I played a previous version and this one and although there was some imporvement on the writting, it isn't that good yet. As with most entries here, the lack of meaningful choices makes this game more of a story than an actual game, and the kinectic novel tag would be fitting.
For example, it would expand the scope of the game dramatically but being able to choose if MC is a virgin or if she was promiscuous back in college would add a great initial setup for more fun stories (such as a "virgin to slut" run, a "fucks everyone but the cuck" playstyle, a "back to her old ways" path). I'd also love to choose to avoid the sex scenes with the BF (it's what I personally like on NTR games), but the sex scenes with him are unavoidable and uninteresting. But all of that might be too much. This and adding more meaningful choices (kiss or not to kiss the boss, drink or not drink at the party, etc) is the ideal improvement for your game, that alone would make it great.
But the writing can also be improved dramatically if you describe what's going on instead of just adding the characters' dialogues and adding one image and expecting that to be a good scene. One of the scenes goes like this:
Overall, this has potential, there are few good office themed games, but potential is all this has. Hope to see improvement on future releases.
For example, it would expand the scope of the game dramatically but being able to choose if MC is a virgin or if she was promiscuous back in college would add a great initial setup for more fun stories (such as a "virgin to slut" run, a "fucks everyone but the cuck" playstyle, a "back to her old ways" path). I'd also love to choose to avoid the sex scenes with the BF (it's what I personally like on NTR games), but the sex scenes with him are unavoidable and uninteresting. But all of that might be too much. This and adding more meaningful choices (kiss or not to kiss the boss, drink or not drink at the party, etc) is the ideal improvement for your game, that alone would make it great.
But the writing can also be improved dramatically if you describe what's going on instead of just adding the characters' dialogues and adding one image and expecting that to be a good scene. One of the scenes goes like this:
This is barely a scene, and it gives us nothing. A simple improvement to it would be describing the situation further, adding feeling to it.
I got tired of writing the whole thing but you get the idea.
Overall, this has potential, there are few good office themed games, but potential is all this has. Hope to see improvement on future releases.
