Thanks now I don't have to waste my time. Some 1.0 games are an hour with the first 1-2 girls fleshed out some are 1-2 scenes 5 mins of play time. I don't get why bother no matter how wicked beautiful it is we are here for the game play. IE: The Redburns meh graphics but it's in my top 5 because it's fun to play. This game on the other hand sounds like an into without any sex. LolololzLooks very well-made, great renders, good writing but zero choices (almost a kinetic novel) and zero lewd scenes not even nudes or undressing. I understand if you want a slow paced adult VN, but you have to throw some "meat" to the base as a showcase of good things that will come if they stick to your game, it could be an undressing scene, peeking or whatever. Otherwise, this good quality game will not go far. This is an Adult site first and foremost.
I agree. One thing though: It is Town Council not Town Counsil. You give counsel.I'm enjoying this so far. Its nice to see world building and proper grammar and spelling for the most part. I also do hope that at the very least there will be more decisions/choices in the future. I get that writing branching plots and such is a pain in the butt, but I, personally, am more attached to those kinds of stories than kinetic novels. So saying that, I'll see how this moves going forward, its a very nice start. (I'm a fan of the girl that looks like mordred)
I mean, there is a few typos and misused words, but with what I normally read its far better than the normal. It's not perfect, but its significantly better than what I'm used to.I agree. One thing though: It is Town Council not Town Counsil. You give counsel.
There is a choice. You can choose to intervene or ignore the little girl. By that one choice, its no longer a kinetic novel. Like if we really want to complain about it, how about things that get tagged femdom for a single footjob or because the MC eats out a girl one time? I'm just saying, if they tag things over a 10 second scene, then the reverse holds true as well; It has a choice the player makes, thus not kinetic.Needs the Kinetic Novel tag as there is nothing to do other than read (besides name the character and move a couple of draughts pieces). If this is meant to be a "prologue" it still needs choices or interaction moments - when training the player could be given the chance to block a swing, the player should be given the option to learn more about Knights instead of reading a large amount of exposition that doesn't matter right now, etc.
Renders look good, setting isn't terrible, but the lack of being able to interact/make choices means the story is much less interesting.
A couple of choices doesn’t make it a game either. Retrieving the Past has a couple of choices it’s tagged as a Kinetic Novel. I’m sure it’s not alone in that fact too.There is a choice. You can choose to intervene or ignore the little girl. By that one choice, its no longer a kinetic novel. Like if we really want to complain about it, how about things that get tagged femdom for a single footjob or because the MC eats out a girl one time? I'm just saying, if they tag things over a 10 second scene, then the reverse holds true as well; It has a choice the player makes, thus not kinetic.