Thanks for taking my criticism on the chin and not getting defensive about it. I enjoy a lot of your game. It's just that by the time the action really starts to pick up, you've already been going for hours and hours and it starts to feel tedious. I'll probably continue it a bit more today and see how it goes now that I'm just past the "plug" scene. I'm curious to see where the story moves to.
It's good to hear that you've learned a lot between starting the project and now. That's how it should be. This also brings up the point of how Early Access releases can really hurt a title unless you have a very clear start/middle/end laid out from the get go. Going back to the pervy cops, for example. They start out spying on her,making lewd comments from day one. Sheriff gets her a new outfit to check out her body, spanks her a bit, all within the first week. By week 2, she's dating, loved and protected. These continuity issues happen when you're trying to make content for the next update instead of making content for the good of the game as a whole. It's far too common in a lot of media; tv/movies/books etc. But the story matters most. Well that...and good cumshot renders.
I hope you keep making games, Key'. You have a great knack for writing and dark scenarios and I hope your next title is even darker and grittier!