VN Others NTR Phone [v0.14 Beta] [Shybox]

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now reading what u post Shybox Im more positive about this project.
hopefully u can find a middle-way, using your own sketches but utilizing AI to enhance it.

as I wrote, I didn't enjoy it. but if this was a decision and later when u improved the coding u will add more context it could get better. u can read the thread in netorase phone, theres lots of suggestions that u can use yourself. but the phone need to be improved first.

another thing, u should include a ".bat" file or some "rungame" that will use the opengl3. yesterday when I wanted to try it it took me a bit to create the .bat file to run it.
 
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Well, the game was a pleasant surprise, cause tbh most of what i saw in ero games using this format (phone) has been html and using real porn images, which i can't say it's my favorite. So a game of the same kind that uses 2d art and focuses on ntr is just better imo.
Though what truly shined was the variety of tropes and themes present in the different heroines: netorase wife, bss ntr, slutty gal gf (favorite), qos gf/wife, etc. I'm not sure if you're going to give more chapters to all girls (like having ntr/nts after you start dating lilith and more naomi after accepting her slutty self ofc), but i like what's here so far.
What was annoying though is that having to replay the routes is a chore, while in a vn you would have simply been able to reload a previous choice to try out different outcomes, in here you have to replay the whole thing, and i don't think there's a way to skip the text either? not that i found at least.
I guess having some bios on the girls would be neat too, showing their relationship with mc, preferences, measurements, etc. Could be unlocked or unlockeable to avoid spoilers. Or anything more in dialogue to make the their relationship and ntr seem more believable/natural.
Also, i saw dev talking about using AI here, well i hope that doesn't reduce the quality of what's shown so far, cause the artwork is good and, that's one of the things that separates it from those other wife phone type games.
 
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mesoru said:
Well, the game was a pleasant surprise, cause tbh most of what i saw in ero games using this format (phone) has been html and using real porn images, which i can't say it's my favorite. So a game of the same kind that uses 2d art and focuses on ntr is just better imo.
Though what truly shined was the variety of tropes and themes present in the different heroines: netorase wife, bbs ntr, slutty gal gf (favorite), qos gf/wife, etc. I'm not sure if you're going to give more chapters to all girls (like having ntr/nts after you start dating lilith and more naomi after accepting her slutty self ofc), but i like what's here so far.
What was annoying though is that having to replay the routes is a chore, while in a vn you would have simply been able to reload a previous choice to try out different outcomes, in here you have to replay the whole thing, and i don't think there's a way to skip the text either? not that i found at least.
I guess having some bios on the girls would be neat too, showing their relationship with mc, preferences, measurements, etc. Could be unlocked or unlockeable to avoid spoilers. Or anything more in dialogue to make the their relationship and ntr seem more believable/natural.
Also, i saw dev talking about using AI here, well i hope that doesn't reduce the quality of what's shown so far, cause the artwork is good and, that's one of the things that separates it from those other wife phone type games.
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Thanks for your positive review. Don't worry, I won't use AI as it is right now. I will use it to improve my drawings there will be a quality and consistency increase rather than decrease. I think AI art has a bad stigma because non artists use it to make ton of nsfw games and flood the market. I'm not using the technology in that way at all. Also, yes there will be more content about each of the girls and I will flesh it all out once replayability gets quality of life updates such as (text speed change, skipping dialogue, saving, going back in dialogue) We make this game from scratch in the godot engine that's why it takes quite a while to get the basic renpy type features into the game.
 
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Shybox said:
Yes I made a post about him on my patreon LeStag and I communicated positively, but overall I realised I was just giving him promotion by talking about him. He never gave me any credit so I decided to delete the post that I made about him. I am salty about it yes. Do I think it's unfair? No, he definitely deserves his success. I learned that early marketing is important and that many people don't care if a game has bad AI artifacted art. (I decided to overwork my Art using AI to improve it because of that) I can fix the bad shit about AI art (bad hands, eyes, random things) I'll roll out an update about it soon. I hate AI art more than anybody tbh. If it wasn't for AI, LeStag wouldn't been able to "copy" my game idea this quickly. Anyways, I learned a lot from Netorase Phone and competition is good. It makes me want to try even harder than before.
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i mean nether of u thought up the idea of ntr with phone posts, might be the first game to have only the phone posts and nothing else but there's defiantly all kinds of ntr games that have using the phone as a way to see ntr
 
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luccel said:
i mean nether of u thought up the idea of ntr with phone posts, might be the first game to have only the phone posts and nothing else but there's defiantly all kinds of ntr games that have using the phone as a way to see ntr
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I never said the idea was so original that I invented visual novels with smartphones. That stuff has been there since steins gate and probably even before that. All i know is I made a game that is only a phone. I have not seen that anywhere. Granted I do not play that many visual novels. Then he made his game and had a post made about his project before me so some people think I'm the "unoriginal" one.

You can probably understand how that must kind of suck for me right?

I got the idea because there were a lot of webcomics that had a smartphone as a center piece of the theme. Such as "I just snooped through her smartphone".
And I thought it would be more interactive to choose your replies which makes it like a visual novel.

I wouldn't even have said anything if there wasn't some comments on here claiming he made the game first and I'm the "quick cashgrab" that came after.

Anyone would react the same way as me.
 
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One thing that is a bit annoying about this game is that you have to completely do all the conversations again if you want different ending. Would be nice to have the option to save or something, so I don't need to play through 2,533 lines of story again just to see a slightly different outcome.
 
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another thing is to add what each options do.
so

yes [+1 NTS, ending 1,3]
no [+1 NTR, ending 2,6,7]

that way its easy to replay, use fastforward and pick the route u want to try
 
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i love all ntr phone games, having your own style is great, AI does a good job at speeding up the art process. you could teach AI to learned off of your own hand drawn stuff then touch it up afterwards.


showing what stats/path you gain by picking different choices would be a good idea. but great job love the game so far would love more pictures but you've already mentioned the issues there. good luck
 
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bruhv314

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the game is really good, but it would be nice to have a list of all the endings, since there are so many it's difficult to keep count!
 
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I think this game needs all the functionalities of Ren'Py, the pacing should be more slow burn (especially the Rachel) and the choices should not be in the same place as the button to skip GRR

Aside from theses problems, I loved the game, all the girls are hot!
 
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Z3lda1980 said:
to bad i can't play this game. I need instal open gl. I don't know if i can trust that
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OpenGL is already installed on your computer, the error message tells you that the game needs to be started with a specific parameter to use OpenGL instead of Vulkan.

For Windows, you can use the attached file to run the game this way: download it, extract it in the same folder as the EXE file, and double click on the file "OpenGL version.cmd" to launch the game.
 
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gallery should be divided for each girl to keep it neat, also does anyone have full save or full gallery unlocked?
 
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