Thanks again.
Penis shadow — I do not see anything wrong with it. It's just an example of her very beautiful face before the animated scene.
I will be clear. “The make or break” for most of the porn games is if the main female is hot and cute.
“Yes” — I like the game or V.N., even when it is not super high quality writing. If she has an unattractive face — pass. No matter the story and other qualities.
I do not read V.N. just for kinks, I focus on female beauty very passionately. And your girl is superb good!
Well... Except those examples.
In other animations without much face changes — I think they are good. Like massage and first sex scene.
In a masturbation animated scene, her eyes are unattractive and too different.
In a blowjob scene, her eyes are not so attractive, too muddy and reddish like she hasn't slept for 3 days, peeling the onion non-stop.
So, laser focused feedback on an issue I personally see — the eyes. The problem is her eyes in those.
Body — all good. Everything else on face, like nose and so on — alright. Eyes — not good. Just honest.
And yes. I will proofread 0.6.0. Looking forward to it, thanks for being serious on feedback, author! Unless I die to that time, lol.
But, as I said. Actually, “too much ambient sentences” is a really small neat pick of mine. It's fair I think, but small.
Unattractive face/eyes on the other hand — are really bothersome for me now... As I said — no beauty to admire — no interest in a girl and her sex and... You know, no motivation.
One look at her insanely hot and cute face and huge tits made me instantly very interested in the first place.
NTR with insane beauty? Sign me in!
This one and other images in a first post of this topic made me want her. That face, eyes, body, and tits made her very desirable.
Penis shadow — I do not see anything wrong with it. It's just an example of her very beautiful face before the animated scene.
I will be clear. “The make or break” for most of the porn games is if the main female is hot and cute.
“Yes” — I like the game or V.N., even when it is not super high quality writing. If she has an unattractive face — pass. No matter the story and other qualities.
I do not read V.N. just for kinks, I focus on female beauty very passionately. And your girl is superb good!
Well... Except those examples.
In other animations without much face changes — I think they are good. Like massage and first sex scene.
In a masturbation animated scene, her eyes are unattractive and too different.
In a blowjob scene, her eyes are not so attractive, too muddy and reddish like she hasn't slept for 3 days, peeling the onion non-stop.
So, laser focused feedback on an issue I personally see — the eyes. The problem is her eyes in those.
Body — all good. Everything else on face, like nose and so on — alright. Eyes — not good. Just honest.
And yes. I will proofread 0.6.0. Looking forward to it, thanks for being serious on feedback, author! Unless I die to that time, lol.
But, as I said. Actually, “too much ambient sentences” is a really small neat pick of mine. It's fair I think, but small.
Unattractive face/eyes on the other hand — are really bothersome for me now... As I said — no beauty to admire — no interest in a girl and her sex and... You know, no motivation.
One look at her insanely hot and cute face and huge tits made me instantly very interested in the first place.
NTR with insane beauty? Sign me in!
This one and other images in a first post of this topic made me want her. That face, eyes, body, and tits made her very desirable.
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