VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[fatpussy123]

A propos of nothing. Since in the next update we can expect the scooby gang to spend time at Perry's beach house, i wonder if Cindy will also be a part of it, or if her modeling contract will keep her busy the entire time. The former could be pretty neat, if there's ongoing affair with Ian.

(and by neat i mean a great source of petty rivalry and drama)

mmh thats actually pretty interesting. if you think about it, we've had two branching events before, like Holly's book tour and Wade's birthday, but what we haven't had is a double branch for the same event. So both Ian and Lena can go to the Wildcats or to Perry's beach house. This will create 4 possible branches:
-Ian and Lena both go to the beach house, Cindy is at Wildcats along with Ivy. Maybe we see videos and pics of the events.
-Ian goes with Cindy to the Wildcats. On the surface it seems like it'd blow their cover, but Cindy could easily say Ian was at the last photoshoot and trusts him, also Wade and her are taking a break so she doesnt want him following her. Lena goes to the beach house.
-Lena goes to the Wildcats. Spicy Ivy content and spicy Axel content. Maybe thats where we see the fabled Axel Cindy sex scene, but from Lena's perspective. Ian goes to beach house
-Ian and Lena both go to the Wildcats, either because they are dating or Ian is dating Cindy. Content could include a threesome with Ivy and Lena, Cindy and Axel from Ians perspective

 

[jduk]

Agreed. But I think misogynistic comments like these are bound to happen when you consider that this is a porn site, dominated by male audience and the most of the content focuses on sexualizing women even in games with FMC. I've read a lot of these that I would just ignore them.

gtfoh

 

[jduk]

Ian:Alison? I only see her as a friend.
-Alison sleeps with Jeremy-
Alison: I'm holding out hope for the 'One'.
Ian: Still see you as a friend.
-Alison sleeps with Jeremy, Billy-
Alison: Ian, why don't you come over and talk about Gillian?
Ian: Sure.
-Goes to her place, intending to talk about Gillian-
Alison: FUCK ME NOAW IAN!
Ian: What part of friends do you not underfuckingstand?

Hmmm... I wonder why people aren't fans of her... What could possibly be the reasoning there... Must be a great mystery indeed.

she's a slut

 

[jduk]

Robert is alright, there i said it people.

 

[ffive]

Will have to consult with Jeremy to find out if the bro code would prohibit Ian from beating him up

I think Jeremy won't mind a solid fight as part of the tournament, i mean, that's the whole point of the tournament, to see who can beat up other dudes the best.

Having Lena work as a stripper would be fun. Wonder if Seymour would interfere with that though. You just know the fallout between Wade/Cindy is going to fuck up the entire friend circle. I wouldn't be surprised if Perry kicks Ian out

IIRC Seymour's contract is about photo work and such, or media appearances. So he'd probably have a case demanding her to shut down her Stalkfap, but dancing in a club, i don't think so. And it's probably big enough club even Seymour would have trouble pressuring it.

And yeah, if Cindy thing comes to light i don't see Ian getting to stay at Perry's flat. Well, unless Cindy manages to make it seem all proper, like she's planning to.

Shes not working as a stripper, yet people. Bartending from what Ivy said if memory serves.

Yup, i just think it might be either Ivy's little scheme to ease Lena into it, or Eva's scheme to set things up for Lena to get opportunity for this kind of work down the road.

Also, working at the club gives Lena opportunity to spend more time with Mike, and maybe even witness his mysterious Gillfriend.

 

[John Doe Jr.]

I also dislike that they don't discuss commitment, considering that Ian can spend a weekend with her and dines at her home

I don't think this is a fault of Alison. I think that's purely Eva wanting to stretch things out. Which is fine imo we get more content out of it

 

[John Doe Jr.]

Shes not working as a stripper, yet people. Bartending from what Ivy said if memory serves.

Yeah but c'mon we all know where that will lead to. Though knowing Eva we'll probably get to choose whether Lena strips or bartends or it might be determined by stats or something. Either way I wonder how long into the game we'll get there bc if Lena is working for Seymour does she really need the extra money? Idk

 

[John Doe Jr.]

So he'd probably have a case demanding her to shut down her Stalkfap

I'll get on the Seymour hate train if this happens lmao

 

[SerHawkes]

Yeah but c'mon we all know where that will lead to. Though knowing Lena we'll probably get to choose whether Lena strips or bartends or it might be determined by stats or something. Either way I wonder how long into the game we'll get there bc if Lena is working for Seymour does she really need the extra money? Idk

Is it possible, sure. Likely? 50/50. Again though, it will be a matter of the players choice.

 

[ffive]

Either way I wonder how long into the game we'll get there bc if Lena is working for Seymour does she really need the extra money? Idk

For Lena working with Seymour there isn't much of incentive, yeah, but on the other hand Lena can be strapped for cash after rejecting Seymour's contract (and she gets another opportunity to do it in CH.11 for this matter, if she isn't too smitten with Seymour)

 

[Rivian8346]

Also, working at the club gives Lena opportunity to spend more time with Mike, and maybe even witness his mysterious Gillfriend.

I definitely think that at Lena's first shift at Blazer (which should be next chapter I think) she's going to see Gillian there (now that Lena knows who she is/what she looks like) with her boyfriend. And it seems likely that that boyfriend is Mike which creates a bunch of juicy drama.

Also some nice parallels between Cherry-Ian and Mike-Lena if both of those couples got together prior to Ian-Lena dating.

I think it'd be a cool moment if a Lena who fucked Mike could tell Ian about making Mike cheat on Gillian later in the story and give Ian the ability to get some payback by blowing up that relationship/hurting Gillian. Could be a cool moment.

 

[| Vee |]

The whole idea of "she isn't doing it for actual sex, it's just to make me jealous" is very, well, egocentric. As if Alison can't simply like a good dicking even if it comes from someone she doesn't have feelings about, completely aside her crush for Ian.

I didn't really had a problem with Alison at least she was bearable till ch11 prologue but in ch11 shit just hit the roof

1) She wants devoted attention to her only(why would I if i don't even love you or something) and cancel my arranged meeting with others
2) She admits in my Emma route (in club Alison vs Emma if you choose Emma but previously were on her path) that she did it bcz she was mad
3) If she was mad When she had Date(not date exactly) with Ian, Cherry and Perry She there Abandons Ian for Jeremy(yeah she has so much love/crush/sick love whatever shit she has for Ian). AND THAN GOES ON TRIP WITH JEREMY.
4) Than she the audacity to ask Ian to go with her for a THREESOME ON THE TRIP like just

5) She has crush/loved Ian for years where was She when Gillian(Chameleon) pull that stunt years years before. WHY DIDN'T SHE THAN SEDUCED IAN WHEN THERE WAS NO COMPETITION. HUH? WHY IF SHE WAS THIS LOVESICK.

6) In ch11 SHE GOES ON BIMBO RUOTE AND SEDUCES IAN BY SHOWING THAT SHE WANTS TO IAN TO SHARE HIS THOUGHTS SO THAT HE CAN LESSEN HIS BURDEN when he clearly states many times He doesn't want to.

7) Changing her hair color to blonde and than again agrees to change to previous one if Ian suggests it when she clearly mention that everyone loves THIS BLONDE. WHY would you value his opinion that much? CAUSE SHE IS... should introduce a new word for her at this point.

 

[ffive]

You guys get some weird Alisons. Mine just fucked around with Jeremy all time and invited Ian upstairs in Ch.11

 

[Alphaeboy]

My thoughts on Alison and other things

1. I honestly don't care what's Alison is doing; in sense she's kind in annoying part of her life where she's a bit depressed and being single after all these years just woken her inner freak where's down with anyone finds her attraction.

The thing with Ian; as someone who was in love with his best friend to the point I did Long distance relationships to make her jealous just as much as she made me jealous, plus I was obsessed and clingy think of the level of Louise and Alison mixed together. In sense I understand what's she doing but it's wrong.

It's clear that sleeping with Jeremy would clearly get him to brag to Ian maybe shoot his shot with him, that's why I don't she's mind with Ian knowing because she hoped he would want to try himself. I don't feel bad Jeremy because he's a bigger whore when next Ian and Lena if you played them like that.

2. I really like how Holly have great chemistry with both Ian/Lena. I don't mind the slow burn between Holly and Lena because this is new to them; even Ian picked up on that was pretty supportive about it.

Also, liked Ian/Holly confession scene if you over Gillian. Speaking about that; I really liked the moment they did not fight, argue and disrespected each other. She hurt him and he got closure.

3. Lena parents are something else....

4. I think Cindy might be cheating with Axel based on your choices; I don't think she would do if she's with Ian when it depends on what type of relationship you have with her.

I think Ian was really right about the fact that if it wouldn't him it would been someone else.

 

[| Vee |]

I think Ian was really right about the fact that if it wouldn't him it would been someone else.

Didn't understand this one can you elaborate?

 

[desmosome]

Ian vs Wade

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The battle with wade will be on Tekken.

 

[Alphaeboy]

Didn't understand this one can you elaborate?

I agree with him this statement which is sadly true.

 

[TheRealJohnCena69]

What are the 5 scenes that were added from alpha to beta? Man i dont know if its just me but i still be seeing WIP for a bunch of scenes dont really feel like much changed in the gallery

 

[camube]

I dont understand all the hate for Alison, It's not like she is stalking, peeping or giving Ian "nice guy" vibes.
She acts like a typical woman with a major crush.

i agree with mf_doom yeah

 

[| Vee |]

IF Lena takes drugs does it have any consequences down the path? besides that she can take again without loosing will points.