VN Ren'Py Abandoned Obrenor: The Outcast Prince [Ch. 4b] [Lazy Tiger Studio]

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Overview:
You are the youngest prince of the wealthy kingdom of Obrenor. Rejected by your father in favor of your two older brothers, you act as the royal family's representative to the common people of your kingdom, defending them from danger and aiding them when disaster strikes. Lately, things in the outer reaches of Obrenor have been changing. Darkness is creeping across your borders, and the common folk live in ever-increasing fear of the unknown. Safely insulated in the capitol, your father and the rest of the nobility refuse to listen to your warnings, but something is wrong in Obrenor, and you may be the only one who can stop it. With your faithful guard at your side, you must set off to protect your people. You'll meet new friends, battle your kingdom's enemies, and maybe even find love along the way. . .
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Updated: 02/Sep/2018​

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Censorship: None
Version: 4b
OS: Windows/Mac/Linux
Language: English
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[Catwashere]

Another fantasy game awesome i'll have to check it out!

 

[Andromort]

Um, chaptOr 1?

 

[macadam]

Um, chaptOr 1?

chaptOr .... with an O ... the number... like 0.1 .. chaptOr.1

:tf::tf:

 

[Ashla]

Looks very promising.

 

[Morpheus668]

Changing your name doesnt seem to matter much. Everyone still refers to you as Tristan

 

[Akamari]

Too short to say anything except that visuals are very good.

But I really like what is written on the patreon page. I don't think I've seen a fantasy themed story-driven game with adult elements around all those porn-driven games with lackluster story elements.

Next updates will tell.

 

[thecardinal]

Changing your name doesnt seem to matter much. Everyone still refers to you as Tristan

That's funny, I made the same mistake in my game too. XD

You make the name change feature in the code, so but forget to find and replace it with the variable in the brackets. these guys: []

Not my style of game, but really nice renders!

 

[LazyTigerStudio]

Changing your name doesnt seem to matter much. Everyone still refers to you as Tristan

Sorry about that!

You make the name change feature in the code, so but forget to find and replace it with the variable in the brackets. these guys: []

This is exactly what I did xD. I changed the very first one for a test and forgot to change the rest. After that I just hit enter and didn't put in a new name. I've fixed it and I'll up load the fix shortly.

 

[thecardinal]

Sorry about that!



This is exactly what I did XD. I changed the very first one for a test and forgot to change the rest. After that I just hit enter and didn't put in a new name. I've fixed it and I'll up load the fix shortly.

Do you render with Iray? It looks really good if it is. I can only get hair to look that good using Octane.

 

[Deleted member 167032]

Renders look good, will have to play to see what can be seen. ...

 

[Jimbog]

The writing is good and the renders are really nice. It is too early to tell but I am hoping for a really good story. Looking forward to the next instalment.

 

[LazyTigerStudio]

Do you render with Iray? It looks really good if it is. I can only get hair to look that good using Octane.

Yes I do use Iray and thanks. I'm really glad everyone so far seems to like them. The only thing I really do with the hair is some minor shading tweaks most of my time I spend on lighting

Also fixed the name bug and uploaded version 0.1.1 it to the

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page if someone wants to update the main post.

 

[groove888]

Looks great but kinda too short to tell.

I'm curious : Roughly how much developping time did this take ?

 

[Retro]

Yes I do use Iray and thanks. I'm really glad everyone so far seems to like them. The only thing I really do with the hair is some minor shading tweaks most of my time I spend on lighting

Also fixed the name bug and uploaded version 0.1.1 it to the

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page if someone wants to update the main post.

it is done

 

[DawnCry]

I don't know what to say about the game for now, introduction a bit on the short side, no list of fetishes and I think I need more context or lore.

For now it's quite generic, don't take me wrong but the choices and everything else is quite standard, the only thing that I truly liked are the renders.

Here is what I recommend:

-Think hard about the list of fetishes, from what I have seen this is what mostly call the players at first, later on they may remain for the story but it's important.

-Give more information about what you want to do, is it a pure visual novel?, will it have a free roam part like going around the castle, to the forest or other things?.

-Don't make the most usual mistake of any visual novel, that is, always having the player to choose the option that increases affection. If you find an amazon tha says that all males should be slaves, you shouldn't say that she is right to increase affection because it will be quite negative later on. It's normal for people to have different views and the conflict of them is valuable.

-Try to make the interactions with the characters something meaningful, one thing that I saw with a lot of potential is what the telltale series did with batman and choices, having a few points at which the character will remember your actions and based of it would be optimal, but the important thing is that interactions are useful and not something just to earn or lose affection.

-Make sure the story is interesting and that it truly reflects player's choices.

 

[Gomly1980]

Spoiler: Yes please....

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I'm sold.... She has a couple of great plot points.

 

[Jimbog]

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I'm sold.... She has a couple of great plot points.

I wholeheartedly agree. However I am a little concerned about future sexual situations given that one potential female partner has a really big sword and the other can incinerate you.

 

[LazyTigerStudio]

I'm curious : Roughly how much developping time did this take ?

It's hard to say. There was a learning curve for the tools and we had several big "life happens" moments. So we didn't keep track of actual hrs spent working. The next few chapters are going to give us a much better idea of how long it takes at which point I'd be glad to give you a number. Right now it would just be a guess and probably a bad one.

I don't know what to say about the game for now, introduction a bit on the short side, no list of fetishes and I think I need more context or lore.

For now it's quite generic, don't take me wrong but the choices and everything else is quite standard, the only thing that I truly liked are the renders.

Here is what I recommend:

-Think hard about the list of fetishes, from what I have seen this is what mostly call the players at first, later on they may remain for the story but it's important.

-Give more information about what you want to do, is it a pure visual novel?, will it have a free roam part like going around the castle, to the forest or other things?.

-Don't make the most usual mistake of any visual novel, that is, always having the player to choose the option that increases affection. If you find an amazon tha says that all males should be slaves, you shouldn't say that she is right to increase affection because it will be quite negative later on. It's normal for people to have different views and the conflict of them is valuable.

-Try to make the interactions with the characters something meaningful, one thing that I saw with a lot of potential is what the telltale series did with batman and choices, having a few points at which the character will remember your actions and based of it would be optimal, but the important thing is that interactions are useful and not something just to earn or lose affection.

-Make sure the story is interesting and that it truly reflects player's choices.

Thanks for the feedback! This is our first game and we welcome opinions. All of your points are good ones and we share most of them. We did have other ideas for fetishes instead of a fixed list but if that's what players want we may have to adapt our idea. =)

D,

 

[DawnCry]

Thanks for the feedback! This is our first game and we welcome opinions. All of your points are good ones and we share most of them. We did have other ideas for fetishes instead of a fixed list but if that's what players want we may have to adapt our idea. =)

D,

The thing is that people don't usually like surprises with fetishes, I mean you can add minor ones during development but at the very least you should say the main fetishes of the game.