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Not necessarily, but why not go to the deep in this case and not use the names of the real characters and the name of the town of Coxville?
- May 29, 2018
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I think we passed the point where he can help us.
but he can watch.
- Aug 29, 2018
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Meh... I don't know if this one is going to stay as it is now but if so, maybe it need some more tags like Kinetic Novel (which will be strange with the school setting tag but no choices nor interactivity for now so...), Text based too (some games with... more art and things than this one.... have this tag and here, we can't say there is many other things than text...)
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I've made a progress report on my Patreon. I will soon make a post here as well regarding the development cycle and public release date, as well as addressing some concerns mentioned in this forum.
Stay Safe Buddy.
-TopTierStory
- Jan 11, 2020
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Greetings.
It was interesting to read the feedback on this forum as I couldn’t tell if people enjoyed my game or not. Regardless, I’ve learned a lot from getting feedback from private emails and having people reach out to me to continue the game.
Right now Chapter 2 is available on my Patreon. It will be released for free 12 days from now on F95. I’ve also partially remade Chapter 1 taking the feedback from the forum into consideration.
For some background, I actually wrote much of the story a year ago. I wanted to create a game where characters felt real in a hyper-realistic sexually charged world. I wanted my story to have emotional stakes, mystery but most importantly, a lot of nasty coitus. If any of you go on to my Hentai Foundry page, you see that my writing style tends to gear toward very rough and lewd diction. Just a “bit* filthy, but the good kind, ya know? I think word porn is a very powerful tool.
To be completely transparent, the content of Chapter 2 includes a decent amount of hard-hitting teasing scenes but there are no traditional sex scenes... yet. (I know a lot of people care about that stuff particularly, and I feel it’s only fair to let you know before you try to join my Patreon.) But I still feel Chapter 2 is very compelling in itself in terms of story and the sexual atmosphere of the characters. Regardless, the “real” *ahem* coital scenes will start in Chapter 3. I’m not a big fan of tremendous build and no payoff. I don’t want to be that kind of Dev. I don’t intend to be that kind of Dev. The story is written with an exponential curve in mind where, each Chapter will be larger than the last, and the number of *the nasty* scenes increase per Chapter. The flow of the story complements this structure, so please be patient. We’ll get there soon.
For those of you who aren’t able to wait, I did actually write a sizable two-chapter spin-off Story labeled “Swim Team Ass Bang”. The main focus of the story is Michelle Guzzler, one of the main FMC of Nutville Paradox (The woman dressed in gray sportswear). Hopefully, you all can see exactly what kind of writer I am, and what I intend to do with this story. This Spin-Off is just a taste.
You can find it here:
On another note, Chapter 2 took some time mainly because creating actual “art” to support my writing has proven to be a tremendous challenge but I think I’ve gotten decent enough to where it’s serviceable. Don’t get me wrong, I'm not the top-of-the-line Picasso, but I do try. A lot. And I will always continue to try improve as I'm studying new techniques every day.
Chapter 3 will not take as long. I’ve gotten better at organizing my work and became a more efficient coder. As for the release date for Chapter 3, I don’t have one quite yet.
In any case, if you’re interested in playing my game, play it for the story. Play it for the twists, the emotional drama, and of course, the rough nasty scenes. Please support through Patreon if any of that appeals to you, as it motivates me to work harder on the game for all of you. But even if you can’t, leaving a like or even telling me your thoughts on the game, is also enough. I feel like a lot of people don’t know this, but your favorite Dev’s really do like and look forward to the feedback on their game. Whether criticism or praise, it motivates us to work harder for all of you. So if you enjoy or hate it, let us know. Have a dialogue. Build a friendly community.
I would one day love to work full-time on my games, so any support is deeply appreciated.
Let me know what you guys think. Till next time. Stay safe everyone.
(Also please follow Dargoden on his Patreon and twitter everyone. He helped sketch the banner on my Patreon, but I rendered it myself. He's been an immense help in helping me hone my digital art skills.)
-TopTierStory.
It was interesting to read the feedback on this forum as I couldn’t tell if people enjoyed my game or not. Regardless, I’ve learned a lot from getting feedback from private emails and having people reach out to me to continue the game.
Right now Chapter 2 is available on my Patreon. It will be released for free 12 days from now on F95. I’ve also partially remade Chapter 1 taking the feedback from the forum into consideration.
For some background, I actually wrote much of the story a year ago. I wanted to create a game where characters felt real in a hyper-realistic sexually charged world. I wanted my story to have emotional stakes, mystery but most importantly, a lot of nasty coitus. If any of you go on to my Hentai Foundry page, you see that my writing style tends to gear toward very rough and lewd diction. Just a “bit* filthy, but the good kind, ya know? I think word porn is a very powerful tool.
To be completely transparent, the content of Chapter 2 includes a decent amount of hard-hitting teasing scenes but there are no traditional sex scenes... yet. (I know a lot of people care about that stuff particularly, and I feel it’s only fair to let you know before you try to join my Patreon.) But I still feel Chapter 2 is very compelling in itself in terms of story and the sexual atmosphere of the characters. Regardless, the “real” *ahem* coital scenes will start in Chapter 3. I’m not a big fan of tremendous build and no payoff. I don’t want to be that kind of Dev. I don’t intend to be that kind of Dev. The story is written with an exponential curve in mind where, each Chapter will be larger than the last, and the number of *the nasty* scenes increase per Chapter. The flow of the story complements this structure, so please be patient. We’ll get there soon.
For those of you who aren’t able to wait, I did actually write a sizable two-chapter spin-off Story labeled “Swim Team Ass Bang”. The main focus of the story is Michelle Guzzler, one of the main FMC of Nutville Paradox (The woman dressed in gray sportswear). Hopefully, you all can see exactly what kind of writer I am, and what I intend to do with this story. This Spin-Off is just a taste.
You can find it here:
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On another note, Chapter 2 took some time mainly because creating actual “art” to support my writing has proven to be a tremendous challenge but I think I’ve gotten decent enough to where it’s serviceable. Don’t get me wrong, I'm not the top-of-the-line Picasso, but I do try. A lot. And I will always continue to try improve as I'm studying new techniques every day.
Chapter 3 will not take as long. I’ve gotten better at organizing my work and became a more efficient coder. As for the release date for Chapter 3, I don’t have one quite yet.
In any case, if you’re interested in playing my game, play it for the story. Play it for the twists, the emotional drama, and of course, the rough nasty scenes. Please support through Patreon if any of that appeals to you, as it motivates me to work harder on the game for all of you. But even if you can’t, leaving a like or even telling me your thoughts on the game, is also enough. I feel like a lot of people don’t know this, but your favorite Dev’s really do like and look forward to the feedback on their game. Whether criticism or praise, it motivates us to work harder for all of you. So if you enjoy or hate it, let us know. Have a dialogue. Build a friendly community.
I would one day love to work full-time on my games, so any support is deeply appreciated.
Let me know what you guys think. Till next time. Stay safe everyone.
(Also please follow Dargoden on his Patreon and twitter everyone. He helped sketch the banner on my Patreon, but I rendered it myself. He's been an immense help in helping me hone my digital art skills.)
-TopTierStory.
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- Oct 26, 2017
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Nice Kinetic novel? 
It would be nice to not have to read a hundred lines of dialogue before the picture changes. But that's just me.
Nice art and story.
Tanya Nutbuster, Michelle Guzzler
It would be nice to not have to read a hundred lines of dialogue before the picture changes. But that's just me.Nice art and story.
Tanya Nutbuster, Michelle Guzzler
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- Jul 6, 2018
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Well, shit those are some Ahhh............."well rounded" woman, if there is some story or the dialogues are interesting enough, then I don't really care for the aesthetics, I just want to see my boy motorboard one of these women at least once.
From what I read the dev wants to have some story to go with the lewd so that's nice, at first glance the arwork may give the impression that it's a parody of sorts but ill wait to see more of the content before making a review.
From what I read the dev wants to have some story to go with the lewd so that's nice, at first glance the arwork may give the impression that it's a parody of sorts but ill wait to see more of the content before making a review.
- Jul 20, 2017
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