So, positive things first:
- The premise is cool. Our MC is the best of the best of the best and is going to travel space in search of the hottest babes the universe has to offer while making his crew his personal harem.
- There are already a ton of chicks and not a single one looks off to me. They're hot!
- No dream scenes.
The negative(s):
- The MC looks pretty weird, and I can't point my finger at what exactly it is. His chubby cheek face looks feminine and the whole chest / shoulder area looks.. wrong. His red suit is also made for women and looks off on a male character.
- In my opinion, the characters don't really seem "alive". Don't know if I'm missing expressions or more bubbly / believable dialogue. I think this is something that will improve over time.
I've bookmarked this thread and I'm looking forward to the next updates.