VN Ren'Py Abandoned Our Fate - A new family [v0.15 SE] [CedSense]

4.60 star(s) 83 Votes

ViperDevlin44

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This is an awesome game granted i was looking forward to some sexy time with the daughter but the slow pace builds more story and anticipation so im sold
 
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Yandere Lover

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I agree with you @Casey Bock people take the story for granted. Honestly I'm glad CedSense is focusing on the story, it makes the wait all the more rewarding for those with patience.
 

ViperDevlin44

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I agree with you @Casey Bock people take the story for granted. Honestly I'm glad CedSense is focusing on the story, it makes the wait all the more rewarding for those with patience.
Indeed though i am curious how the submission and corruption route will play out if nothing else the story should be good
 

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I don't think he made any changes in those two paths say for some dialog. Although some people are fans of corruption and submissive me not so much.
 

Rellik2217

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Loving the slow buildup to the eventual lewd scenes with the daughter. I just hope that the final part of the game is not that close to the first lewd scene, as I really want to see the sexual relationship develop when the time eventually comes.
 

ViperDevlin44

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I don't think he made any changes in those two paths say for some dialog. Although some people are fans of corruption and submissive me not so much.
I have to agree the white knight path or love path is good and it portrays the mc's struggle with the desire for her in a good way
 
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Loving the slow buildup to the eventual lewd scenes with the daughter. I just hope that the final part of the game is not that close to the first lewd scene, as I really want to see the sexual relationship develop when the time eventually comes.
I'm with you here. This story is so good, it would be a pity to have it end as soon as they do the deed.
Instead, it would be really interesting to see how they could make such a relationship work out.
I do suspect Susan could play an important role in that.
 
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JDgamer

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I'm and here's another review, this game will be special, if and/or when it's finished.

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This is a linear game with inconsequential branching paths, you will ultimately end up in the same place but with slightly different dialogue. Basically a choose your own adventure game, which I'm okay with but it doesn't seem to have any game overs in it. So You'll get where you need to get eventually.

Right from the start that Main menu is sexy as fuck. Feels like a 90's Soap opera or possibly 80's, absolutely beautiful! It's like I'm about to watch an episode of the Bachelor or General Hospital. Not that I'm saying I did or anything... Also the decision to only have Start, Load, Settings and Quit is a nice return to traditional form. I like that.

I was impressed with the audio and music choices but the music constantly changes throughout the game, I'm starting to think music should be critiqued as well. Well placed music can make a scene pop and stand out. Poorly placed music will make you want to just mute the whole game. There were times when I muted large chunks of the game, mostly on my second play through but yeah, I muted your game, sorry.

I like how you have the Incest options right at the front, "Hey ummm, you want her to be your daughter or not???" Good on you for not beating around the bush and just sticking your head right in the middle of it, good on you. On a strange not, at the very beginning there's a moving bus that reveal's the main female character and for some reason, some odd reason I started thinking about an old ass WCW wrestling game that a truck driving from arena to arena, I can't remember the title of it but I think it was the first game with Goldberg in it. Anyways, yeah, a moving bus made me think of an old wrestling game, meh.

This game renders an entire scene but then creates sprites of the same character and shows them in the traditional Renpy style. So at many moments you will have a fully rendered scene and then a clone of the character will appear infront of you and start talking. You'll be seeing double vision for sure. One thing that did confuse me though was that the scenes are fully rendered. Why are the sex scenes against a black background? Why not just animate the sex scene in the rendered room?

There's a coffee shop in this game that made me pause and think of something, not another wrestling game but of other porn games I've played. Why? Cause that coffee shop is the same damn coffee shop in the other games I've played. At first I was like "Not the same coffee shop again, damn it." Then I started thinking, wait a minute.. "Is this a shared universe scenario???" Do characters from this game exist in the same world as characters from other games? Are they all existing in the same dimension and are just being controlled by us??? Mind blowing... I then put the alcohol down and made a tea to center myself. Organic loose leaf, caffeine free.

As for the story, it's alright, it builds and builds the further you get into the game. I like how you have the option of either corrupting her or dominating her depending on how you treated her. Very smart and similar to a game I'm working on, which I'll probably never finish. Unfortunately the climax has yet to come so this game almost made the Blue Balled list to be honest. But because you could fuck so many other hot girls and Milf's, I'm willing to wait for further version updates. Just don't keep me waiting too long.


Our Fate v0.9 by gets a... CUMSHOT!


If there wasn't as many beautifully rendered sex scenes this game would have been blue balled. I can see how some people might stay away from this game but I can also see why people want to keep playing. The story really does pick up in late game and you just want to corrupt or dominate her so badly, uh ah I mean fall in love and romance her... Yeah that's what I meant..

Here's how I came to this conclusion/score.


Cumshots
  1. Game has a well written story. (It has a lot of build up and I like the dynamics between the characters It's a serviceable story, something you might stop and watch while eating cheese puffs.)
  2. Game has animations. (Okay, the animations in this game are pretty damn good. The sound effects line up perfectly with every thrust and hand jerk, i love it.)
  3. Game has not used all default game engine assets without customizing them. (That main menu is flipping gorgeous, straight out out of a Days Of Our Lives or General Hospital episode. And those menu options are a nice design, good job.)
  4. Game has well designed female models. (Oh they sexy as fuck, I can't wait to play with the blonde.)
  5. Game has no mundane tasks that take too long to get through and become a boring chore. (Zero tasks in this game, read the story, pick a path and walk it. It's a porn game remember.)
  6. Game does not have extremely long loading/traveling/transition screens. (There's no world map in this game it's a choose your own adventure/path game, no long pauses for dramatic effect either.)
  7. Games user interface is intuitive and well designed. (Those menu choices again are an interesting design and I like the sound effects.)


Blue Balls
  1. Game is 100% Complete. (Almost there but probably not.)
  2. Game has replay value that does not rely on story alone. (Honestly this in my opinion is a one and done. I like the models and the story is getting interesting but without the story you're just skipping to the sex scenes on your second playthrough.)
  3. Game takes a decent amount of time to finish or see all that it has to offer if it has no definitive end. (I blew through this game in less than two hours, both paths. This one won't take you long.)
  4. The Sex or tease portions are sufficient and are not few and far between. (I like the sex scenes but good lord do you have to read a lot of story to get to them. Few and far between for real.)
 
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I'm and here's another review, this game will be special, if and/or when it's finished.

---

This is a linear game with inconsequential branching paths, you will ultimately end up in the same place but with slightly different dialogue. Basically a choose your own adventure game, which I'm okay with but it doesn't seem to have any game overs in it. So You'll get where you need to get eventually.

Right from the start that Main menu is sexy as fuck. Feels like a 90's Soap opera or possibly 80's, absolutely beautiful! It's like I'm about to watch an episode of the Bachelor or General Hospital. Not that I'm saying I did or anything... Also the decision to only have Start, Load, Settings and Quit is a nice return to traditional form. I like that.

I was impressed with the audio and music choices but the music constantly changes throughout the game, I'm starting to think music should be critiqued as well. Well placed music can make a scene pop and stand out. Poorly placed music will make you want to just mute the whole game. There were times when I muted large chunks of the game, mostly on my second play through but yeah, I muted your game, sorry.

I like how you have the Incest options right at the front, "Hey ummm, you want her to be your daughter or not???" Good on you for not beating around the bush and just sticking your head right in the middle of it, good on you. On a strange not, at the very beginning there's a moving bus that reveal's the main female character and for some reason, some odd reason I started thinking about an old ass WCW wrestling game that a truck driving from arena to arena, I can't remember the title of it but I think it was the first game with Goldberg in it. Anyways, yeah, a moving bus made me think of an old wrestling game, meh.

This game renders an entire scene but then creates sprites of the same character and shows them in the traditional Renpy style. So at many moments you will have a fully rendered scene and then a clone of the character will appear infront of you and start talking. You'll be seeing double vision for sure. One thing that did confuse me though was that the scenes are fully rendered. Why are the sex scenes against a black background? Why not just animate the sex scene in the rendered room?

There's a coffee shop in this game that made me pause and think of something, not another wrestling game but of other porn games I've played. Why? Cause that coffee shop is the same damn coffee shop in the other games I've played. At first I was like "Not the same coffee shop again, damn it." Then I started thinking, wait a minute.. "Is this a shared universe scenario???" Do characters from this game exist in the same world as characters from other games? Are they all existing in the same dimension and are just being controlled by us??? Mind blowing... I then put the alcohol down and made a tea to center myself. Organic loose leaf, caffeine free.

As for the story, it's alright, it builds and builds the further you get into the game. I like how you have the option of either corrupting her or dominating her depending on how you treated her. Very smart and similar to a game I'm working on, which I'll probably never finish. Unfortunately the climax has yet to come so this game almost made the Blue Balled list to be honest. But because you could fuck so many other hot girls and Milf's, I'm willing to wait for further version updates. Just don't keep me waiting too long.


Our Fate v0.9 by gets a... CUMSHOT!


If there wasn't as many beautifully rendered sex scenes this game would have been blue balled. I can see how some people might stay away from this game but I can also see why people want to keep playing. The story really does pick up in late game and you just want to corrupt or dominate her so badly, uh ah I mean fall in love and romance her... Yeah that's what I meant..

Here's how I came to this conclusion/score.


Cumshots
  1. Game has a well written story. (It has a lot of build up and I like the dynamics between the characters It's a serviceable story, something you might stop and watch while eating cheese puffs.)
  2. Game has animations. (Okay, the animations in this game are pretty damn good. The sound effects line up perfectly with every thrust and hand jerk, i love it.)
  3. Game has not used all default game engine assets without customizing them. (That main menu is flipping gorgeous, straight out out of a Days Of Our Lives or General Hospital episode. And those menu options are a nice design, good job.)
  4. Game has well designed female models. (Oh they sexy as fuck, I can't wait to play with the blonde.)
  5. Game has no mundane tasks that take too long to get through and become a boring chore. (Zero tasks in this game, read the story, pick a path and walk it. It's a porn game remember.)
  6. Game does not have extremely long loading/traveling/transition screens. (There's no world map in this game it's a choose your own adventure/path game, no long pauses for dramatic effect either.)
  7. Games user interface is intuitive and well designed. (Those menu choices again are an interesting design and I like the sound effects.)


Blue Balls
  1. Game is 100% Complete. (Almost there but probably not.)
  2. Game has replay value that does not rely on story alone. (Honestly this in my opinion is a one and done. I like the models and the story is getting interesting but without the story you're just skipping to the sex scenes on your second playthrough.)
  3. Game takes a decent amount of time to finish or see all that it has to offer if it has no definitive end. (I blew through this game in less than two hours, both paths. This one won't take you long.)
  4. The Sex or tease portions are sufficient and are not few and far between. (I like the sex scenes but good lord do you have to read a lot of story to get to them. Few and far between for real.)
I really don't consider this a game as much as a visual novel where you have some control of the direction of the plot. I agree the visuals are top notch. I love the story lone so far. The characters appear to have been created by the developers instead of borrowed for somewhere else as I haven't seen them in any other game or VN. Some characters appear in in a number of games.
 
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Yandere Lover

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Yeah, don't much care for Susan. I can't believe what she wanted in the Daughters room. I mean common its her bedroom.
 
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And who the hell is dating a writer and never bothers reading one of their books?
I expect in "the real world" more than, apparently, you think. The are movie actors who never watch their own films. It also depends on the type of book. If my partner were writing "Harlequin Romance" novels I'd never read one of them as that genre hold zero interest for me.
 

heimdal74

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I wonder if Susan sees another guy because she must always go somewhere she never stays at MC, in short I wonder if Ray will not be hired to follow susan see if she cheats on MC with another guy !!
 
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