VN Ren'Py NTR'ed by My Friend [v0.13.1] [NTR.ai]

[NTR.ai]

NTR is good! Bland “here is a super beautiful girl, and she fucks her boyfriend” makes for a very boring game after first scene.
NTR is good!

Real good ending is where girl becoming sexually liberated, have lots of sex and cums like crazy. When she is happy and drown in pleasure.
Male M.C. is not the only one who matters, you know. Corruption games, especially NTR are actually games that make at lest 2 actors, girl and lover — really happy and give them delight of sensuality.
As an outside observer, I could not care less about M.C. only. M.C. is not me, and his happiness in not a tiny bit more than girl's happiness and pleasure. I like girl's beauty and personality (except lying) and I care about her most of all.


Few animations still should be fixed in eyes area. I know, many do not care that much when they see tits, but I do. As a connoisseur of her beauty, I can't stand such a weak point. At least 2 animations around the eye area, as well as all future ones, should be of way better quality.
Please do her justice as she deserves.

Yeah, exactly what I feel about NTR.

Regarding animation quality, I actually hosted a poll, and it seems that the majority of members don’t mind it too much. That said, there are still some who do care, so I’ll definitely try to be more careful with these issues and raise the overall standard—at least when there are better animation options available.

However, for scenes that are more transitional, or erotic scenes involving the MC, I probably won’t focus as much on polishing those since those are not the core focus.

 

[Zulfiqar]

I really do like the visuals, not perfect as the eyes are pretty messed up a lot of the time in animated scenes but it's not hard to ignore. I guess I don't care for sleep sex in general but the whole idea that she just keeps her eyes closed and assumes it's her BF despite the dick being 3x bigger then assumes it's a dream and then goes to the bathroom and somehow just kinda falls on his huge cock and impales herself on it uh...

Like I'm not even against simple porn logic but this isn't really that, examples of simple "porn-logic" ntr plots include girl takes drugs/drinks too much and turns into a gigaslut or BF fails to satisfy her after she sees the bull's way bigger dick and spends days fantasizing about it (you sort of set this one up?). Those are widely criticized and played out but they work and I prefer them to this half-awake semi-sleep sex thing we've got here.

 

[MyUserName1234]

I really do like the visuals, not perfect as the eyes are pretty messed up a lot of the time in animated scenes but it's not hard to ignore. I guess I don't care for sleep sex in general but the whole idea that she just keeps her eyes closed and assumes it's her BF despite the dick being 3x bigger then assumes it's a dream and then goes to the bathroom and somehow just kinda falls on his huge cock and impales herself on it uh...

Like I'm not even against simple porn logic but this isn't really that, examples of simple "porn-logic" ntr plots include girl takes drugs/drinks too much and turns into a gigaslut or BF fails to satisfy her after she sees the bull's way bigger dick and spends days fantasizing about it (you sort of set this one up?). Those are widely criticized and played out but they work and I prefer them to this half-awake semi-sleep sex thing we've got here.

It was a dream dude.

 

[DesconhecidoBrrrrrrrr]

HEHE

 

[krinekron]

god..god..god..GOD

 

[Mcbuilder]

So when are we getting the public build any idea?

 

[bankrollback]

can some superhero share a new version, if you don't want to share with everyone, I'm ready to accept private messages, I promise to keep it a secret

 

[Artist271]

Seriously, don't combine monologues/thoughts or actions like "She looked at me" with dialogue, it's so frustratingly confusing and takes way too much from the game. The only thing carrying the game is the visuals and animations because I can't understand what the characters are trying to say most of the time especially in sex scenes.

Go look at moonripple lake, my new girlfriend or blurring the walls for reference on how to make your game more redeable, not copy how they write, but how to better organize your text.

Like.

Her action: she looks at pp with awh and satisfaction

Her dialogue with monologue : oh god, such big pp "how can it be so big?"

Something like this. Not have it all combined in one go and to better differentiate if it's a dialogue, a monologue or an action


Just want you at your full potential, can tell it's big.

 

[Mcbuilder]

Can anyone explain his recent posts?

 

[NTR.ai]

Seriously, don't combine monologues/thoughts or actions like "She looked at me" with dialogue, it's so frustratingly confusing and takes way too much from the game. The only thing carrying the game is the visuals and animations because I can't understand what the characters are trying to say most of the time especially in sex scenes.

Go look at moonripple lake, my new girlfriend or blurring the walls for reference on how to make your game more redeable, not copy how they write, but how to better organize your text.

Like.

Her action: she looks at pp with awh and satisfaction

Her dialogue with monologue : oh god, such big pp "how can it be so big?"

Something like this. Not have it all combined in one go and to better differentiate if it's a dialogue, a monologue or an action


Just want you at your full potential, can tell it's big.

Thanks for the feedback! I’ve played a bit of the titles you mentioned, and I still feel like I personally prefer having a narrator present. That said, I do admit there’s room for improvement in how I currently handle narration and text structure.

Here’s a plan I’ve come up with—let me know if you think it’s a good enough approach to address the problem:

• Narrator: Focus only on describing actions, atmosphere, and the environment. I’ve noticed that sometimes narration includes subjective interpretations of the characters’ actions, which I plan to move into the character’s inner monologue instead.
• Dialogue: Use 「」 to clearly mark spoken lines, so it’s easy to distinguish them from monologue.
• Monologue: Keep the same format as before, in italics.

Let me know what you think—I’d love to hear if this direction makes sense to you!

 

[NTR.ai]

So when are we getting the public build any idea?

5/15 around 23:00 (UTC +8)

 

[Maxx2265]

Maybe you also could add inner thoughts for Blake, at least for few scenes. It would be really interesting

 

[cuser]

Thoughts on the game so far.

Great art. Animations very promising but some need a bit of work (some stuttering and some distortions as the action progresses through a scene. Main concern is that the story is progressing a bit fast. The pace was perfect until just after her dream. Then it moved at jet speed to the end. Would like her fall to be much more gradual. Finally, the way the bathroom scene toward the end started was a bit of a stretch (no pun intended) - seems pretty unlikely that she'd hit the target so perfectly in the dark in one go. Still, all in all an exceptional work! Thank you for your efforts NTR.ai.

 

[Taryana]

I really do like the visuals, not perfect as the eyes are pretty messed up a lot of the time in animated scenes but it's not hard to ignore. I guess I don't care for sleep sex in general but the whole idea that she just keeps her eyes closed and assumes it's her BF despite the dick being 3x bigger then assumes it's a dream and then goes to the bathroom and somehow just kinda falls on his huge cock and impales herself on it uh...

Like I'm not even against simple porn logic but this isn't really that, examples of simple "porn-logic" ntr plots include girl takes drugs/drinks too much and turns into a gigaslut or BF fails to satisfy her after she sees the bull's way bigger dick and spends days fantasizing about it (you sort of set this one up?). Those are widely criticized and played out but they work and I prefer them to this half-awake semi-sleep sex thing we've got here.

She has a dream about the big dick, then walks into the bathroom, and he is just laying down on the bathroom floor with his dick ready to go?
Did I fail to see some scene in between or did she just have a fever dream and walk into the bathroom and demand dick?
Confused is all, not a criticism

 

[Cherubin25]

She has a dream about the big dick, then walks into the bathroom, and he is just laying down on the bathroom floor with his dick ready to go?
Did I fail to see some scene in between or did she just have a fever dream and walk into the bathroom and demand dick?
Confused is all, not a criticism

More like he was sitting on the toilet, possibly masturbating and she impaled herself with his dick. Yes, it is stupid even for porn logic. Dont think too much about it.

 

[shoreline1337]

okdev

 

[DressedToThrill]

NTR.ai Why did you remove the adorable mooing cow from the game startup .

Was this ever addressed? Will the mooing cow ever return? Was it removed so that it could be 'remastered' and reintroduced later? Is the developer milking us?! We will not be milked, you hear us?! We're not the cow! Moooooo-- I meant: Noooooo!

 

[carter15]

Honestly, I had no hopes for this game; expectations were low due to the fact that it was AI.

However, it's been a positive discovery and makes me want more. Congratulate to the developer, because they seem to be quite invested in improving the product by reading player feedback.

By the way, the game reminds me a lot of NTR'd by Clumsiness. I like that it follows the process of accidental NTR or blackmail, seeing the female character's internal struggle to reject what her body desires.

 

[darthbob]

Just wanted to say I am surprised how good the animations are. I don't know if it required a lot of time to render them but keep it up! Also don't worry about making them perfect. You could be spending 50% more time to make an animation from 90% perfect to 100% perfect. I'd rather have the game development continue and then go back to fix things that bothered you when you have time.

 

[jose_1]

5/15 around 23:00 (UTC +8)

Hey dev, I just went to your patreon to check it out, but I dont know what it going on. I cant see any preview or what games you are developing or whatever. You may want to improve how you portray you content. I saw NBMF which I guess is this game, but I dont know what is NBMD