ChaosOpen

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Not gonna lie. I hated the game at first. But I decided to not read a single bit of naration, focus on the sister's line. Play from her POV. MUUUCH better experience.

Still, I can so effortlessly immagine a game 10x better than this. Having to hide form the parents. Public sex acts, hiding from friends. Having the MC actually say that he's dating someone to the [spoilers], instead of just going "ehh, well, we can't. Becauuuse. Because I suck as a human being, can't say a single line of dialog that isn't cringy and horrendous."

That scene with the [Spoilers] in the class below. It could have been an amazing turning point. A realization, an admission. Character growth! IMMAGINE THAT!
But no. Instead we get the same limp-dick stumbling ahead. No growth, no change. Just more of the same.

I mean, the sister, who is the REAL protagonist, she gets a lot of decent character growth. Not mind blowing, mind you. But decent. Wish she were the POV. But no, were' stuck with this guy.
You can always tell if a game is written by a virgin or not by how it depicts a handjob. The author clearly doesn't know how awkward and painful an actual handjob is.
 

Dave 237

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You can always tell if a game is written by a virgin or not by how it depicts a handjob. The author clearly doesn't know how awkward and painful an actual handjob is.
i personally felt nothing when it was done to me
 

amBest

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why would the dude admit hes fucking his sister out loud? that sounds stupid
Who said he'd do something so mind-blowingly stupid?
I'll cut you off. You said that. I sure as hell didn't. I just said the MC would reply "Sorry. I'm dating someone".

Am I living in crazy land? This is the entirety of the thrill of incest porn.

MC: "Nah-ah. I'm not single. I'm totally dating someone."
Best Friend: "Yeah? Who exactly?!"
MC: "You see, that's complicated. She ..."
Best Friend: "Doesn't actually exist?"
MC: (... between a rock and a hard place. Fuck!) "Y...you're right. I made her up."

Cute girl: "Hey there cutie, wanna be my date to the prom?"
MC: "Ah, sorry. Can't. I ... already ... have a date?"
Cute girl: "Humph. Turning me down, don't even have a date. Are you secretly gay? I've always wanted a gay friend!"
MC: (... I'm fucked. Again)

Mom: Well, if none of you have a date for the prom. Why don't you go togeather?
Awkward stares.
Incest sex in a barn somewhere.
Pregnancy. Do we keep it? Do we run from home?

How does it end? Do they realize they can't live like this? Drift appart? Each get a husband / wife.
Do they secretly still have sex and cheat on their SO?
Or do they just pretend it never happened?
Do they leave society behind? Leave as "bachelors?" and "share a flat" while they "are totally not having unprotected sex for the rest of their lives"?
 
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Dave 237

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Who said he'd do something so mind-blowingly stupid?
I'll cut you off. You said that. I sure as hell didn't. I just said the MC would reply "Sorry. I'm dating someone".
if he did that then he'd be bombed by questions, people can get really annoying when you tell them your dating someone
 

amBest

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if he did that then he'd be bombed by questions, people can get really annoying when you tell them your dating someone
I updated my post with further explanations of how I see things. It's fine to disagree BTW, just ... you know. My POV. I've laid it out.
I just think that this is the ENTIRE point of incest as a fetish. Maybe for other people it's just "my sister is hot and I wish I had banged her before her tits started sagging."
For me, it's how it can't function in society. But if they burn with passion (or lust), they'll make it work behind society's back.
 
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Dave 237

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I updated my post with further explanations of how I see things. It's fine to disagree BTW, just ... you know. My POV. I've laid it out.
I just think that this is the ENTIRE point of incest as a fetish. Maybe for other people it's just "my sister is hot and I wish I had banged her before her tits started sagging."
For me, it's how it can't function in society. But if they burn with passion (or lust), they'll make it work behind society's back.
i see i see
 

PeteHanson

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because this is an old game and for full English it has been around since 2019 on other websites.
Those are the "standards" i'm glad i do not have. :) Go read any shitty mtl you like. But do not for a second fool yourself into thinking, a patch a human worked on is on the same level as the garbage whatever tool your tl came out form put out! Fuck me... if it's really just about having to read new shit, that is what you become, i guess. :rolleyes:
 
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PeteHanson

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Hibiki Works always create S-tier on vanilla genre, CATION's franchises is the best so far... But mostly their work is treasure
Is this the first of their games this short? All the other things i saw of them on vndb were massively long 40 or even more hours. That is not something i spent lightly on a vn. I think this one could be a very good one to just try out their writing style. :)

Edit: I confused Hibiki- and Toneworks. Nevermind... it's the only one of theirs we have in english. Oh no wonder the does tonework translations now as well.
 
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PeteHanson

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It's rare to see a wholesome game with art as good as NTR games.
On this site? Sure, but in general? . To me it feels like these short under the same roof type of borderline nukige pop up nearly every week. Nothing wrong with that sure, but i can not play these that often. It get's boring. I do however agree on nearly every game on this site having NTR in it, it's honestly strange to me at this point.
 

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You can always tell if a game is written by a virgin or not by how it depicts a handjob. The author clearly doesn't know how awkward and painful an actual handjob is.
:WaitWhat: A handjob is only painful if its done wrong or made painful on purpose.
 

ChaosOpen

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:WaitWhat: A handjob is only painful if its done wrong or made painful on purpose.
She's never seen a penis before and has no lube, somehow I doubt she is doing it correctly. Also, in the end even the best handjob has no appreciable difference between masturbation, except with no physical feedback from your dick she is unable to get adjust to target the best spots. Sorry, but fapping>handjob
The only time it gets "better" is when you put it in an orifice because that is a sensation you can't emulate with your own far more practiced hand.
 
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