VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.7.0] [JDOR]

[MorteRivenditore]

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Maybe we're lucky and the power adapts to allow the MC to stay young by eating pussy

i man if mc caused evelyns to mutate its likely hers could mutate any others (maybe)

Yeah Riley is good for sure for sure...
But we all know who he really needs to hook up with if he wants powers that matter.
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LOL sadly tho the second he does that is the second everyone knows what his power is LOL

 

[lukas7533]

I must say that I like Evelyn less and less, not only her behavior is completely irrational, contradicts her own words from early chapters and most of all she´s complete fucking psycho(which is maybe justifiable given her power).
Just look at MC´s visit to her room. Like who the hell has that many photos of one person above his/her bed ? Not even fans of sports are this clingy.

Also I am not sure what happened in last couple of chapters but she seems off, art wise. Like I loved how she looked in early chapters, but in last two its just weird. Uncanny valley type of shit. Moonsong had similar downgrade the last time we´ve seen her. Not sure if it was "whorish" makeup they decided to give her, but I just didnt vibe with it.

The best girl remains Lady of Steel followed by Amber and Moonsong. Remaining cast is so far behind that they are not even worth mentioning

 

[The_Man_With_No_Name]

LOL sadly tho the second he does that is the second everyone knows what his powoer is LOL

For plot progression narrative reasons the story will probably have it where it's revealed at some point.
This would be the perfect way to do it.

Maybe it will evolve once he has that amazing power so he can turn on and off but when he is stressed it just activates.
"Oh man MC means business. He's going blue!"

 

[Lynava]

For plot progression narrative reasons the story will probably have it where it's revealed at some point.
This would be the perfect way to do it.

Maybe it will evolve once he has that amazing power so he can turn on and off but when he is stressed it just activates.
"Oh man MC means business. He's going blue!"

it will turn on when the MC gets blue balls.

 

[kasatik_spb]

Hi!
Here is the Russian translation of Origin Story [v0.6.0].
This translation is "unofficial".

The link is: Here


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Привет!
Это перевод на Русский язык визуальной новеллы Origin Story [v0.6.0].
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Русский язык необходимо выбрать в параметрах и перезапустить игру.

Ссылка: Здесь

 

[blkcrow20]

I agree with this. I can ignore the occasional oblique reference, but having it front and center like this is just annoying. Diverts my (very limited) brain power to figuring out which games are being referenced rather than being immersed in the story.

Yeah, I only listed the names of AVNs which I could remember, or guess (like with apocalyptic Egypt; that was literally dead giveaway for Desert Stalker, despite it not being named).
I dunno. I don't remember there being other AVNs named or referenced in all the updates till now.
And all of a sudden with this update, there were so many AVNs being named/referenced all at once.
Love the game, and really liked the update still, but I think Jacquesdor went too overboard with it if I'm being honest.

You guys are entitled to your opinions and no opinion is wrong. But I disagree with you. I always like when I see other AVNs mentioned in a game. I liked the convo between MC and Ruth when they were mentioned. The games mentioned are simply games/devs he has respect for and he wanted to pay homage to them.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Remaining cast is so far behind that they are not even worth mentioning

I hate how true this is

 

[Just Jericho]

You guys are debating the wrong topics, Meri’s asshole self lubes. MC has a bussy now.

#LETUSMARRYMERIDITH

 

[freddygonzo]

what are this locked character name?

https://f95zone.to/threads/origin-story-v0-7-0-jdor.183779/post-17049274

Maybe Helena is Blackwitch and Elizabeth the MC's mother? We'll see...

 

[Just Jericho]

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Maybe we're lucky and the power adapts to allow the MC to stay young by eating pussy

I mean the way I see it, Meredith only explicitly said that sex keeps her young. Her power makes her body adapt to coax an orgasm out of her partner but I don't think she ever explicitly mentioned that it didn't work with women too. She did say she's bisexual

So I think it's possible that MC might have misinterpreted what she meant. He might have assumed it only worked with men because of how her body was adapting to make him cum early or how she asked him to cum in her mouth (she could have had more conventional reasons for that part. I'd bet creampies or body shots work too). After all, it wouldn't be the first time a power was misunderstood

If that were the case, then acquiring her power would perfectly compliment his Eros powers as well as counteract the aging from Lucia's power.

 

[freddygonzo]

Can't view your attachment.
It's also very unlikely that the mother is in the profiles which rather only lists fuckable women.

 

[Lynava]

https://f95zone.to/threads/origin-story-v0-7-0-jdor.183779/post-17049274

Maybe Helena is Blackwitch and Elizabeth the MC's mother? We'll see...

there's no way that Helena is Blackwitch.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

counteract the aging from Lucia's power.

In that case it would be extremely useful.

 

[Lynava]

I have a question, who is this?

 

[Just Jericho]

In that case it would be extremely useful.

Lucia's time stopping + Meredith's Age Deceleration + Lots of books

 

[Dr.TSoni]

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I have a question, who is this?

Lucia's other friend, the non-blue one

 

[Sennistrasz]

This is so disappointing to hear. I hate immersion breaking stuff and this sounds like the ultimate immersion breaking possible, with these avns and the characters being brought up a lot.

I am okay with subtle references, like when games have them on a TV or laptop screen, or they have, a line or two, but the way you are describing it, sounds awful and just bad.

I hope the dev sees these posts or someone brings it up and he changes it, or tones it down a lot, but not holding my breath, it's just sounds so stupid, kinda lost my motivation to play this update now, skipped last one to build up content, now this, guess I will skip this update too.

To make it believable that a movie star's going to be in a lot of movies, you'll going to need many names. Usually real shows and movies get referenced, and that's the really immersion breaking ones. AVNs as standins are better.

 

[micojive]

Now that you mention it, I remember something like that, but what did Evelyn have to do with him though?

Evelyn asks if she should help with the principle stuff and you can choose either yes or no. Even selecting no, don't help at all she still goes and does the whole orgasm thing in the bathroom with him for funzies.

 

[Lynava]

Evelyn asks if she should help with the principle stuff and you can choose either yes or no. Even selecting no, don't help at all she still goes and does the whole orgasm thing in the bathroom with him for funzies.

I hope he doesn't write that it's considered cheating.

 

[freddygonzo]

there's no way that Helena is Blackwitch.

Ah, yes. Thanks for the reminder. I forgot about her in the detention cells during C3. The Anna projection afterwards must have brainwashed my memory...
If BW is really going to get a profile then a breakout seems likely. She seems too insane for any cooperation compared to Isabella.
We'll see in five, ten or fifteen fucking months then... zzZZz