- Thread starter DarkWolf2055
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Anyway, she's really cute and I love stories where the daughter is a seductive little minx preying on poor daddy who is trying not to think of her like that, so this is definitely one to watch.
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what the fuck is up with the back of the MC's head. Dude's hair looks like he glued hair to the back of his head after chemotherapy.
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Hey Dev, Which Booty shorts did you use for this pic?
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the typos and misused pronouns are fine and fixable, as it's obviously just some translation artifacts.
the language in this game, however, is bad. it's hamfisted and forced, with no natural sense of pacing or flow in the conversations.
additionally, the girl's dialogue has no consistency, bouncing weirdly between child-like and adult-like, and often drifts into a weird and unnatural phrasing that makes me think the author picked up english from reading socially isolated 4channers waxing poetic over their favorite anime characters
it could be partly from translation, using words that are out of place and sentence structure that is overly formal and complex for a conversation between two close people
but it's definitely offputting. the language is barely above machine translation as it is.
renders are well done
the language in this game, however, is bad. it's hamfisted and forced, with no natural sense of pacing or flow in the conversations.
additionally, the girl's dialogue has no consistency, bouncing weirdly between child-like and adult-like, and often drifts into a weird and unnatural phrasing that makes me think the author picked up english from reading socially isolated 4channers waxing poetic over their favorite anime characters
it could be partly from translation, using words that are out of place and sentence structure that is overly formal and complex for a conversation between two close people
but it's definitely offputting. the language is barely above machine translation as it is.
renders are well done
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That is the exact issue. Especially Castilian Spanish. I worked with a Writer a bit ago who had the same issue. I speak Spanish, but I speak Latin-American Spanish.
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this game has great potential. heres to hoping that the dev stays true to it and keeps coming out with solid updates 
You are going to have to be more specific if you want help. What is not working? Is there an error?
no! when I open the exe file, it suppose to be start right ? but it wasn't. the window just appears and remains as below.