VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

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Blurpee69

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Samovych Hydzinski said:
Kek, is Jeremy really that bad? Louise seems plenty satisfied.

When did the game say that?
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The impression I've gotten of Louise is she isn't the best at picking romantic partners. Seems to be hinted at in the earlier parts of the game.

As for when the game covered Jeremy's stamina issue, if he has a threesome with Ian and Allison, the player basically gets to decide if Ian can outlast Jeremy or not. If Ian does it's, again, implied that Ian is the more skilled lover. I don't remember the exact line, but it's something along "I'll give her what she needs." and Allison comments in agreement.

Thinking about it though, I think that's the only situation that brings up any sort of commentary on Jeremy not being satisfactory. If Ian doesn't take interest in Allison, or if Lena takes interest in Jeremy, both seem happy with his skill. I don't remember Jeremy's different paths all that well, since I usually let Louise dump him.
 
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Blurpee69 said:
The impression I've gotten of Louise is she isn't the best at picking romantic partners. Seems to be hinted at in the earlier parts of the game.

As for when the game covered Jeremy's stamina issue, if he has a threesome with Ian and Allison, the player basically gets to decide if Ian can outlast Jeremy or not. If Ian does it's, again, implied that Ian is the more skilled lover. I don't remember the exact line, but it's something along "I'll give her what she needs." and Allison comments in agreement.

Thinking about it though, I think that's the only situation that brings up any sort of commentary on Jeremy not being satisfactory. If Ian doesn't take interest in Allison, or if Lena takes interest in Jeremy, both seem happy with his skill. I don't remember Jeremy's different paths all that well, since I usually let Louise dump him.
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If you keep Jeremy and Louise together for a while, you won't miss much. We don't see them having sex again until their potential breakup after the truth and dare. I refuse to let Lena suck his dick, so maybe Jeremy and Louise still fuck on that route.
 
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Vengeance_11 said:
I'm wondering what the context of that will be.
Did Gillian get a makeover after she broke up with Ian or is she being redrawn in the flashback/dream sequence as well?
In any case, she would have to at least be on Lena's level looks wise if she's to compete with her for Ian's affections.
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I got the imperssion that she'll just be getting a new outfit (and thank god for that because it would be pretty weird if she still wore the same t-shirt and jeans from like 2 years ago). But who knows, mayeb Eva will change her looks a bit as well.
 
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MadMax7 said:
Midjourney works
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Looks really good. Except Cindy and Allison doesn't really look like them. Is that jeremy, why is he white? Rest are amazing.

Geralt From Rivia said:
Looks really good, but this AI needs to learn how to work with colors, especially hair. I can't recognize some characters here, who's the girl on 7th pic?
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i think thats Minerva
 
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MadMax7 said:
Midjourney works
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Looks really good, but this AI needs to learn how to work with colors, especially hair. I can't recognize some characters here, who's the girl on 7th pic?
 
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ffive said:
PilotLara sorry to bother, but there's what seems like a minor bug/inconsistency in Chapter 7:
Python: 
            "{image=icon_lust.webp}Flirty comment" if v5_cindy_nude > 1 and ian_lust > 4:
                $ renpy.block_rollback()
                $ v7_cindy_pics = 2
                i "{i}They're spectacular, Cindy. Even better than the first ones{/i}."
                "It was hard typing with just one hand."
                c "{i}Right? I like these a lot more!{/i}"
                i "{i}You look a lot more comfortable. And that black bodysuit looks great on you... Though it seems like it's coming off {image=emoji_flirt.webp}{/i}"
                if v5_cindy_nude == 2:
                    c "{i}Yeah, we did some nude shots too, like last time... {image=emoji_shy.webp}{image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                elif v5_cindy_nude == 1:
                    c "{i}Yeah, we did some nude shots too at the end... {image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                    i "{i}Completely nude? Not just topless like last time?{/i}"
                    c "{i}Yeah {image=emoji_shy.webp}{image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                else:
                    c "{i}Yeah, we did some nude shots too at the end... {image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
                    i "{i}No way!{/i}"
                    c "{i}Yeah {image=emoji_shy.webp}{image=emoji_shy.webp}{/i}"
This menu option is only enabled when v5_cindy_nude equals 2, i.e. if the first photo session with Cindy ended up with completely nude shots, but the branch content is capable of handling other variants as well, so perhaps the requirement here should be relaxed/removed, leaving Ian's lust attribute as primary factor?

At the least, allowing this option if the first session ended with topless shots (v5_cindy_nude > 0) would create a nice sense of progression for Cindy/Ian (going from being topless in front of him, to sending him nudes)
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Thanks, ffive! I'll pass this along to Eva.
 
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Hey guys, anyone know the best choices for Ian vs Jeremy sparring in Ch. 10? Also, does Wen always comment "good spar" if Ian does well?
 
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Samovych Hydzinski said:
Hey guys, anyone know the best choices for Ian vs Jeremy sparring in Ch. 10? Also, does Wen always comment "good spar" if Ian does well?
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I don't think you can win that spar. I tried many different times, many different ways and Jeremy always one hits Ian. If you do alright though and don't immediately get knocked out Wen will congratulate Ian.
 
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