VN Ren'Py One Day at a Time [Ch. 16c] [Zoey Raven]

[Zoey Raven]

I just finished season 1 and starting on season 2. I tried to give the game a go several months ago but the drug use was turning me off the game. I do admit I was a lazy sod and did not read the what the author wrote about it. That said I glad the dev was able to turn their life around get rid of those demons. I spent from 1980 to 2023 as a paramedic and paramedic instructor for 14 years. I saw and dealt with a large variety of substance abuse and drug abuse over those years. It brought back not so good memories that I buried deep within since I retired from the ambulance in early 2021. That said the story is well told, poignant and well told. The characters stories are very good. Only a few quibbles is that Barb's hair looks like it's a wig and you made Audrey into a ginger from her brown hair. I Kayla gets added to harem has damn she has some DSL's ! Once I finish up what is out for season 2 I will write a nice review.

As to your review, thank you. However...

Ch. 16 had 5 sex scenes in it, I'm not sure how much more I could have packed into that update, and each one had 5 animations a piece. Each update has at least 3 sex scenes. Not sure how I can do any better than that and not make other things suffer. Anyway, glad you like the other parts of the game. I also don't know what you mean by weird hair or whatever. But, my original sentiment still stands, that being glad you enjoy the game. Oh, and LOF certainly didn't have more lewds than my game does. In fact you're the first person who's ever said it doesn't have enough sex. To each their own I guess.

 

[Tremonia]

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Maria would like you to know that we are entering the final stages of post production on Ch. 17 of One Day at a Time (she's a fan of the game too)!

I would say about a week and some change and you'll be seeing the update posted on here. This message is for patrons only and I just want to say it again. Thank for bearing with me through what has been a very hard time in my life. However, I'm overjoyed to be back at full health again, and I'm really excited to be bringing you this update soon!

It didn't make largest update, I think it made 3rd largest just by a hundred lines or something. But, suffice it to say there will be plenty of of content for you to sink your teeth into, and I really enjoyed this one! Even though it took a rocky path to get it completed. That's all for now, can't wait for you guys to play the update!

As always, hope you are all doing well! Cheers!

 

[divingmedic]

As to your review, thank you. However...

Ch. 16 had 5 sex scenes in it, I'm not sure how much more I could have packed into that update, and each one had 5 animations a piece. Each update has at least 3 sex scenes. Not sure how I can do any better than that and not make other things suffer. Anyway, glad you like the other parts of the game. I also don't know what you mean by weird hair or whatever. But, my original sentiment still stands, that being glad you enjoy the game. Oh, and LOF certainly didn't have more lewds than my game does. In fact you're the first person who's ever said it doesn't have enough sex. To each their own I guess.

As I said it was my own personal taste. I do love your story and it's yours to tell. You are correct that LoF did not have many lewd scenes in it.

 

[Master of Puppets]

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Damn, that's a gorgeous image!

 

[Tremonia]

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...when doing the dishes! Or perhaps she's just pissed she has to do them at all! Although she dressed rather nicely for the occasion, in my opinion.
I'm popping these promos off after I get done with my day of reading and testing. Gives me a pleasant way to wind down after grinding on the update. So, I figured why not share them with you guys!

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I got several requests for Isobel to turn around after the last render I did, so I asked her and this was her response!

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Sam has a message for you!
Sam "Chapter 17 will release on 05/10/24 or 10/05/24 or May the 10th. So if you wanna see the best pair of tits in L.A. you better be here!"
What can I say the girl has a mind of her own, I can't control her! Cheers!

 

[Bohler]

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Sam has a message for you!
Sam "Chapter 17 will release on 05/10/24 or 10/05/24 or May the 10th. So if you wanna see the best pair of tits in L.A. you better be here!"
What can I say the girl has a mind of her own, I can't control her! Cheers!

Damn still need to wait another 5 months....

 

[Tremonia]

Damn still need to wait another 5 months....

Why? It's tomorrow.

 

[divingmedic]

Why? It's tomorrow.

Think it was a joke.

 

[Walter Victor]

Why? It's tomorrow.

Think it was a joke.

Yes, about the date layout being interpreted as October.

 

[Anteron]

I don't remember her.

 

[Zoey Raven]

Damn still need to wait another 5 months....

Everywhere but the U.S. basically they put the date before the month (joke or not so people know it's not 5 months away). So, that's why I do that!

 

[Zoey Raven]

I don't remember her.

If you're talking about Isobel (the one that's giving the bird), she will be in the next game. I just use the models for promo's sometimes. Her renders were not for One Day at a Time. So, that's why you don't remember her.

 

[divingmedic]

Everywhere but the U.S. basically they put the date before the month (joke or not so people know it's not 5 months away). So, that's why I do that!

Except the US Military branches use the month/day/year. I had to rewire my brain when I went in and rewire again it again 8 years later.

 

[FatGiant]

Everywhere but the U.S. basically they put the date before the month (joke or not so people know it's not 5 months away). So, that's why I do that!

 

[HentaiKami]

Everywhere but the U.S. basically they put the date before the month (joke or not so people know it's not 5 months away). So, that's why I do that!

That's because putting day before the month is more logical.

 

[HentaiKami]

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Year Month Day or Day Month Year are the more logical ways of saying the date.

 

[Zoey Raven]

 

[FatGiant]

Year Month Day or Day Month Year are the more logical ways of saying the date.

Agreed. If we were talking about logic. But we are talking about a country that still uses a deprecated measure system that is completely irrational too.

So, this is NOT about logic, maybe "Hubris" or "Stubbornness", but NOT logic.

Peace

 

[Zoey Raven]

Agreed. If we were talking about logic. But we are talking about a country that still uses a deprecated measure system that is completely irrational too.

So, this is NOT about logic, maybe "Hubris" or "Stubbornness", but NOT logic.

Peace

At least we're not as bad as the Brits, they use both half the time from what my friend Cenc who lives there told me!

 

[FatGiant]

At least we're not as bad as the Brits, they use both half the time from what my friend Cenc who lives there told me!

Yeah, but at least they have the excuse that they invented it, and the measures are at least based on their rulers. What's your excuse America? LOOOOOOOL

Peace