Oops, that's my mistake. No, v002 ends on Day 6. I should have removed the Day7 script when building this release.
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That could be a good way to go. I honestly didn't really like how that whole reveal went. There was basically no set-up or warning from Jenny, and then the MC was ignored immediately. It felt kinda shitty and confusing. It being an AVN, I was expecting an invitation or something, but it was more bragging/teasing, but the teasing part wasn't really earned by a history, so it came off closer to rubbing his nose in not being there.
Not a deal breaker for the game for me, but it did really make Jenny drop in my estimations, because, yeah, she seemed to be using the MC in those moments, rather than them using each other/building something together. A lot about Jenny seems a bit confusing to me, but I'm willing to see what Amomy is going to do with it.
It shouldn't feel like teasing, so if it does I should address it. It is meant to be playful and to show that Jenny isn't as uptight as she might seem, and to setup future group events giving MC the knowledge that Jenny and Grace aren't the jealous, possesive types.
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It might be good to put in a branching decision when Jenny does get back to the MC.
Option A: Sure, come over.
Option B: Not tonight, other plans came up. Rain cheque?
Option C: No. I've got to think about some things. See you at work.
Or something like that, all with associated +/-s.
Another option would be to have the friends with benefits reveal happen before a decision to go deeper with Jenny.
I probably would have chosen Option B the first time, waiting to hear how complex a relationship web I would be stepping into if I followed Jenny down her path.
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Recalling my first impressions the pics went from 'We're hanging out chilling together' to 'Fooling around' to 'Fucking and ignoring you now' really fast. It was also confusing in Jenny being very interested in the MC, but her behaviour not really matching up. Just gives a BJ, does not accept anything in return (I was suspecting period at first, but that seems less likely), says she wants to stay in bed, then immediately calls a ride and kind of leaves MC hanging. And the MC knows (after gym visit) the only thing Jenny and Grace had was a mani/pedi and hanging out together. So later when the pics came it may have unintentionally had a taunting subtext to it. I could see that strategy being used for a FemDom humiliation route. Which may be why it yucked some peoples' yum.
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I just want to say that I have nothing against lesbian content
and although I'm monogamous if I'm not with a girl I don't care who she's with or what she does
but I think it kind of sucks for those people who like Jenny and don't want to share her with anyone only to find out later
that she is in a relationship with someone else out of nowhere
I'm still playing the game so that hasn't been revealed to me yet but if it comes out of nowhere without any warning
I could see how people would feel hurt and upset
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Maybe just ask the MC if she wants to see some of the 'fun' Jenny and Grace have had together, but don't make it current? Not that they have broken up, just they aren't active in this small window, so if some players want to opt out they can, or can ask Jenny to go monogamous, or something like that. Just workshopping ideas.
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Thinking about it a bit more, you could keep it in as a potential example of poor communication. Everyone is young here, so sometimes what they are trying to convey doesn't come off 100%, but could lead to deeper conversations about sexual compatibility, communicating what they want, that sort of thing.
Game-wise though that may create branches/tags that make creating it more difficult. But it would be pretty cool to see some mistakes and flubs develop into growth and understanding (self and otherwise). Just more peanuts from the gallery.
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Okay. I wouldn't even bother trying this if it's anything like what that guy said. I hate lesbians or bi almost as much as NTR and if a bitch is fucking others behind the MC's back, I ALWAYS think it's Lez-NTR. So that's it. And if that shit is still being rubbed in my face, then BIG NO THANKS
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I support the idea of asking Jenny for a monogamous relationship
although I think Jenny was wrong for getting involved with the MC without telling him that she was in a relationship
I don't care if the relationship is serious or not it is still dishonest and wrong
and then Jenny acts like her lying and keeping secret is not wrong and no big deal
I wish we had the option to call her out on it
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I kind of disagree with you. Up until the monogamy talk (boyfriend/girlfriend, etc.) people don't have any duty to report who else they are dating. But, the closer you go to that talk, the more naturally hurtful that reveal will likely become. So if someone indicates that they are interested in exclusive dating, and the other party doesn't speak up at that point, that's when it starts to get to dicier territory. Personally, I think as long as they make it clear they aren't looking for an exclusive thing right then, that's all they need to disclose, with the * that it may blow up in their faces if dates cross paths.
yikes ya if thats whats happening and there is no way to stopit i guess im out
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I like the Jenny model one of the few games that does her right. So far the game is good I hope there will be animations in the future. I'm going to assume this is probably not a Harem. Maybe only with Jenny and Grace but others I can see some bad shit happen later.
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You come off as a bigot. Not sure if you are understanding and accepting of coming off that way, but if you weren't, just letting you know.
thanks for the reply but it sounds like this wont be for me im not into anysort of les/bi stuff evn when its in threesomes them having their own thing going on sounds dangerously close to ntr for me
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again I don't care if someone is a lesbian or whatever
if were not in a relationship be happy with whoever makes you happy
but if you are with me I think of it as cheating / Ntr
especially if you were with someone before we got together and you didn't even tell me
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Sounds like the Dev is thinking of some revisions, so you likely don't have to throw the whole game away. Also, haven't seen those signs on other routes.
But it's fair to set boundaries in relationships you want, and it would be good if the game let you do that.
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Taking this thought experiment further, would you want the option to tell other LIs about each other? For example if you started the Jenny, Eva, and Maria paths, what would you want the MC to say to the others, and when?
You make some really good points, and I can see a way to 'soften the blow', so to speak. There are a lot of hints given at the bar with Jenny/Jackson/Grace on Friday night that Jenny and Grace have something going on, but I could be more overt with it. The monagomy/exclusivity ultimatums will definitely come later in the game. None of these characters are exclusive with each other at this early point in their relationships. Jenny and Grace are not in a relationship, they are friends with benefits, so there is no cheating happening with anyone. Without spoiling anything, there are three different endings planned if you're on the Jenny or Grace path.
Some of the LI's are fine with it, others are going to want monogamy. But it's still very early in all of the relationships, so again, no one is exclusive yet. Jenny leaving on Saturday morning is likely going to get an update in the future because, continuity wise, you're right. All she has going on is getting a mani/pedi, so she shouldn't be rushing out. I'm taking all this feedback into consideration, and I appreciate the ideas.
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I think this game should probably have multiple on and off routes for the LIs, if it is going for more of a grounded slice of life style. Having the options to nope out of Jenny once more is revealed, and try again at Eva (if the player wanted the mono route with Jenny) if you had passed earlier. And just to reinforce, this is the first week the MC is working and properly in town, meeting people. That's extremely fast to ask someone to give you their entire history. Especially since it's not a full week, but rather a few encounters spread across the week.
Thinking of it from the game dev side, hard separating LIs will, at some point, probably require content for each LI for each day. Which sounds like a lot of work. But worth it, if that's the game the dev wants to make.