burbero

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In sex scenes in games, acts of romance and passion such as caressing and kissing are often ignored. They go straight to sex, which makes those scenes either feel artificial or sometimes a chore. In this update, the 2nd Moonsong scene was very good and successful in conveying desire to us. Keep it up!
 
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burbero

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I've heard that whoring a potential LI is a good way to put some drama/twist in a game... At least that was a flashback, I don't think it's a tragic, everybody has ups and downs.

And if you don't like her, you will be able to avoid her - that's what Dev said.
I agree with you on this. variety is good, and as much as I hate sluts, games where everyone is a virgin Mary don't feel natural to me either. I can put up with it for the sake of heightening and diversifying the senses.
 

UnoriginalUserName

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Just played the latest release and, like last time, enjoyed it quite a bit. Nice work.

If I can make a suggestion, you should add an in-game "database" of sorts with character profiles about the various heroines / villains we encounter for a more "immersive" game experience. Stuff like what you might find on the DC or Marvel wikis. Hero names, secret identities if known, powers, general bios, that sort of thing. This is often done in games through a phone interface of some sort since it usually also implements a map which might also be a good idea if you plan to have any more / more complex freeroam elements in the future.

I'd also highly recommend you add a gallery of some sort.
 

Havenless_

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If your mother figure, who is supposed to be a responsible, kind, loving and caring person who should love and respect you, leaves your fucking birthday party to go to the bathroom to fuck a waiter she just met and/or masturbate because she got horny because that's the logic of porn games... I don't even know what to think.

Obviously I'm speaking subjectively and based on my personal tastes. But I think this just makes Parker look horribly bad. I don't understand what the developer thought to make Parker like this.

And let it be clear that this is only my opinion.... Make one or two love interests who have fucked half the city, go ahead i guess. Do it if you want to. But I think it's a mistake to have one of those love interests be the mom or mother figure or whatever you want to call it, knowing that it's almost a given that those types of characters (mothers, adoptive mothers, etc) are usually the characters that players like the most because of that 'taboo' factor.
 

Gabi99

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Look Dev i dont talk alot on this site but i had a feeling that you might need to hear this,now i dont want to be rude but from your answers and the dev notes i think you put too much to the heart,people on this site will always complain about something,you need to be a little rougher and do things however you want to,its your game and yours only,theres no need for you to get stressed and etc if they dont like something they can go cry about it,or better make their own game alright?Usually kind/polite devs like you dont go long,dont read too much in the negativity and you'll do just fine,good luck sir
 

JJJ84

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Just got around to finishing Chapter 2.

Wow, Jacquesdor this was another great Chapter.
I found it really fun!

Some thoughts on the Cha2 itself (as well as the Ch1 additions), whether it's good, could be improved, or "Heh":


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Anyway, looking very much forward to the next one!!
 
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Havenless_

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Look Dev i dont talk alot on this site but i had a feeling that you might need to hear this,now i dont want to be rude but from your answers and the dev notes i think you put too much to the heart,people on this site will always complain about something,you need to be a little rougher and do things however you want to,its your game and yours only,theres no need for you to get stressed and etc if they dont like something they can go cry about it,or better make their own game alright?Usually kind/polite devs like you dont go long,dont read too much in the negativity and you'll do just fine,good luck sir
While I agree with the general thrust of what you say, the sentence I highlighted from your paragraph seems wrong to me. Obviously there are people who just "cry" about what they don't like and it's annoying and discouraging, but what's the point of not being able to write about the negatives for someone about a game? Under your logic, if there's something I don't like about a game the only thing I can do is to

a) cry about it
b) create my own game

Isn't there an option c) where I can argue why I didn't like a certain thing in a rational way? Yes, I know the word "rational" and f95 don't go hand in hand, but I repeat, locking all 'negative' comments into "just crying" seems unfair to me. Criticizing a certain aspect I didn't like about the game doesn't automatically make it a negative thing. Especially if you do it in a minimally polite way.
 

Reniere

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Question just so i can be informed what does the devolvement time look for this ?
 

Vasy

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Question just so i can be informed what does the devolvement time look for this ?
I don't have any particular insight into the dev cycle, but this update came pretty quickly considering the first release was two months ago.
 
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Liam the Handyman

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1. If you opt out of it, it doesn't happen. The scene is totally solo, u even get to peek.

2. The length some people will go to motivate their insecurities. You could have just opted out of voyeurism and see the alternate solo scene, but you did not..so I guess you wanted to be "cucked"...Even though that is taking the definition to an extreme, you do you. I don't kink shame people. I don't like it when people talk bullshit though, because it gives false info to other people, so I'm gonna call you on that.
How am i giving false info? And to motivate what insecurities? If you read what i posted later and with the dev's own take on it, you will know what i am driving at instead of trying to come in to "defend" the game by "calling" me out... and you know what, imma actually having fun with the game, so you should rethink from a positive pov where imma try help dev avoid plot pitfalls to improve the premise...

Its a sad shame when feedback is taken in such fashion whenever it comes to NTR/anti-NTR moreover with backhanded insults lol
 
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HornyyPussy

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Look Dev i dont talk alot on this site but i had a feeling that you might need to hear this,now i dont want to be rude but from your answers and the dev notes i think you put too much to the heart,people on this site will always complain about something,you need to be a little rougher and do things however you want to,its your game and yours only,theres no need for you to get stressed and etc if they dont like something they can go cry about it,or better make their own game alright?Usually kind/polite devs like you dont go long,dont read too much in the negativity and you'll do just fine,good luck sir
Oh,i almost forgot please do not try to please everyone,on this site it really is impossible :LOL:
This, so very much this!

Just got around to finishing Chapter 2.

Wow, Jacquesdor this was another great Chapter.
I found it really fun!

Some thoughts on the Cha2 itself (as well as the Ch1 additions), whether it's good, could be improved, or "Heh":


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Anyway, looking very much forward to the next one!!
Now you made it Jaq, you got the full JJJ84 treatment, congrats!!!! :ROFLMAO:

While I agree with the general thrust of what you say, the sentence I highlighted from your paragraph seems wrong to me. Obviously there are people who just "cry" about what they don't like and it's annoying and discouraging, but what's the point of not being able to write about the negatives for someone about a game? Under your logic, if there's something I don't like about a game the only thing I can do is to

a) cry about it
b) create my own game

Isn't there an option c) where I can argue why I didn't like a certain thing in a rational way? Yes, I know the word "rational" and f95 don't go hand in hand, but I repeat, locking all 'negative' comments into "just crying" seems unfair to me. Criticizing a certain aspect I didn't like about the game doesn't automatically make it a negative thing. Especially if you do it in a minimally polite way.
While you are correct the main problem is that most of the "critique" around here isn't constructive. It's mainly people crying over something they don't like. Saying Parker is a whore for example is hardly constructive, that's just simple complaining. Not to mention that the same people keep bringing it up over and over again, that makes it even more complaining.

Doubt there is any serious Dev that dislikes constructive criticism but alas......
 
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Jacquesdor

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The only issue I have is I wish the player could avoid the second encounter with Moonsong. I understand why the first scene is necessary, but I dislike forced scenes in general, and it seems to contradict this portion of the dev notes
Maybe both parts are part of the "moment"?
Yes, exactly what Hornyy said here.

From Chapter 3 onwards, content with Moonsong will be optional.

The reason she isn't up until this point is because I wanted the first power MC acquires to be immediately perceptible by both MC & Moonsong so that she could immediately be aware of how he go it, being the curious scientific one. That way she can get to work championing him to be an asset to the Sisterhood right away. Originally, this scene didn't have the "turn her down" option, but I felt bad for Evelyn as she is one of my favorites, so I included a scene which both has the same outcome (acquiring Moonsong's power) and also solidifies the fact that Evelyn loves MC so much that she will do whatever it takes to make him happy, including wingwomaning him like a boss. I could have also had him acquire her power instead, but the other answer as to why I didn't go that way is that I simply didn't want him to have her power yet.

Are scenes like this still planned to appear in the game?
No, the other scene that might have provoked such ire as the Parker washroom scene, was so minimal (literally 1 render) and pointless to the greater story, that it's not worth the hassle.

MC needs to get his damn nails cleaned and cut, it's disgusting. :(
Not going to lie, I was wondering how long it would take for someone to bring this up. I never noticed how bad it was until probably that image you included, maybe earlier, can't remember.

Question just so i can be informed what does the devolvement time look for this ?
So I had a few chapters already in the bank before I even released the first one, so I could be ahead and use the time between updates to work on future chapters. I expect it will eventually catch up with me, but I hope for at least the next few chapters to release them every few months.

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Now, I'm going to have a set a day aside to reply to JJJ84
 

AgnorWolf

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Overall pretty good game so far. Decent characters and world building, looking forward to the next update but there one thing kinda irking me...
They way Evelyn's powers are described she has basically had tons of sex, just not physically. I get she's in love with the mc but her wanting her first to be the mc but also going out of her way to experience tons of other peoples sex just seems like a huge contradiction and makes her a hypocrite if you don't choose her first. If she continues to have these experiences while with mc now are the not borderline cheating. And it's not like she has zero control she said she went out of her way to do it.. maybe I've misunderstood her powers but it doesn't make a whole bunch of sense
 
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Jacquesdor

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Overall pretty good game so far. Decent characters and world building, looking forward to the next update but there one thing kinda irking me...
They way Evelyn's powers are described she has basically had tons of sex, just not physically. I get she's in love with the mc but her wanting her first to be the mc but also going out of her way to experience tons of other peoples sex just seems like a huge contradiction and makes her a hypocrite if you don't choose her first. If she continues to have these experiences while with mc now are the not borderline cheating. And it's not like she has zero control she said she went out of her way to do it.. maybe I've misunderstood her powers but it doesn't make a whole bunch of sense
So here's my intention in the way I have written it. If it's not become clear already, it certainly will be in the next release if you don't initially turn Moonsong down, but there's much more to Evelyn's feelings towards MC than she lets on. She wanted to make sure she was fully prepared for their first time together so she could blow him away (in more ways than one), essentially by doing "research". In her head, seeing what sex is like through the minds of other people is not really cheating, especially when she's accidentally experienced so much of it already. I guess now that she's so used to it, she thinks of it like watching porn, only without all the fake porn bullshit. She wants to understand what men like so she knows how best to please him, and how it may feel for her when she finally does take the big step in giving him her physical virginity (and the only virginity her power has rendered her able to give him).

Will conversations be had between them in the future about whether her power is akin to cheating, especially if she voluntary uses it for that? Absolutely.
 

Raziel_8

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Overall pretty good game so far. Decent characters and world building, looking forward to the next update but there one thing kinda irking me...
They way Evelyn's powers are described she has basically had tons of sex, just not physically. I get she's in love with the mc but her wanting her first to be the mc but also going out of her way to experience tons of other peoples sex just seems like a huge contradiction and makes her a hypocrite if you don't choose her first. If she continues to have these experiences while with mc now are the not borderline cheating. And it's not like she has zero control she said she went out of her way to do it.. maybe I've misunderstood her powers but it doesn't make a whole bunch of sense
That's exactly why i really don't care if she's pissed that the MC chooses Moonsong as his first, it's pure hypocrisy on her part. MC should stay virgin for her while she is specifically seeking out people she expects to get fucked so she can experience it.

I mean, should one be happy to hear that she wanted to experience geting fucked by x amount of people just so her first time with the MC is good :WaitWhat:...and it not being her real body changes little imo.

I really liked her character until that part and how she does that for 2 years, after that i put her on the reject list, also unlikely that she will stop using her powers on others, which is still cheating territory imo ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
 

Liam the Handyman

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That's exactly why i really don't care if she's pissed that the MC chooses Moonsong as his first, it's pure hypocrisy on her part. MC should stay virgin for her while she is specifically seeking out people she expects to get fucked so she can experience it.

I mean, should one be happy to hear that she wanted to experience geting fucked by x amount of people just so her first time with the MC is good :WaitWhat:...and it not being her real body changes little imo.

I really liked her character until that part and how she does that for 2 years, after that i put her on the reject list, also unlikely that she will stop using her powers on others, which is still cheating territory imo ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
IMO i think its quite unfair to place a cheating tag on her given her powers in such cases, at worst, are like someone using VR/AR porn... sure she gets horny and all, maybe uses a dildo or what not but she's nowhere cheating on MC.. she even allows him to bang other girls which makes her 10/10 in my book lol
 

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They way Evelyn's powers are described she has basically had tons of sex, just not physically.
I perceived her power as basically being like watching super immersive porn. So that's not really cheating. Also she is single, so she can't cheat one anyone anyways.
 
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