To Professor Amethyst Games
Hello. First, bear with me as i am not native English speaker.
Anyway,
I am kinda stuck at Lily shop scene with Mr.Lorenzo and short hair blonde girl. (i dont mean stuck as a bug stuck , but rather..)
I pushed Lily off the first time... because I keep getting mental block with image of her saying those things in sms about what she has done .. and i can't proceed. She pops up in my head (during story) and her words (sms) kicks and overwhelms me, and my mind ..it just blocks ..i just cant...
Woman should never tell a straight man about her 'adventures' it will forever stain any possible future relationship with that person and create gran canyon size of 'repulsion'...
As for the rest of the story.
Man, this story 'reads' me as if i am the book.. I click with everything that developer has wrote!
It also cuts very deep! Crying of a demon, weeping like a child with Amy in the doorway..everything was there i just can't put it as eloquently as dev did so ill just quote:
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"If only I had the power to build a world where we have all the time we need."
"The time to love and be loved."
"The God of heaven and the Queen of hell have powers beyond imagination."
"And they waste it. They waste it waging war."
"They waste it when they could use it to fill hearts with hope."
"And heal the wounds of the lonely and forgotten."
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"We cried for a long time."
"We cried until it hurt less to say goodbye to the ones we've lost."
"We cried until we ran out of tears."
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Every line is speaking to me as if i am the one speaking it. 'Darn' it totally engulfed me! What a writing , what a story!
I am not religious person but 'apartment' of Cassius were marvelous!
Characters are simply gorgeously written , every line written is truly a masterpiece! It's not just random rumbling and chit-chat talk about non meaningless things without saying anything at the end.. it's very profound and deep i read every line with heavy admiration!
Well Done!
Story starts really, really grim, but it develops amazingly like a caterpillar!
I know that you do not have many supporters for this project, which is a crying shame. But know that you 'touched' at least one person and i hope that alone makes it all worth while!
Thank you!
P.S
I beg you for just one thing... What ever it is you are doing with Randal thing ..don't spread it , not even as 'optional'... it just ..contradicts and kinda stains everything you did so far (it's kinda shame that there is no mom/daughter because of it as it is huge deal, but i would rather not have that then be forced to 'share')