! That's a girl's name yo.")

This should work with future updates too.

 

[SvenVlad]

Looks promising

 

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[fabulous007]

Looks promising. I like the naughty main (?) female character.

 

[Faptime]

Ok, so the first girl is a recreational crack and coke user, who is a therapist. Thanks for the sex, Frank, but I will most likely not be calling you again. Also kinda annoyed that we don't have a choice as to whether MC snorts coke or not.

Some of the other girls in Canto's post have piqued my interest, though, so I'll check out the next update.