Jonah Arkon

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Sep 22, 2017
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interesting like the way it flows, story could use some twicking and made more solid. I would suggest making the daughter a little less proactive for a relationship it should be earned and not jumped into.
 
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Skallabjorn

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Jun 29, 2017
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I took it a step further and fixed all the instances when she called the MC by his proper name, replaced with dad or daddy.
Just a note - This was written to go with the walkthrough mod. If you do not have the walkthrough mod installed, you will get errors in the two choice locations due to the game not recognizing the [mGR] command in script.rpy.
 
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