VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[Andrea9999]

Agnes is most likely the modelling route for Lena if she doesn't go for either the Wildcats or Billy. I can see Seymour using Lena's beauty to help grow his empire if they have a poor relationship. I just don't see the dev adding actual slavery to the game.

But Agnes has a dominating nature...in my route Lena does Seymour's bidding in everything and Seymour has offered to "lend" Lena to Agnes. That has the aura of something other than just "modeling". Also, Dubai was a strange choice for Lena as a travel destination.

 

[Leongen43]

A doll only has an expiration date for a specific user. Once the user is changed, the doll is essentially renewed and in the current context, if the uses to which she is put deepen, darken, and intensify. That, I believe, is what Agnes is there for; I think she will be a harsher handler than Seymour. If Axel is involved, Lena will go from being a doll to being a puppet.... and eventually, and ultimately, Lena's travel choice if it is (as I opted for) Dubai which is a world capital for sex trafficking and white sex slavery. I believe Eva Kiss has some very intense plans along those lines for Lena. I hope she is able to bring her guitar to Dubai; she will need it for her new succession of Arabian Nights.

It all depends on the trainer and how intense he can be with his submissive and the duration will depend on whether feelings are created between them, something that could cause conflicts if they are not a couple, if you want to read an Arabic book with a high level of eroticism that will make you I recommend that you get wet. La Almendra is written by a Muslim author called Nedjma, my wife read it years ago and she really liked it.

 

[ffive]

Also, Dubai was a strange choice for Lena as a travel destination.

It's destination for Lena with high posh stat i.e. Lena who is into expensive clothes, showing off wealth, luxury etc. It's not really strange in this context.

 

[Sethmsf]

It's destination for Lena with high posh stat i.e. Lena who is into expensive clothes, showing off wealth, luxury etc. It's not really strange in this context.

Yep, destination only available with posh level 4+

 

[Andrea9999]

Yep, destination only available with posh level 4+

It's destination for Lena with high posh stat i.e. Lena who is into expensive clothes, showing off wealth, luxury etc. It's not really strange in this context.

Then again, our comments could change the course of the game...a little bit like how making a measurement on a system changes the system.

 

[Harbringer]

any link?

Don't have the link sorry, Broke.

 

[Sethmsf]

Then again, our comments could change the course of the game...a little bit like how making a measurement on a system changes the system.

Hope is the last thing that is lost, but I don't think EK will stop by here to read comments, she will read something from her patreon and her discord, but here...

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Hope is the last thing that is lost, but I don't think EK will stop by here to read comments, she will read something from her patreon and her discord, but here...

*he, apparently.

https://f95zone.to/threads/our-red-string-ch-12-alpha-eva-kiss.48813/post-11629896 lol

THough I wouldn't even need pictures to tell me, based on the writing alone I could say with 90% certainty it's a dude. Especially with the stuff I was recently debating with others; the various Ian paths, there's just too much discomfort with romantic tension in the writing for it to be written by a woman.

Yesyes inb4 "not all" and "cant stereotype" yes yes, all I'm saying is if I was forced to make a large wager, 9-1 odds would be on dude.

 

[Sethmsf]

Let's see how I tell you, the pseudonym is feminine, so I use feminine, you use whatever you want

 

[Leongen43]

*he, apparently.

https://f95zone.to/threads/our-red-string-ch-12-alpha-eva-kiss.48813/post-11629896 lol

THough I wouldn't even need pictures to tell me, based on the writing alone I could say with 90% certainty it's a dude. Especially with the stuff I was recently debating with others; the various Ian paths, there's just too much discomfort with romantic tension in the writing for it to be written by a woman.

Yesyes inb4 "not all" and "cant stereotype" yes yes, all I'm saying is if I was forced to make a large wager, 9-1 odds would be on dude.

What would the bets be if we add that she could be a transsexual woman, 3-1 or maybe more?

 

[kinkyshin]

Not that it's a big deal, but I've always assumed EK is actually a girl.

She turned that shady gangster-wannabe dude from black to white to not look racist lol

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

Seriously though, what does the gender of the dev have got anything to do with the game?

 

[Da¥e]

Hoping for a hero
Im curious for the new stalkfap scene.

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

in every self-respecting game or story etc, the main character is put to the test, there are ups and downs, but fuck in these NTR porn games what fun is it always taking for granted or appreciating that the character is always the loser in the the final. But you porn players feel so immersed in being cuckolded that you suffer here too, hahah booo

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

For me, it is important for my fantasies that I may have with Eva Kiss so I would know how many holes I have to use for my imaginary pleasure.

You can always get additional holes made to use them for fucking, but maybe I think you're right better ask Eva KIss, she definitely has experience with her holes, hahahaha

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

What would the bets be if we add that she could be a transsexual woman, 3-1 or maybe more?

Oh then it's straight up 1-to-1, if not more.

Let's see how I tell you, the pseudonym is feminine, so I use feminine, you use whatever you want

totally understand, I didnt mean anything at you by it, just musing at the dev's identity.

Seriously though, what does the gender of the dev have got anything to do with the game?

Absolutely nothing at all. Just killing time. What does my favorite ice cream have to do with anything? It doesnt.

(mint choco chip).

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

There are two sides of the coin and two different ways to go about subverting expectations:
One way is to do to the vilain what goes on with Seymour: the guy treats Lena as his personal sex doll,
but all dolls have expiration dates on how much you indulge, as someone who can just command Lena or Axel,
yeeah - Axel the Lena cheater and abuser is just a tool for Seymour - to fkk in front of him just like that.
Such a powerful man with this kind of fetish - command the way people deliver his entertainment,
he has way more refined and lavish means of getting high- the rush of adrenaline to his heart,
other than simple sex or some broad performing sexual acts on him the way she knows how,
as opposed to the way he likes to see things get done.



This is the way many shows subvert expectations - stop the narrative flow of our minds filling the expectations
with our own opinions of how the story would continue or the plot would build and dissolve tension.
Good shows do not destroy the whole charcater arc of the protagonist or the antagonist, they
simply derail or detour their paths in order to show other novel activities or ideas that animate them,
different than what the audience would expect based on those charcaters track records.

A super hero could win even if the vilain escapes capture but the activity gets stopped or disrupted or the victims get
saved - the hero is still on top if any of those conditions meet in the end, it does not have to be all of them.

A vilain could finish the story arc quiting in the middle of the deed and be shown either go about starting another
con in a different area, leave it all behind and just get a normal boring job, without the final confrontation being
a defeat or a retribution for the bad deeds.

In this game, Karma could be just as swift as Seymour finding another hobby,
Axxel getting axxed by Seymour as retaliation because he broke Lena and he cannot use her any more,
many things can be the solution dev be finding to steer clear of what we would see ourselves
in the continuation of this game.

I still believe Seymoure is actively in the game, let's say that now he is just waiting for his moment to return to eating his prey, the powerful are like this because they also have the wisdom to know how to do or believe some have taken a step back, what it happens later it's simply obvious, how you make a small mistake, and people like Lena do it, the powerful this time violently attacks your throat, and there you are practically his, Seymour is not that powerful and aggressive mafioso that one could imagine wait, those types of powerful people don't go that far, but the various Seymours who use their brains, and also that deceptive kindness, are the worst thing that could happen, their strengths is also the awareness of waiting, you understand it when Emma throws the cup of liquids on his jacket, he doesn't show the slightest emotion, on the contrary, he shows the classic politeness of someone who knows that it's just a small setback and that the prize deserves that excitement of anticipation even for the sake of having it. These are the dangerous powerful ones.

 

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Beta is out niiiice, now waiting for a final version

 

[gedads]

"I could say with 90% certainty it's a dude " maybe a transgender or gay, a dude can't be obsessed with fantasy BBC like thator being a whore that fuck everything that moves... well maybe there's still even a chance for a dog when lena will go to dubai.
NTR doesn't fit straight thinking, author's loves too much cock to be straight (we can see it as there's no nuance in how ian behave toward allison, he's either a dick or try to fuck, there's no normal behaviour in the males depicted). If the female is usually the worst whore, it's always the dick that is put into the light (lena want's big dick especially jeremy's one), i think most of them a projecting in the wife when writing their novels , and it's more or less their fantasms about dicks that we're reading. That's why there will never be normal choices in those games or logic ending. the brain isn't wired in the same way not that it is wrong but it's just 2 worlds without intersection point. The game is good, but in the end, lena will "win" even if we all lose in playing the life game, whatever she do. If she go to dubai she will fuck some animals, eat some dicks and end up with some milliosn on her bank account, if she cucks ian he will probably raise a black baby, ian will end up either crushed by seymour his book will end up as a failure or with a normal life which is losing in a video game, either with a whore or alone. Damn with all the time he's drinking in bars he didn't think once ok let's meet new peoples...

i played GGGB, same author, whatever you do, you get an ending where the boyfriend lose. i don't think the authors knows what is equality or equity for his second try, he will always have more empathy for the slut and doing so is never letting you have any real influence over what the male character you might be projecting into more because you're an average guy (which i am probably) will become. Let's imagine the situation for real, your girlfriend cheated, you encounter a new one (most of the time you don't end up with that one that comes right after being a split unless you were cheating and leaving for her) and she's doing worse that the previous one... everyone on earth would do the same thing and just stop seeing her...