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I mean, I still feel meh to it even without the new story. Though, honestly, I think you missed my point on the story. What they had before, tried and covered in jizzum as it was, felt better than the tournament idea to me. If anything, their attempt at adding a different fleshed out story, the act of being "more creative", was the problem.The plot feels kinda cheesy now, which isn't helped by Nottheinfinitygems(tm), with Joe not being a hero but being an opportunist (making "Hero" in the title invalid). Before, the story was like the original Metroid: Here's a thing, now do it. Simple, overdone, but you can't really fuck it up. It had a charm to it. The new one feels like it was added in simply because it met a standard that nobody actually asked for. (unless the people on Patreon wanted it, it's not like I can tell)
This part cracked me upUsing your example, I looked into a brothel expecting to find a good bit of arse but found some twink dressed in tight bright pink clothes, who could swallow his fist, saying "owo Fuck me daddywaddy!": I'll still fuck it, but I would've been preferred it not be tarted up.
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but I get what you mean now after that explanation.