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Do I have problem with girls with sexual history in AVN? No.
Do I have problem with mother figure that during her adoptive son birthday dinner in front of his friend come deperate for some random waiter dick even if he tells her that he is more interested in Evelyn? Yes, she belongs to street so I will avoid her in future. Contex matter if it would be in club with her girlfriends it would be appropriate. Btw how could she become MC adoptive mother if she is single mother and leads a promiscuous lifestyle.
Right now from prologue I'm only interested in Evelyn.
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No worries, m8. If you had a post removed it was collateral damage. You were not rude or ranting and did nothing wrong. I'm sure Jacquesdor appreciates constructive criticisms.
Nice catch and thanks for putting that in a spoiler. Heh It definitely is one!
Exactly. If I want to design the character, I'll write a VN. This character surely didn't win Mom of the year award but, then, she's not his Mom either. I would also consider her behavior at the restaurant off-putting. People have bad days. People have character flaws. How will (my) MC relate to her in the future? To be determined...
I will second the vote for Evelyn as best girl... so far. I reserve the right to change my mind and will entertain the possibility of ties. Jus' Sayin'
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Yea Parker is kinda miss for me too after that dinner scene, i hope there will be a scene at school with that waiter where he will make fun of you because of that, because it is clearly stated he knows you from school. Kinda wish she would be the bad-ass business woman instead of slutty milf.
It would make her more interesting character for sure if that is true.
You will change your mind when our invisible girl makes her move. (And we will not see it commingI will second the vote for Evelyn as best girl... so far. I reserve the right to change my mind and will entertain the possibility of ties. Jus' Sayin'
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Well, the invisible girl seems to be a lesbian, so good luck.Yea Parker is kinda miss for me too after that dinner scene, i hope there will be a scene at school with that waiter where he will make fun of you because of that, because it is clearly stated he knows you from school. Kinda wish she would be the bad-ass business woman instead of slutty milf.
It would make her more interesting character for sure if that is true.
You will change your mind when our invisible girl makes her move. (And we will not see it comming
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Nah, she is a switch imo. She was kinda offensive in her sleepover and only hold back because she know of Evelyn's feelings.Well, the invisible girl seems to be a lesbian, so good luck.
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Oh dont you worry about that, she will be with both MC and Evelyn in no time. There would be no surprise if she watched MC and Evelyn the first time they do it.Well, the invisible girl seems to be a lesbian, so good luck.
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Well, she's not getting my Evelyn. I'm only on Evelyn's path and I'm greedy.
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Well, the invisible girl seems to be a lesbian, so good luck.
Bi, switch, lesbian, old, young, busty, petite... They will all fall for MC... ummm... as soon as his balls drop.
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She even gave MC a sneaky handjob. Quite obvious that she will be catching feelings for the dude who treats her well after suffering from her invisibility. Maybe she already had them as they knew each other for a while.
She held herself back from an inferiority complex and to a lesser degree to respect Evelyn's feelings.
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That must have been one of the flashbacks, iirc Amber, Evelyn and MC got kinda drunk back from a Party and Amber was supposed to sleep at Eve's home, but her dad slammed the door into Amber and MC took her in after that....
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And judging from the reactions to my post, we don't have to wonder who's part of that group
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Never met his parents they "died" when he was a baby, surrogate mother works at a pharma company... I bet he's some kinda test tube baby they made. I would guess at him copying other people's powers but that's been done, maybe just some sorta pervy power but that's been done too.
As you see the mother getting eaten out I guess she's not a LI, shame. I thought that meta dude was quite an interesting way of having a narrator.
This was pretty high qual, I hope school is still a thing once stuff kicks off as it'd be a waste of the premium girls there otherwise.
As you see the mother getting eaten out I guess she's not a LI, shame. I thought that meta dude was quite an interesting way of having a narrator.
This was pretty high qual, I hope school is still a thing once stuff kicks off as it'd be a waste of the premium girls there otherwise.
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As with all of them(i think) she's optional but of course she will be a LI if you want to.
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Oh for fucks sake! You can't end it like that, WHAT THE HELL!
Loved it Jacq! I'm hooked on the story and I love the humor and characters, seems like motseer was right again
Love Riley and Eve and I can't wait to see Amber But damn that hot ass Milf Parker is my fav so far!!! Excellent line up of LI's so far and it didn't exactly get worse with the ones that appeared at the end
Loved it Jacq! I'm hooked on the story and I love the humor and characters, seems like motseer was right again
Love Riley and Eve and I can't wait to see Amber
But damn that hot ass Milf Parker is my fav so far!!! Excellent line up of LI's so far and it didn't exactly get worse with the ones that appeared at the end 
Gotta keep people excited for the next chapterOh for fucks sake! You can't end it like that, WHAT THE HELL!
Loved it Jacq! I'm hooked on the story and I love the humor and characters, seems like motseer was right again
Love Riley and Eve and I can't wait to see Amber
Glad you liked it.
Originally I had Fraser as a full on 4th wall breaking character but he wasn't just just breaking immersion, he was shattering it, literally to the point where he would comment on how they're moving their drinking session to a new environment because it was too hard to render in this one. So I completely toned him down, and probably for the better. Now he's just a lot more subtle.
And yes, don't worry.. we'll return to the school in a few chapters and then quite a bit of the story will take place there going forward.
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Well that's an understatementGotta keep people excited for the next chapter
Glad you liked it.
Are all the girls we've met in chapter 1 potential LI's?