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There is 1 "bonus image" including pregnancy in the demo ! I may add a future tag section with next update, but for now, every tag is in the game.
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Not this time.
Or you can say that you'll kill their libido, sort of?
Ah, so you're basically just swinging then. Sharing wives.
Boring.
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The fate of each men will be different, but don't focus too much on the "fucking their wives" part, some won't have any wife ! The MC won't focus on "only" fucking their wives when he can destroy their lives ...
the sadists and the cucks are not gonna like this I fear. But this scratches the itch for me. I want more of these.
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daughters too?The fate of each men will be different, but don't focus too much on the "fucking their wives" part, some won't have any wife ! The MC won't focus on "only" fucking their wives when he can destroy their lives ...
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You're goddamn right.daughters too?
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this is the first game with such story i see, nice change of pace, more like this one would be appreciate it
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Why not have the MC end up being the one who cucks all the other guys and ends up being the village alpha, where his wife really wants him back and he turns that shit down.
Or revenge fucks her to the point he becomes the one she wants again and he leaves that shit in the trash again. Seems like the best revenge, take all the women, show the one who fucked around what she lost and then live happily every after.
There are extremely few of the 'revenge' stories on F95, if this became one it would stand out among all the other "I got cucked" versions, especially if the MC didn't end up a beta cuck like most of the others.
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Alright friend. You post this damn meme in almost every ntr game. Dont you think its getting a little outdated? overused?
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Why not both? Destroy their lives, take all their women, be it wife, girlfriend, sister, mother, cousin, childhood friend.The fate of each men will be different, but don't focus too much on the "fucking their wives" part, some won't have any wife ! The MC won't focus on "only" fucking their wives when he can destroy their lives ...
Basically become the NTR protag himself that is the feature of all the NTR games.
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"First of all, are you human ?" Incorrect space before the question mark. In English, there is no space before punctuation at the end of a sentence.
"It's only for the higher up you know... They love those kind of stuff." should be "it's only for the higher ups, you know... They love that kind of stuff." But also fucking what? What is this a reference to. And I guess "higher up" can be singular if it's just a genderless unspecified single entity. But "the higher ups" is a common enough thing to say that I wouldn't assume it was meant to be singular.
"Stats en everything... Boring stuff..." I assume you're using "en" instead of "and" as some kind of stylistic thing, but I'll note it in case you didn't realize it.
The punctuation issue is recurring. Question marks and exclamations.
"come back when you are 18, not 17 and 11months" missing a space.
"I think we both now the answer." missing k in know.
"You good looking man" You are a good-looking man.
"with a throbbing mustache..." WHY IS IT THROBBING
"step-daughter" cringe, if they're going to be family, be family!
"Or should I say "another wonderfull day"" wonderful should have just one L.
"Well,that could" missing space after the comma.
"forced to live in the wood near the witch hut" You probably mean woods, plural. It is common in English to refer to forests as "the woods"
"Ah, I'm the first, I should start," Perhaps better to end the sentence as "I'm the first," and make "I should start" a new sentence.
"Tips : echap > Quest log" echap?... What's echap? Also this a very large empty screen. I think locations look better when they're more condensed and detailed, but it's the first release so you probably know most maps need sprucing up.
"Can't I just sign a form that it's on my own risk?" Would be more natural to say "at my own risk"
"*The supervisor give you a small piece of paper, you quickly read it before signing it." Should be gives you a small piece of paper, and "read it before signing it" is a bit needlessly repetitious of "it", should remove the second it. You quickly read it before signing.
I'd change a lot structurally in many of the sentences, but it feels like nitpicking and imposing my style if I did it much.
"Just head south, keep the scythe. But remember it's a sawmill property, so if you break it, you'll have to repay it." Several errors and strange structuring. "It's a sawmill property" is wrong, just remove "a" there, and "you'll have to repay it" is strange in this context, more natural to say "you'll have to pay for it." But also I'd rewrite these two sentences as "Just head south. And keep the scythe, but remember it's sawmill property, so if you break it, you'll have to pay for it." because the scythe is entirely connected to the second sentence and has nothing to do with the first.
That worksite is definitely much too large. Aside from being completely empty and pointless, the exit to go to the forest is so far south that it's off the screen. It'd be a lot tighter and better to make that map a quarter of the size.
"You put 5 Sawmill woods in the cart." Should be logs, not woods.
"You spend most of your time with him, at work, but also outside." Remove the first comma. There are other ways to write it depending on what exactly you mean, though.
I shrug, I guess.
"Better grab a beer before !" Should be "Better grab a beer first!"
I wasn't paying attention, I hope that didn't say she poors you a beer.
"Quest update: undefined"
"Boring day uh ? But nothing a cold beer couldn't ease !" Should be "Boring day, huh? But nothing a cold beer can't ease!" Though, I think "fix" would be more natural than "ease" in this case.
"Yeah, a cold beer and the warm smile of the innkeeper." Nothing is objectively wrong, but I think it would be more natural to say "Yeah, a cold beer and [innkeeper's name]'s warm smile!"
"Like a dozens of people" Should be "Like a dozen other people" or "Like dozens of people" or "Like everyone else". All valid, just not what you have currently.
"She looks at your wallet Joe" should be "She looks at your wallet, Joe"
"waiting for her husband to comeback" missing a space between come and back. A comeback is a thing, but not what you mean here.
"He once go in the forest and no one saw him after that" could be "He went to the forest"
"It's funny to listen at him" You listen to things, not at them.
"my relation with my wife is at the bottom right now." Not technically wrong but very unnatural. It'd be more natural to say "my relationship with my wife" and "at the bottom" is also a little odd. Could be just "is struggling right now" or if you want give him a particular style of speaking it could be "is in the gutter" or "at an all-time low" or various things. But just go with how you feel like the character you're writing should speak, I won't argue. I'll try not to comment too much on what sounds natural and focus more on what's objectively a mistake.
"my step daughter hate me" should be "my step-daughter hates me"
"I know a lots of ways" should be "I know a lot of ways"
"Diner's waiting for me !" A diner is a restaurant, a dinner is the meal. "Dinner's waiting for me!"
"did you have diner already ?" "did you have dinner already?"
"Can't you use word ?" Microsoft is the devil, never use Word! Also it's "Can't you use words?"
"You smell sweat and alcohol it's awfull !" "You smell like sweat and alcohol, it's awful!"
I have completed undefined.
"Hey Robert how was your day ?" Needs a comma. "Hey Robert, how was your day?"
"Good and you ?" "Good, and you?"
"Well I didn't had to work, but I won't be here tomorrow." "Well, I didn't have to work, but I won't be here tomorrow." Note the comma after well, too.
"Did you ate already ?" "Did you eat already?"
"I had some trouble with your daug..." If you're going to trail off in the middle of a word, it's better to stop at dau or daugh, but I think you might have not meant to cut off the word at all. "daughter" would be more natural.
"She is 18yo already !" I suggest spelling out "years old" instead of "yo"
"Listen, I don't want to have this debat now" should be debate and also there are too many instances of "Listen" in this conversation.
Quest continued to update undefined.
"Not clean enough uh ?" "Not clean enough, huh?"
And then an empty, blank text box?
Personal opinion: The morphing graphic of the daughter holding her ass and swaying is bad. And I suspect it is also bloated in file size because it stutters slightly. A still frame would look nicer and compress better.
"FantASSti..." Missing a c at the end.
"this party in a near town" a nearby town.
"That's not what I mea..." mean? Or he just mutters under his breath and doesn't finish words.
"He told me you gonna give me some money" you're gonna give me some money.
"Can't you just act as adult for once, I can't have two teenager in here !" Could be "act adult" or "act like an adult" but not "act as adult." Also "two teenagers"
"Trust me I'm not acting as a teenager, I just told her that..." "Trust me, I'm not acting like a teenager, I just told her that—"
"That I needed to work for it, but not working like "actual work", he meant other thing but stopped to explain when you got here..." "That I needed to work for it, but not, like, "actual work," he meant the other kind, but stopped explaining when you got here..." You're also using ellipses (a trail of "...") a bit too often for my tastes but it's not a technical error.
The daughter has weird dialog. She just talks strangely to me. This is a personal opinion and not a technical problem.
"Hu..." Perhaps you mean "Heh..." or "Ha..."?
"money against sex" what. Fucking what. I think you mean "money for sex"
"for god sake !" for god's sake!
"I know how mens work". Men is already plural, so no S.
There are a ton of missing commas I don't mention, because whatever, they're just commas. This would be immensely long if I bothered with all of them.
I'll give you credit, you depict a frustrating and high stress home life. Cheating is not the answer, violence is.
"to the inn again uh ?" "to the inn again, huh?" Just make a note to change every single "uh" to "huh" because I don't see any instances where it should be "uh"
"and a lot fo beers" of beers
At the witch's hut, more of that morphing effect to look like swaying. I don't like it. It's my personal opinion.
"The girl just wave with her hands" I suggest "The girl just waves her hand" It would technically be fine to say "waves with her hands" but it would be much goofier of a mental image. Jazz hands! But at any rate "wave with her hands" is wrong. It's "waves" in either case.
"... Olivia , the local witch." Remove the space before the comma.
"and punsih her in many ways has I heard last night" "and punish her in many ways, as I heard last night"
"I can't let you leave without a punition" without a punishment
"or worse, should I say" "or worse, I should say"
"A cold sensation run through your spine." runs
Same usual comment about the morphing effect to give an illusion of animation. I think it looks bad. This is honestly the worst one yet, by a lot. Her arm is shrinking and expanding! This one is really not good on a technical level. The other ones were an opinion, this one is just factually bad.
"The news hit you like a punch, you have difficulty to breath." "The news hits you like a punch, you have difficulty breathing." But it's still awkward even corrected this way, I would suggest "The news hits you like a punch to the gut, leaving you winded." But the first correction is technically sound, so you can use it if you want it.
"She snap her fingers and you are gone." She snaps her fingers
"I don't know if it would be worse or no." worse or not
I'll stop here for the time being. I don't know if I want to bother continuing, but I might when I have time again.
Remove all the spaces before ? and ! and change "uh" to "huh". You seem distinctly second-language, and like you don't often speak English with native speakers. It could take a lot of revisions and practice to write more natural-seeming text, but a lot of people do manage it, I'm sure you can improve quickly with a little attentiveness. More practice reading English text or talking to native English speakers would go a long way too, but it's not strictly necessary.
For people thinking of checking the game out, I strongly recommend waiting.
"It's only for the higher up you know... They love those kind of stuff." should be "it's only for the higher ups, you know... They love that kind of stuff." But also fucking what? What is this a reference to. And I guess "higher up" can be singular if it's just a genderless unspecified single entity. But "the higher ups" is a common enough thing to say that I wouldn't assume it was meant to be singular.
"Stats en everything... Boring stuff..." I assume you're using "en" instead of "and" as some kind of stylistic thing, but I'll note it in case you didn't realize it.
The punctuation issue is recurring. Question marks and exclamations.
"come back when you are 18, not 17 and 11months" missing a space.
"I think we both now the answer." missing k in know.
"You good looking man" You are a good-looking man.
"with a throbbing mustache..." WHY IS IT THROBBING
"step-daughter" cringe, if they're going to be family, be family!
"Or should I say "another wonderfull day"" wonderful should have just one L.
"Well,that could" missing space after the comma.
"forced to live in the wood near the witch hut" You probably mean woods, plural. It is common in English to refer to forests as "the woods"
"Ah, I'm the first, I should start," Perhaps better to end the sentence as "I'm the first," and make "I should start" a new sentence.
"Tips : echap > Quest log" echap?... What's echap? Also this a very large empty screen. I think locations look better when they're more condensed and detailed, but it's the first release so you probably know most maps need sprucing up.
"Can't I just sign a form that it's on my own risk?" Would be more natural to say "at my own risk"
"*The supervisor give you a small piece of paper, you quickly read it before signing it." Should be gives you a small piece of paper, and "read it before signing it" is a bit needlessly repetitious of "it", should remove the second it. You quickly read it before signing.
I'd change a lot structurally in many of the sentences, but it feels like nitpicking and imposing my style if I did it much.
"Just head south, keep the scythe. But remember it's a sawmill property, so if you break it, you'll have to repay it." Several errors and strange structuring. "It's a sawmill property" is wrong, just remove "a" there, and "you'll have to repay it" is strange in this context, more natural to say "you'll have to pay for it." But also I'd rewrite these two sentences as "Just head south. And keep the scythe, but remember it's sawmill property, so if you break it, you'll have to pay for it." because the scythe is entirely connected to the second sentence and has nothing to do with the first.
That worksite is definitely much too large. Aside from being completely empty and pointless, the exit to go to the forest is so far south that it's off the screen. It'd be a lot tighter and better to make that map a quarter of the size.
"You put 5 Sawmill woods in the cart." Should be logs, not woods.
"You spend most of your time with him, at work, but also outside." Remove the first comma. There are other ways to write it depending on what exactly you mean, though.
I shrug, I guess.
"Better grab a beer before !" Should be "Better grab a beer first!"
I wasn't paying attention, I hope that didn't say she poors you a beer.
"Quest update: undefined"
"Boring day uh ? But nothing a cold beer couldn't ease !" Should be "Boring day, huh? But nothing a cold beer can't ease!" Though, I think "fix" would be more natural than "ease" in this case.
"Yeah, a cold beer and the warm smile of the innkeeper." Nothing is objectively wrong, but I think it would be more natural to say "Yeah, a cold beer and [innkeeper's name]'s warm smile!"
"Like a dozens of people" Should be "Like a dozen other people" or "Like dozens of people" or "Like everyone else". All valid, just not what you have currently.
"She looks at your wallet Joe" should be "She looks at your wallet, Joe"
"waiting for her husband to comeback" missing a space between come and back. A comeback is a thing, but not what you mean here.
"He once go in the forest and no one saw him after that" could be "He went to the forest"
"It's funny to listen at him" You listen to things, not at them.
"my relation with my wife is at the bottom right now." Not technically wrong but very unnatural. It'd be more natural to say "my relationship with my wife" and "at the bottom" is also a little odd. Could be just "is struggling right now" or if you want give him a particular style of speaking it could be "is in the gutter" or "at an all-time low" or various things. But just go with how you feel like the character you're writing should speak, I won't argue. I'll try not to comment too much on what sounds natural and focus more on what's objectively a mistake.
"my step daughter hate me" should be "my step-daughter hates me"
"I know a lots of ways" should be "I know a lot of ways"
"Diner's waiting for me !" A diner is a restaurant, a dinner is the meal. "Dinner's waiting for me!"
"did you have diner already ?" "did you have dinner already?"
"Can't you use word ?" Microsoft is the devil, never use Word! Also it's "Can't you use words?"
"You smell sweat and alcohol it's awfull !" "You smell like sweat and alcohol, it's awful!"
I have completed undefined.
"Hey Robert how was your day ?" Needs a comma. "Hey Robert, how was your day?"
"Good and you ?" "Good, and you?"
"Well I didn't had to work, but I won't be here tomorrow." "Well, I didn't have to work, but I won't be here tomorrow." Note the comma after well, too.
"Did you ate already ?" "Did you eat already?"
"I had some trouble with your daug..." If you're going to trail off in the middle of a word, it's better to stop at dau or daugh, but I think you might have not meant to cut off the word at all. "daughter" would be more natural.
"She is 18yo already !" I suggest spelling out "years old" instead of "yo"
"Listen, I don't want to have this debat now" should be debate and also there are too many instances of "Listen" in this conversation.
Quest continued to update undefined.
"Not clean enough uh ?" "Not clean enough, huh?"
And then an empty, blank text box?
Personal opinion: The morphing graphic of the daughter holding her ass and swaying is bad. And I suspect it is also bloated in file size because it stutters slightly. A still frame would look nicer and compress better.
"FantASSti..." Missing a c at the end.
"this party in a near town" a nearby town.
"That's not what I mea..." mean? Or he just mutters under his breath and doesn't finish words.
"He told me you gonna give me some money" you're gonna give me some money.
"Can't you just act as adult for once, I can't have two teenager in here !" Could be "act adult" or "act like an adult" but not "act as adult." Also "two teenagers"
"Trust me I'm not acting as a teenager, I just told her that..." "Trust me, I'm not acting like a teenager, I just told her that—"
"That I needed to work for it, but not working like "actual work", he meant other thing but stopped to explain when you got here..." "That I needed to work for it, but not, like, "actual work," he meant the other kind, but stopped explaining when you got here..." You're also using ellipses (a trail of "...") a bit too often for my tastes but it's not a technical error.
The daughter has weird dialog. She just talks strangely to me. This is a personal opinion and not a technical problem.
"Hu..." Perhaps you mean "Heh..." or "Ha..."?
"money against sex" what. Fucking what. I think you mean "money for sex"
"for god sake !" for god's sake!
"I know how mens work". Men is already plural, so no S.
There are a ton of missing commas I don't mention, because whatever, they're just commas. This would be immensely long if I bothered with all of them.
I'll give you credit, you depict a frustrating and high stress home life. Cheating is not the answer, violence is.
"to the inn again uh ?" "to the inn again, huh?" Just make a note to change every single "uh" to "huh" because I don't see any instances where it should be "uh"
"and a lot fo beers" of beers
At the witch's hut, more of that morphing effect to look like swaying. I don't like it. It's my personal opinion.
"The girl just wave with her hands" I suggest "The girl just waves her hand" It would technically be fine to say "waves with her hands" but it would be much goofier of a mental image. Jazz hands! But at any rate "wave with her hands" is wrong. It's "waves" in either case.
"... Olivia , the local witch." Remove the space before the comma.
"and punsih her in many ways has I heard last night" "and punish her in many ways, as I heard last night"
"I can't let you leave without a punition" without a punishment
"or worse, should I say" "or worse, I should say"
"A cold sensation run through your spine." runs
Same usual comment about the morphing effect to give an illusion of animation. I think it looks bad. This is honestly the worst one yet, by a lot. Her arm is shrinking and expanding! This one is really not good on a technical level. The other ones were an opinion, this one is just factually bad.
"The news hit you like a punch, you have difficulty to breath." "The news hits you like a punch, you have difficulty breathing." But it's still awkward even corrected this way, I would suggest "The news hits you like a punch to the gut, leaving you winded." But the first correction is technically sound, so you can use it if you want it.
"She snap her fingers and you are gone." She snaps her fingers
"I don't know if it would be worse or no." worse or not
I'll stop here for the time being. I don't know if I want to bother continuing, but I might when I have time again.
Remove all the spaces before ? and ! and change "uh" to "huh". You seem distinctly second-language, and like you don't often speak English with native speakers. It could take a lot of revisions and practice to write more natural-seeming text, but a lot of people do manage it, I'm sure you can improve quickly with a little attentiveness. More practice reading English text or talking to native English speakers would go a long way too, but it's not strictly necessary.
For people thinking of checking the game out, I strongly recommend waiting.
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That's definitely some good ideas !
I can't really say what I planned for the future, cause I don't want to spoil and because I might change some things, but it won't be a story about a MC looking at his wife being fucked and being like "Well ok that's life ! :/ ".
But I'm not 100% sure about what I want for the relation between MC / Wife, I think that I'll see how things unfold as I make the hero change throughout the story.
The revenge part will depend of every character, some will have a lot of things to "take", some would be a bit more hard to destroy.
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Everyone has something in their life they cherish.
That is what the 'hero' in this story would take. If it's a position, then the 'hero' would take that position. If it's glory, or fame, then the hero would become better at it than the guy he's getting revenge on and take the glory and fame for himself.
Again, EVERYONE has something in life they don't want to lose, that's what a good revenge hero would target and take away.
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Daughters or sisters tho? Maybe a co worker they have a crush on? Or maybe their female boss that's constantly degrading them.The fate of each men will be different, but don't focus too much on the "fucking their wives" part, some won't have any wife ! The MC won't focus on "only" fucking their wives when he can destroy their lives ...
Plenty of targets to choose.