VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.8.2] [JDOR]

[UnoriginalUserName]

So about the Ch7 ending. Do you think it was:

1) A mutation of Evelyn's power

- or -

2) Arwen's power

There's also the possibility of it being someone else using their power on the MC.

 

[VexLight4269]

So about the Ch7 ending. Do you think it was:

1) A mutation of Evelyn's power

- or -

2) Arwen's power

Honestly, the pc has been sleeping around so much it is hard to say if it is just an interaction of powers stacking. I also think it may be the host's own power or some device trying to leave a warning or something for the MC. Also keep in mind, we got a time traveling tiger within the first few chapters. I am still waiting on Ruth or a wolverine like power so he can finally stop being brused all the time.

Also bring back the wolves. They are adorbs.

 

[JJJ84]

Just finished the update (with both Isabella path & Anna + Arwen path).

I enjoyed it quite a bit.
In terms of main story itself (i.e. MC's actual storylines with the Sisterhood & mystery about how MC got his empath powers), there wasn't that much progression.
Having said that, there were quite a bit of side stories which I thought were quite engaging as well as collecting them powers which are always fun;

- Mrs Ross's niece Meredith I thought was a pretty engaging character in terms of her personality and looks. Her power age deceleration while I do kinda agree may not be as useful as other more OP abilities, you never know how it may be useful (so yoink! )
- Lucia's events with Sapphire were not too shabby also. While I wouldn't say them two are my favorite LIs (my current 2 favorites are Ghostraven & Lady Steel) their scenes were hot.
- Same could be said of Anna & Arwen in their route. Good interactions between characters and pretty good reasoning was used to link Anna's plotline with Sisterhood.

One thing that I'm gonna be looking forward to will be Lady Steel's match with her opponent the following day.
Jacquesdor how many more updates can we expect Lady Steel to be the forefront out of all the Sisterhood?

Initially the main LI from Sisterhood we interacted the most was Moonsong, for 3 updates or so (though I could be somewhat off with the numbers, given I didn't literally count lol) then shift was moved towards Lady Steel.
Ruth as a character has done a phenomenal job so far, and this is by no way me rushing you to change to the next one (until you feel it's absolutely the right time).
But it does have me curious as to when transition to next Sisterhood member arc will take place.


If there are any critiques, I have 2;

1) Zero new content for Isabella branch players
Couple of updates ago, story went through a branch (though not the first); with MC picking either Isabella herself or projection of Anna (movie star).
Picking Anna projection allowed MC for extra dialogue with Anna & Arwen in that said path in one of the previous updates when MC meets them for the first time.
There's also one really chunky event with this most recent update with MC, Evelyn, Anna, & Arwen which further develops their relationship.

Whereas for those who picked the Isabella option, well there has been..... nothing.
No new lines, arcs for players who chose her.

Granted, I have saves for both routes each named "Isabella" "Anna and Arwen" but ngl, I hope you keeps track & soon enough there's event/s & content for Isabella route, evening things out.
Cause otherwise, there doesn't really seem to be much of an incentive for players to pick Isabella's route currently.


2) Referencing other games.
I'm someone who when it comes to references or crossover (from other AVNs), prefers things to be very, very subtle. I'm not a fan of frequent referencing or fan service being constantly thrown.
Cause I feel doing so just feels like a distraction and moreso detracts from the experience than adds to it.

Now going into this current update, I felt for some reason this update just contained several referencing of other AVNs either explicitly (literal name dropping) or implicitly (describing the game).
3 or more AVNs get referenced with that watching movies with Lady Steel scene (Eternum, Come Home, Desert Stalker at least), and Chasing Sunsets get frequently mentioned by Anna in her & Arwen's event.

Desert Stalker, I love, and Eternum I do like.
Yet I haven't played Come Home & Chasing Sunsets I wasn't a huge fan of it towards later game.
But regardless of whether I liked the said AVN or not (or whether I played it or not), all these talks about other games, I'm sorry to say, they all just felt like...... distractions.

Jacquesdor, was this done because there was an agreement between you and other devs of those games? Like cross promotion (them agreeing to promote your game within their games and you agreeing to do the same)?
If so, it is what it is, and there's nothing more I can say about that.

But if not, and this was done solely because you're fan of those games, well perhaps I'm in the minority with this (different strokes for different folks I guess) but I hope you ease up on the references with future updates.
Cause for me, they felt a bit too much in this update (and being brutally honest? I'd much rather just focus on your game's storyline than get even a bit distracted by references to other games).


Having said the above, this game still remains the best Superhero AVN in my eyes.
And I'll be looking forward to the next update;
Match between Lady Steel and her opponent, I have a feeling it's gonna be a banger.

 

[JJJ84]

So about the Ch7 ending. Do you think it was:

1) A mutation of Evelyn's power

- or -

2) Arwen's power

Well, Arwen, according to the Codex is a normie like Parker, Riley, Mrs Ross. So unless we can on longer trust in the validity of the codex anymore (though there was no reason to doubt it until now, but who knows), I doubt it's from her.

My guess is it's probably something like MC's own powers evolving Evelyn's powers to higher level to make him go into many years in the past.

 

[blkcrow20]

1) Zero new content for Isabella branch players
Couple of updates ago, story went through a branch (though not the first); with MC picking either Isabella herself or projection of Anna (movie star).
Picking Anna projection allowed MC for extra dialogue with Anna & Arwen in that said path in one of the previous updates when MC meets them for the first time.
There's also one really chunky event with this most recent update with MC, Evelyn, Anna, & Arwen which further develops their relationship.

Whereas for those who picked the Isabella option, well there has been..... nothing.
No new lines, arcs for players who chose her.

Granted, I have saves for both routes each named "Isabella" "Anna and Arwen" but ngl, I hope you keeps track & soon enough there's event/s & content for Isabella route, evening things out.
Cause otherwise, there doesn't really seem to be much of an incentive for players to pick Isabella's route currently.

Isabella is not forgotten. The results of choosing her will show up in a future update.

 

[Reniere]

Well, Arwen, according to the Codex is a normie like Parker, Riley, Mrs Ross. So unless we can on longer trust in the validity of the codex anymore (though there was no reason to doubt it until now, but who knows), I doubt it's from her.

My guess is it's probably something like MC's own powers evolving Evelyn's powers to higher level to make him go into many years in the past.

I think someone mentioned that once a person mentions their power or any info is mentioned about said person the codex updates.
So Arwen hasn't mentioned if she has powers so till said time its kept as none.

But then again i could have read what they wrote wrong.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

- Mrs Ross's niece Meredith I thought was a pretty engaging character in terms of her personality and looks. Her power age deceleration while I do kinda agree may not be as useful as other more OP abilities, you never know how it may be useful (so yoink! )

Yeah, uh, about that. I think you may have missed the required part of her power. How do you feel about swallowing cum?

 

[JJJ84]

Yeah, uh, about that. I think you may have missed the required part of her power. How do you feel about swallowing cum?

Took a look at the scene afterwards (that talk with Ruth MC has), and you are right I had missed that.
Well, I guess I can scratch that off the list

 

[Reniere]

Yeah, uh, about that. I think you may have missed the required part of her power. How do you feel about swallowing cum?

I mean...... Does female cum count ?
Doesn't her power also make other body parts feel like "pussy" ? maybe it will make Mc's body parts feel like his penis ?

 

[e6mill]

I mean...... Does female cum count ?

If so, I can envision it helping offset the drawback of Lucia's power.

 

[JJJ84]

I mean...... Does female cum count ?
Doesn't her power also make other body parts feel like "pussy" ? maybe it will make Mc's body parts feel like his penis ?

That's what I was initially questioning too, given Meredith the individual with age deceleration swallows cum to retain youth, perhaps with MC's case, he has to swallow female ejaculation (or squirting) to be able to get the benefits of age deceleration power (and not swallowing male cum).

But even if that's the case, it seems with MC's interaction with Ruth after his sex with Meredith, he seems to dismiss it saying "I have to swallow cum, so it's a useless power." and dismissing it altogether.
So it could be MC could just swallow female ejaculation/squirts for all we know (or don't know).
Yet, given MC seems dismissive of the power, I'd say it's highly unlikely that this power will come into play compared to others, due to this requirement.

If so, I can envision it helping offset the drawback of Lucia's power.

Huh, that is actually a good point, especially given Lucia's power's drawback is that power cutting on the user's lifespan.
Interesting......

There would need to be something which measures/scan MC to state how old his actual body is to clarify this though.
I suppose Moonsong can come up with something, with MC thinking the ability is useless being surprised that he's aging pretty much normally despite using Lucia's power (due to Meredith's power offsetting it).

 

[Reniere]

If so, I can envision it helping offset the drawback of Lucia's power.

Oh shit yea i completely forgot about Lucia's power side affect.
So yea that 100% will offset but drinking female sexual fluids will be a monthly ? or yearly thing unless the drawback of her power is everyday to weekly sex

 

[Elhemeer]

Just finished the update (with both Isabella path & Anna + Arwen path).

I enjoyed it quite a bit.
In terms of main story itself (i.e. MC's actual storylines with the Sisterhood & mystery about how MC got his empath powers), there wasn't that much progression.
Having said that, there were quite a bit of side stories which I thought were quite engaging as well as collecting them powers which are always fun;

- Mrs Ross's niece Meredith I thought was a pretty engaging character in terms of her personality and looks. Her power age deceleration while I do kinda agree may not be as useful as other more OP abilities, you never know how it may be useful (so yoink! ) uh, never mind. totally slipped my mind that MC has to swallow cum
- Lucia's events with Sapphire were not too shabby also. While I wouldn't say them two are my favorite LIs (my current 2 favorites are Ghostraven & Lady Steel) their scenes were hot.
- Same could be said of Anna & Arwen in their route. Good interactions between characters and pretty good reasoning was used to link Anna's plotline with Sisterhood.

One thing that I'm gonna be looking forward to will be Lady Steel's match with her opponent the following day.
Jacquesdor how many more updates can we expect Lady Steel to be the forefront out of all the Sisterhood?

Initially the main LI from Sisterhood we interacted the most was Moonsong, for 3 updates or so (though I could be somewhat off with the numbers, given I didn't literally count lol) then shift was moved towards Lady Steel.
Ruth as a character has done a phenomenal job so far, and this is by no way me rushing you to change to the next one (until you feel it's absolutely the right time).
But it does have me curious as to when transition to next Sisterhood member arc will take place.


If there are any critiques, I have 2;

1) Zero new content for Isabella branch players
Couple of updates ago, story went through a branch (though not the first); with MC picking either Isabella herself or projection of Anna (movie star).
Picking Anna projection allowed MC for extra dialogue with Anna & Arwen in that said path in one of the previous updates when MC meets them for the first time.
There's also one really chunky event with this most recent update with MC, Evelyn, Anna, & Arwen which further develops their relationship.

Whereas for those who picked the Isabella option, well there has been..... nothing.
No new lines, arcs for players who chose her.

Granted, I have saves for both routes each named "Isabella" "Anna and Arwen" but ngl, I hope you keeps track & soon enough there's event/s & content for Isabella route, evening things out.
Cause otherwise, there doesn't really seem to be much of an incentive for players to pick Isabella's route currently.


2) Referencing other games.
I'm someone who when it comes to references or crossover (from other AVNs), prefers things to be very, very subtle. I'm not a fan of frequent referencing or fan service being constantly thrown.
Cause I feel doing so just feels like a distraction and moreso detracts from the experience than adds to it.

Now going into this current update, I felt for some reason this update just contained several referencing of other AVNs either explicitly (literal name dropping) or implicitly (describing the game).
3 or more AVNs get referenced with that watching movies with Lady Steel scene (Eternum, Come Home, Desert Stalker at least), and Chasing Sunsets get frequently mentioned by Anna in her & Arwen's event.

Desert Stalker, I love, and Eternum I do like.
Yet I haven't played Come Home & Chasing Sunsets I wasn't a huge fan of it towards later game.
But regardless of whether I liked the said AVN or not (or whether I played it or not), all these talks about other games, I'm sorry to say, they all just felt like...... distractions.

Jacquesdor, was this done because there was an agreement between you and other devs of those games? Like cross promotion (them agreeing to promote your game within their games and you agreeing to do the same)?
If so, it is what it is, and there's nothing more I can say about that.

But if not, and this was done solely because you're fan of those games, well perhaps I'm in the minority with this (different strokes for different folks I guess) but I hope you ease up on the references with future updates.
Cause for me, they felt a bit too much in this update (and being brutally honest? I'd much rather just focus on your game's storyline than get even a bit distracted by references to other games).


Having said the above, this game still remains the best Superhero AVN in my eyes.
And I'll be looking forward to the next update;
Match between Lady Steel and her opponent, I have a feeling it's gonna be a banger.

I think there were at least two more, one was pretty blatant (but only if you played).

Yeah, uh, about that. I think you may have missed the required part of her power. How do you feel about swallowing cum?

Interestingly, the MC says this, but at the same time we saw possible evidence of an evolution of one of the adopted powers (apparently you get the final scene regardless of whether you engage with arwen (& anna) or not, so even if she has a power, either that's not it or there's a flaw that needs fixing). So if that's true, maybe the requirement will change for MC ... maybe he'll have to start drinking the squirters to take advantage ... plus his power seems to make him god's gift once people get a whiff of him. The rest of her power set seems like it could make that even more of an unfair advantage.

EDIT:

That's what I was initially questioning too, given Meredith the individual with age deceleration swallows cum to retain youth, perhaps with MC's case, he has to swallow female ejaculation (or squirting) to be able to get the benefits of age deceleration power (and not swallowing male cum).

But even if that's the case, it seems with MC's interaction with Ruth after his sex with Meredith, he seems to dismiss it saying "I have to swallow cum, so it's a useless power." and dismissing it altogether.
So it could be MC could just swallow female ejaculation/squirts for all we know (or don't know).
Yet, given MC seems dismissive of the power, I'd say it's highly unlikely that this power will come into play compared to others, due to this requirement.


Huh, that is actually a good point, especially given Lucia's power's drawback is that power cutting on the user's lifespan.
Interesting......

There would need to be something which measures/scan MC to state how old his actual body is to clarify this though.
I suppose Moonsong can come up with something, with MC thinking the ability is useless being surprised that he's aging pretty much normally despite using Lucia's power (due to Meredith's power offsetting it).

I did have a unique take, but still ...

 

[Reniere]

That's what I was initially questioning too, given Meredith the individual with age deceleration swallows cum to retain youth, perhaps with MC's case, he has to swallow female ejaculation (or squirting) to be able to get the benefits of age deceleration power (and not swallowing male cum).

I think MC just dismissing it has to do with the fact he doesn't even understand the powers he takes and doesn't even think about how they would change towards him. I would think every power that is female based once he gains them. They alter to his body or change to match the Male body.

Lets say (Hopefully there isn't a power where a female can make her clit bigger) it would change to match Mc's body can he can make himself bigger.

Now MC mentioned that Meredith Boobjob felt like he was fucking a pussy so did her mouth but not her ass ( because she still had not learned how to do it yet) Would MC be able to make his fingers and tongue feel like his penis ?
if that is a side-affect of her power.

Would MC get that same side-affect but the male version ?

 

[gregers]

I can understand those who feel that this chapter was mostly spinning its wheels plot-wise, but it did do what was necessary (resolve the scene in the school bathroom and set up a few plot threads to pursue in the future) and develop some relationships.


I did wonder if indulging Meredith would lead to trouble down the line. We know from Evelyn's vision that she's peripherally involved in whatever her aunt is up to and her aunt holds her back for a private conversation before she goes off to fuck the MC.

1) Zero new content for Isabella branch players
Couple of updates ago, story went through a branch (though not the first); with MC picking either Isabella herself or projection of Anna (movie star).
Picking Anna projection allowed MC for extra dialogue with Anna & Arwen in that said path in one of the previous updates when MC meets them for the first time.
There's also one really chunky event with this most recent update with MC, Evelyn, Anna, & Arwen which further develops their relationship.

Whereas for those who picked the Isabella option, well there has been..... nothing.
No new lines, arcs for players who chose her.

Granted, I have saves for both routes each named "Isabella" "Anna and Arwen" but ngl, I hope you keeps track & soon enough there's event/s & content for Isabella route, evening things out.
Cause otherwise, there doesn't really seem to be much of an incentive for players to pick Isabella's route currently.

The Anna/Arwen/Evelyn scene is a major part of the chapter. Having it depend on (a) the MC going along with coercing a prisoner into sex in chapter ... 1 or 2? and (b) picking that particular shape for the scene makes very little sense. I know it comes up in conversation when he meets the two of them, but there's no reason for that to be the gate-keeper.

There's been no active choice on my playthrough not to pursue Anna and Arwen. It's just a side-effect of a seemingly unrelated choice made long before the MC met either of them.

2) Referencing other games.
I'm someone who when it comes to references or crossover (from other AVNs), prefers things to be very, very subtle. I'm not a fan of frequent referencing or fan service being constantly thrown.
Cause I feel doing so just feels like a distraction and moreso detracts from the experience than adds to it.

Now going into this current update, I felt for some reason this update just contained several referencing of other AVNs either explicitly (literal name dropping) or implicitly (describing the game).
3 or more AVNs get referenced with that watching movies with Lady Steel scene (Eternum, Come Home, Desert Stalker at least), and Chasing Sunsets get frequently mentioned by Anna in her & Arwen's event.

Desert Stalker, I love, and Eternum I do like.
Yet I haven't played Come Home & Chasing Sunsets I wasn't a huge fan of it towards later game.
But regardless of whether I liked the said AVN or not (or whether I played it or not), all these talks about other games, I'm sorry to say, they all just felt like...... distractions.

Jacquesdor, was this done because there was an agreement between you and other devs of those games? Like cross promotion (them agreeing to promote your game within their games and you agreeing to do the same)?
If so, it is what it is, and there's nothing more I can say about that.

But if not, and this was done solely because you're fan of those games, well perhaps I'm in the minority with this (different strokes for different folks I guess) but I hope you ease up on the references with future updates.
Cause for me, they felt a bit too much in this update (and being brutally honest? I'd much rather just focus on your game's storyline than get even a bit distracted by references to other games).

I agree with this. I can ignore the occasional oblique reference, but having it front and center like this is just annoying. Diverts my (very limited) brain power to figuring out which games are being referenced rather than being immersed in the story.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

I mean...... Does female cum count ?
Doesn't her power also make other body parts feel like "pussy" ? maybe it will make Mc's body parts feel like his penis ?

I realize the MC does make that comparison (at least with her tits), but I don't think it's so much that her power makes her other body parts feel like pussy, just that during sex her body somehow morphs / accomodates the guy to give him the best possible sensation in order to facilitate her getting cum. And since the pussy is basically designed by nature to milk a cock it's pretty up there on the "feels good" scale, so it would make sense that the sensation is similar.

Now, as for "female cum", no, I doubt it, it seems to be specific to semen. Now, that said, we don't know if pussy juice would work for him since he's male. We also don't know if his own cum would work. Sure, still not ideal and not something your average guy would relish doing, but for eternal youth? ...eh...pretty sure a lot of us would make the sacrifice when we hit the "grunting in pain whenever you have to stand up" or "shit hurts for no fucking reason" phases in life.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Did I miss something 4 chicks he banged but got only one power. Am I correct?

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Did I miss something 4 chicks he banged but got only one power. Am I correct?

Incorrect. Banged Sapphire and got "Sapphire Power" and banged Anna and, presumably, got Hyperpolyglotism (untested). Technically got sucked off by Lucia but the "superpower transfer cum" was licked off Sapphire and there was too much of a delay so he didn't get time stopping (yet), and...whatever Anna's girlfriend's name is (I can't remember at the moment) doesn't have powers so there's nothing to gain from her... aside from a contact high I guess.

 

[gregers]

Did I miss something 4 chicks he banged but got only one power. Am I correct?

Possibly picked up two, but since they're both branch-dependent chances are they won't be used much in the main story.

(Although Anna's power can easily be referenced with a few lines here and there without requiring extra renders or affecting the plot too much.)

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Possibly picked up two, but since they're both branch-dependent chances are they won't be used much in the main story.

(Although Anna's power can easily be referenced with a few lines here and there without requiring extra renders or affecting the plot too much.)

I want the MC to bust out random Swahili during a conversation with Lady Steel.