VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.7.0] [JDOR]

[S1nsational]

IF Riley is Ghostraven, Riley is amazingly good at both compartmentalizing and acting.

Riley and Ghostraven both act like completely different people even when it comes to MC.

If they're the same person;

• She was able to control her reaction to seeing MC dying infront of her, with no prep time
• She has learned that MC has awakened a power, what it is and how it works. And that it's being kept secret
• She knows that MC has slept with two of her teammate, and that that number will likely increase
• She knows that some of those teammates want MC to actually join the team

We haven't seen Riley mess up or slip up in her behavior about any of these, and yea She and MC aren't super close, but I'd still expect something

Hell, even our friendly teleporter hasn't slipped up, not saying he'd necessarily know all the Sisterhoods real names and identities, though I'd be surprised if he doesn't given the nature of what he does, but if he is suddenly picking up and returning MC to that address and he's been picking up and Ghostraven really close to that since before MC was ever known about then I'm surprised there hasn't been an offhand comment made that carried more than he meant to say

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Hell, even our friendly teleporter hasn't slipped up, not saying he'd necessarily know all the Sisterhoods real names and identities, though I'd be surprised if he doesn't given the nature of what he does, but if he is suddenly picking up and returning MC to that address and he's been picking up and Ghostraven really close to that since before MC was ever known about then I'm surprised there hasn't been an offhand comment made that carried more than he meant to say

This is easily avoidable if Riley goes to the area of his supposed work and gets teleported from there.

 

[Daermon420]

She was able to control her reaction to seeing MC dying infront of her, with no prep time

Look at her eyes here. If she's hiding that she's worried about the MC after that attack she's doing a pretty poor job of it. She looks fucking petrified. Look how wide her eyes are compared to their usual.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

She was able to control her reaction to seeing MC dying infront of her, with no prep time

Not exactly, we saw a slightly shocked face of Ghostraven when Mc was lying down. I'm not saying it could be Riley, but that's it.

Hell, even our friendly teleporter hasn't slipped up, not saying he'd necessarily know all the Sisterhoods real names and identities

Again... she can tell him not to teleport directly home... no one forbade choosing alternative addresses for hidden motives and then go home herself

 

[Daermon420]

The teleporter not saying anything makes perfect sense even if she is Ghostraven. He works for the team, the MC is not a member. Sure, some of them like him and he's in talks to maybe join them but he's not in yet. Why would he give up his employers secret identity to an outsider? Especially when it's clear Ghostraven doesn't want people to know who she is, wearing the mask even in their hideout. Him even dropping hints at her true identity would be pretty good grounds for being fired. As we've seen, teleporters aren't exactly rare in this world so he's replaceable.

 

[e6mill]

teleporters aren't exactly rare in this world so he's replaceable.

he's the only one we've seen who can teleport others without being there to touch them. Even from a restaurant halfway around the world.

 

[Lynava]

I'm gonna go against everyone and say that ghostraven is fraser.

 

[swiblesnap]

Fine I'll admit it im Ghostraven.

 

[Lynava]

Riley immunized, by the way.

 

[Daermon420]

he's the only one we've seen who can teleport others without being there to touch them. Even from a restaurant halfway around the world.

True but that doesn't mean there aren't others like him out there. And even the regular teleporters could do the job, it just wouldn't be as convenient since they'd have to port to their location to pick them up first. It'd still be almost as good. And preferable to a teleporter whos power is more convenient if you can't trust him to keep team secrets.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Riley immunized, by the way.

This is what someone would say to avoid revealing that they are Ghostraven

True but that doesn't mean there aren't others like him out there.

With the right amount of alcohol the MC could do it

 

[duckydoodoo]

I did (pre-covid).

ha, there was a strip club in key west, that im sure closes at some point. it was always open when i stopped by. did i stop by at 10am in the morning, idk its not like i looked at the time. im pretty sure they only closed long enough to turn on the house lights and disinfect the place. i mean eventually someone has to clean up. you know all those bodily fluids make everything sticky otherwise

 

[Pixillin']

Interesting story, or start to one, and it looks great - If I was into things other than what I am I probably would have enjoyed it. (And fair due to the Dev who did his best to give warnings) but really I was only interested in Evelyn out of the characters we'd met up to chapter 2. As soon as MC stuck his dick in Moonsong (even if it was Evelyn's idea) I was out. Still, the Dev should tell the story he wants to tell, good luck with it.

 

[Canto Forte]

Well, it is on par with the whole story of Eve: she sticks her whole mind into days of the lives of people she touches, she has been doing it all her life, is still doing it - you want to be with her, why not feel what she feels? Literally?

As soon as MC stuck his dick in Moonsong (even if it was Evelyn's idea) I was out

The major debate is how intimate she feels with whoever she touches, instantly, with no control and she is used to pleasure herself over it. She gives you a nudge to join her ranks of sharing her experience. Why deny your sweetheart - this is who and how she is towards everybody.

 

[Dessolos]

Interesting story, or start to one, and it looks great - If I was into things other than what I am I probably would have enjoyed it. (And fair due to the Dev who did his best to give warnings) but really I was only interested in Evelyn out of the characters we'd met up to chapter 2. As soon as MC stuck his dick in Moonsong (even if it was Evelyn's idea) I was out. Still, the Dev should tell the story he wants to tell, good luck with it.

haha I made a save where im only boning Evelyn so far that is the only time it is forced. Tho kind of does go against the idea of getting powers since I haven't managed to use the pills yet.

 

[Avaron1974]

Interesting story, or start to one, and it looks great - If I was into things other than what I am I probably would have enjoyed it. (And fair due to the Dev who did his best to give warnings) but really I was only interested in Evelyn out of the characters we'd met up to chapter 2. As soon as MC stuck his dick in Moonsong (even if it was Evelyn's idea) I was out. Still, the Dev should tell the story he wants to tell, good luck with it.

Him fucking other people is the central point of the story. There is no story without it.

 

[Dessolos]

Him fucking other people is the central point of the story. There is no story without it.

im hoping we can use the pills soon so my Evelyn only save can get some powers lol. Tho that isn't a my main save just one I made for fun.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Interesting story, or start to one, and it looks great - If I was into things other than what I am I probably would have enjoyed it. (And fair due to the Dev who did his best to give warnings) but really I was only interested in Evelyn out of the characters we'd met up to chapter 2. As soon as MC stuck his dick in Moonsong (even if it was Evelyn's idea) I was out. Still, the Dev should tell the story he wants to tell, good luck with it.

haha I made a save where im only boning Evelyn so far that is the only time it is forced. Tho kind of does go against the idea of getting powers since I haven't managed to use the pills yet.

This part from the OP explains it pretty clearly.

 

[Pixillin']

Him fucking other people is the central point of the story. There is no story without it.

That's cool. I just didn't want to fuck those people, so I'm out. No harm, no foul.

 

[Dessolos]

This part from the OP explains it pretty clearly.


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o I know I only made the Evelyn only save just for the hell of it. Especially since they added pills in the plot as another way to get powers just haven't been able to use them as of yet. Not my main save or anything my main save im playing got to catch them all even if I don't like every girl just for more powers.