Ren'Py Abandoned Other Academy [v1.2] [RGBlack]

[Woodstock_1983]

Just got a few suggestions like following:

• As everyone said, edit the preview pictures!
• Change the default language to English.
• Get someone to proofread the English part, there are parts where it's hard to understand. Then there are parts where it's switched to Spanish then back to English.
• Add full stops at the end of sentences.
• I think there's a huge bug with the bathroom part. I gotta click 3 times for it to work, the first 2 times it leads me to the hallway and then the classroom. And then as soon as the gym unlocks, the bathroom door leads me directly to the gym scene. And then you can also train your strength in that bathroom door...
• I think you would need to fix the names of MC. He's still called Maki on a few renders.
• The jukebox has some errors...There are 3 disks, and the first and third one are the same track.
• Edit the version to 0.1 instead of 1.0.

That's probably everything I got for now. Good luck, dev!

I agree. It keeps say he,his, and him when talking about girls. I got cofused so much that I have to read slowly and figure out who the messages were about. Even at the beginning when you're in the bed, it says his and he when referring to the MC instead of say I.

 

[telefonomusica]

RGBlack, I really like the preview pics. You can't add tags that don't yet exist in the game, but please add your planned tags under the Genre: spoiler in the first post in the thread.

Yes it is extremely important, also in my opinion it helps to specify if the main character has a name.

 

[RGBlack]

RGBlack, I really like the preview pics. You can't add tags that don't yet exist in the game, but please add your planned tags under the Genre: spoiler in the first post in the thread.

I have already put several planned tags.
They are fairly common tags, I don't plan to add Trans, NTR/Sharing, Futanari, Pregnancy and related to these.
Although there are others like Lesbian, Corrupted and exhibitionism that are in my head. But I don't know whether to do them, so I was going to discuss that with you in the future.

 

[BlasKyau]

I have already put several planned tags.
They are fairly common tags, I don't plan to add Trans, NTR/Sharing, Futanari, Pregnancy and related to these.
Although there are others like Lesbian, Corrupted and exhibitionism that are in my head. But I don't know whether to do them, so I was going to discuss that with you in the future.

I personally would add romance, but I don't know exactly if that's what you want to do.

Also, if you are going to add lesbian sex, femdom and other fetishes, I recommend making them avoidable.

 

[crazeegecko]

did i break the game or was there only one "event" so far , all the girls now say " i have no reason to talk to her" been training and studying for 2 weeks or so in between the teaching lol

 

[RGBlack]

did i break the game or was there only one "event" so far , all the girls now say " i have no reason to talk to her" been training and studying for 2 weeks or so in between the teaching lol

You didn't break the game, if I'm not mistaken there are about 7 events where you must talk to the girls, which are:
Evelyn Monday, Hallways).
Lily (Monday, Academy entrance).
Arya (Thursday, Academy entrance).
Emma (History).
Rosa (Thursday, Hallways).
Akira (Gym, Thursday, Noon).
Roxxane (Gym, Saturday, Noon).
Then there are the events that appear after you take the classes.
In the next update that I will bring soon, I have improved the quest system for the girls.
So you won't be stressed anymore guessing where to go.
I have posted some information in the Itch.io, if you want you can stop by to check it out.

 

[crazeegecko]

much appreciated RGBlack, thanks

 

[battali0n]

I tried your game but I couldn't get past the initial monologue of the MC because the English translation was so bad. I kind of got the idea he was trying to convey but it was such a struggle to understand that I decided it wasn't worth it. I'll check back in a couple of updates to see if it gets better.

 

[voidzone247]

Was this autotranslated or something? "Jijiji"?

 

[RGBlack]

Was this autotranslated or something? "Jijiji"?

It's "Jijiiji" because I wanted to, although I think it should be "Hihihi". I'm not sure.
Have a nice day Void .

 

[jjoron95]

save 100% last update

 

[battali0n]

I have already put several planned tags.
They are fairly common tags, I don't plan to add Trans, NTR/Sharing, Futanari, Pregnancy and related to these.
Although there are others like Lesbian, Corrupted and exhibitionism that are in my head. But I don't know whether to do them, so I was going to discuss that with you in the future.

I am considering trying your game but I am don't like bi-sexual Li's or lesbian content so I wanted to ask if those will be optional. I don't mind any kinks as long as they are optional.

 

[RGBlack]

I am considering trying your game but I am don't like bi-sexual Li's or lesbian content so I wanted to ask if those will be optional. I don't mind any kinks as long as they are optional.

I don't really believe in adding lesbian content and even less if the main character is not in the scene. Have a nice day battali!

 

[battali0n]

I don't really believe in adding lesbian content and even less if the main character is not in the scene. Have a nice day battali!

Thank you for replying. I will try your game out.

 

[telefonomusica]

I see group sex in the planned tags, is it going to include other guys?
hopefully not but these things should be specified, to avoid disappointement later, also it should be specified what kind of voyeurism it is, do you watch girls masturbating or having fun with each other or do you watch other guys have sex?
because I personally hate the latter, I am sayng this for the sake of clarity, the more details you give the less chanche to have people complain about content they don't like, either way good luck in your endeavours.

 

[RGBlack]

I see group sex in the planned tags, is it going to include other guys?
hopefully not but these things should be specified, to avoid disappointement later, also it should be specified what kind of voyeurism it is, do you watch girls masturbating or having fun with each other or do you watch other guys have sex?
because I personally hate the latter, I am sayng this for the sake of clarity, the more details you give the less chanche to have people complain about content they don't like, either way good luck in your endeavours.

Oh really sorry for not having clarified these ideas.
Group sex will be between the player and two or more girls. And voyeurism is that the player will see other girls. There will be no ntr in my game. Have a nice day Telefono!

 

[Rayan500]

Anyone working on updating the APK link?

 

[Woodstock_1983]

Just got a few suggestions like following:

• As everyone said, edit the preview pictures!
• Change the default language to English.
• Get someone to proofread the English part, there are parts where it's hard to understand. Then there are parts where it's switched to Spanish then back to English.
• Add full stops at the end of sentences.
• I think there's a huge bug with the bathroom part. I gotta click 3 times for it to work, the first 2 times it leads me to the hallway and then the classroom. And then as soon as the gym unlocks, the bathroom door leads me directly to the gym scene. And then you can also train your strength in that bathroom door...
• I think you would need to fix the names of MC. He's still called Maki on a few renders.
• The jukebox has some errors...There are 3 disks, and the first and third one are the same track.
• Edit the version to 0.1 instead of 1.0.

That's probably everything I got for now. Good luck, dev!

I would add, explain what the test is about. I don't remember reading about the test you're supposed to be studding for is about. I'm mostly studying and teaching a class. If something happens while teaching, I follow it but then go back to just study and teach a class. What happens after you take the so called test, is it the end of the game or what?

 

[Woodstock_1983]

Sorry to everyone for how ridiculous I've been, hahaha.
The slow internet, the mistakes I've made, and personal things in life have made me look ridiculous.
When I'm free I'll fix everyone, again, sorry.

If I was a developer like you and I was struggling, I would contact other Devs and ask them to help me. I don't know why so many newbies want to develop games alone without help. If you want to be a loner, then don't present the games until you've had time to go back over everything and make sure it's working properly. I've noticed from other devs on this site that not one person can develop a game as big as these games alone, you need a huge team and having them working together.

 

[RGBlack]

I would add, explain what the test is about. I don't remember reading about the test you're supposed to be studding for is about. I'm mostly studying and teaching a class. If something happens while teaching, I follow it but then go back to just study and teach a class. What happens after you take the so called test, is it the end of the game or what?

It is an event that will be held in the future, I was thinking of adding the studios when the event was held. But the event happens in 60 days of the game. I wasn't really decided, so I left it just in case.
All the events that are available so far are written in the girls information screen.
Have a nice day Wood <3