VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Gato21]

Hooker her up with Stan, make her humble and less of a bitch. Problem solved.

Stan doesn't have a magic cock that will fix the inconsistency of Lena as a character. Lena is simply a product of Eva's writing trying to cover all bases.

 

[ffive]

It is major deal if we take the act separately. Lying to someone, fucking someone's boyfriend. But it's just general not very moral behavior. Bad, but understandable. And why would she feel something for the emotional well being of her adversary of all people? Compared to the things Gillian and Axel had done it's... nothing.

Being capable of understanding emotions of another person and feeling for them is basic empathy and something which sets apart regular people from psychopaths. Am not sure if it's really in favor of Cherry to put her on the shelf with the latter. And it's really not "nothing", Cherry had active role in hurting Lena. She knew exactly what she was doing, she knew how Lena was going to feel when that affair comes out but did it regardless. It's the same selfishness we see in Gillian.

Am not saying it's not understandable. But it's simply behavior of a shit human being, and that's what Cherry ultimately is. She doesn't need nor deserves to be excused for her actions.

It doesn't work that way. Revealing that you are fucking someone's boyfriend would just piss said boyfriend off, cause he will lose another willing pussy or, maybe, more than that. I could understand if she would be stupid enough to think like that, but she wasn't and said nothing.

Leaving aside people in love are ready to do a lot of objectively stupid things which to them make perfect sense, she didn't need to do the reveal in person. Tipping Lena off anonymously would work just as well.

 

[yuvce]

Louise got a bad hand in every case until now.
1. Of all the potential partners, she is stuck with Jeremy, who is a poor choice of partner for her, due to both of them having different expectations of this relationship. If she isn't breaking up with him, she only keeps up with him because of him and Lena's demands to keep being together, very likely leading into cucking.
2. Relationship with Lena is decent for lesbian content and femdom, but her clingyness is really off-putting. It's one-dimensional and effectively leads to further punish her to enhance the femdom route, but its shit otherwise.
3. She is a whiny bitch and not even sympatetic due to her horrible treatment of Stan (I don't care about that fucker as well, but just leave him alone in his room, woman), potentially even disappears from the game to spare Eva from further being forced to include her in non Jeremy/Lena routes.

My hope is that she applies for a job under Ian and/or Ian is further interested in her after the threesomes, the two of them possible seeking each other out if Jeremy and Lena keep being unfaithfull. Louise is a bitch, but she isn't dealt a decent hand either. Maybe someone else than Jeremy would change that.

Yes Jeremy is a dickwad but Louise should have been smart enough to eventually figure that out without Lena telling her or seeing Jeremy begging Ivy to suck him off. On the flip side, you could argue Jeremy should have corrected her and said he never asked for a serious committment. So yeah, both are idiots, both are full of shit, and their "relationship" if you can even call it that was destined to self destruct from the very beginning.

 

[ffive]

3. She is a whiny bitch and not even sympatetic due to her horrible treatment of Stan (I don't care about that fucker as well, but just leave him alone in his room, woman)

Maybe Stan should learn to at least put his pants on when he leaves his room. And not spy on his flat mates having sex.

Dude is a creep and Loise simply calls it what it is.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Maybe Stan should learn to at least put his pants on when he leaves his room.

I agree, Stan is a total creep and got high potential to eat Lena's internal organs in the future, but Lena and Louise also walk around the house without pants.
Nothing wrong with running around in your underwear around the house.

 

[Gicoo]

Maybe Stan should learn to at least put his pants on when he leaves his room. And not spy on his flat mates having sex.

Dude is a creep and Loise simply calls it what it is.

Lena and Louise wander around in their underwear as well. All three of them are slouches.
Stan spying is only if he gets a hyperfixation on Lena due to her modeling for him (or does he always does it?), but yes, this is just as horrible as when Lena does it.

A good chunk of Louise insults are unfair and uncalled for, like with the rent issue.

Yikes, every character in this game is horrible. Sure most of them are hot, but I wouldn't even want to date a mental gullible doormat like Holly. Might as well call the game Our Red Flag.

 

[Gato21]

I agree, Stan is a total creep and got high potential to eat Lena's internal organs in the future, but Lena and Louise also walk around the house without pants.
Nothing wrong with running around in your underwear around the house.

I was hoping for a redemptive arc where he gets his shit together becoming bros with Ian, but his hostility and entitlement is more likely leading to a rampage. W if a stray bullet hits Gillian. JK, kind of but not really. Gillian, IMO, didn't need to be introduced, Eva already has enough on her plate. To be fair, Holly might be the key to him improving himself. Lena is an enabler of his behavior (depending on how you play).

Might as well call the game Our Red Flag.

 

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Stan's scene with Lena where he helped her with Stalkfap pics is peak comedy.

A good chunk of Louise insults are unfair and uncalled for, like with the rent issue.

I hope a good bunch of people are on Louise's side on that rent issue. What Stan did is one of the most spineless thing I ever saw in porn games.

 

[ffive]

Lena and Louise wander around in their underwear as well. All three of them are slouches.

Yeah but there's a bit of different dynamics when it involves a penis and underwear changed two weeks ago.

 

[Gicoo]

I hope a good bunch of people are on Louise's side on that rent issue. What Stan did is one of the most spineless thing I ever saw in porn games.

Is it? I don't know too much about rent. I'm a case of

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, so I dont' have a private landlord who I may discuss things out privately (and could sue) but an entire company administrating numerous flats and streets.
My impression was that you can't do too much against increasing rent (asie from moving out and finding a cheaper flat, sucker) and that the issue in question was just one of the many problems of the cities overaching plot (baddy monopolist Seymour vs socialist Emma/Perry's father).

Yeah but there's a bit of different dynamics when it involves a penis and underwear changed two weeks ago.

Is Stan's underwear notable dirty vs whatever Lena and Louise running around?

Man, I'm trying to throw loser Stan a bone here and empathize a bit with this pityfull social awkward nerd not being able to be on good terms with his two dramatic room-mates.

 

[| Vee |]

Yes Jeremy is a dickwad but Louise should have been smart enough to eventually figure that out without Lena telling her or seeing Jeremy begging Ivy to suck him off. On the flip side, you could argue Jeremy should have corrected her and said he never asked for a serious committment. So yeah, both are idiots, both are full of shit, and their "relationship" if you can even call it that was destined to self destruct from the very beginning.

The thing is like as Louise and Jeremy didn't discuss their "relationship" and both didn't have guts to come out and say obvious shit, this same scenario is repeated with AlisonxIan case too. Alison too doesn't have the guts to come clean and say "Ian! where we stand?" It's simple as that. Alison has audacity to hop on the very next moment to Jeremy's dick even If Ian diverts his attention for a second. They (Alison, Lousie, Jeremy, Ian) would do every fucking shit possible but NO THEY WON'T discuss their relationship.
Same with Gillian(Chameleon) too.

And then they go like "How can Jeremy do this to me", "Hey I'm going to trip tomorrow wanna come and we can have threesome", "Oh Ian! I am really sorry I fucked that guy. I didn't knew I had this bad in me" and all other shit. Oh the misery

 

[Socrambus]

Is it? I don't know too much about rent. I'm a case of

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, so I dont' have a private landlord who I may discuss things out privately (and could sue) but an entire company administrating numerous flats and streets.
My impression was that you can't do too much against increasing rent (asie from moving out and finding a cheaper flat, sucker) and that the issue in question was just one of the many problems of the cities overaching plot (baddy monopolist Seymour vs socialist Emma/Perry's father).

I guess it's something that may change a lot depending on the specific situation and country but it's hard to believe that one part of a contract can charge the other part more without the other part knowing until the money disappears from their bank account. At the very least it shoud have to be notified one month in advance. And it would be reasonable to expect that changes to the rent can only be done on a specific schedule covered in the contract (yearly being the most common according to my experience).

 

[Gato21]

Is it? I don't know too much about rent. I'm a case of

You must be registered to see the links

, so I dont' have a private landlord who I may discuss things out privately (and could sue) but an entire company administrating numerous flats and streets.
My impression was that you can't do too much against increasing rent (asie from moving out and finding a cheaper flat, sucker) and that the issue in question was just one of the many problems of the cities overaching plot (baddy monopolist Seymour vs socialist Emma/Perry's father).



Is Stan's underwear notable dirty vs whatever Lena and Louise running around?

Man, I'm trying to throw loser Stan a bone here and empathize a bit with this pityfull social awkward nerd not being able to be on good terms with his two dramatic room-mates.

Wasn't big thing it was raised without notice and he just caved? Where I am from that is illegal, but maybe in this city it's not? Also, are they subletting or not from Stan? If not, then Louise, it could be argued, should take it up with the landlord.

It's hard to empathize with Stan when we aren't shown any good qualities, other than l guess he is good enough with photography. He gives Robert a run for his money. Speaking of Robert, Eva should just end that storyline to simplify things. Does anyone really play the Robert path all the way through? Curious, maybe he is more popular than I give him credit for. I just milk him for points.

 

[| Vee |]

hehehee looking at thread and thinking. Polls stir shit in people altogether.

 

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Is it? I don't know too much about rent. I'm a case of

You must be registered to see the links

, so I dont' have a private landlord who I may discuss things out privately (and could sue) but an entire company administrating numerous flats and streets.
My impression was that you can't do too much against increasing rent (asie from moving out and finding a cheaper flat, sucker) and that the issue in question was just one of the many problems of the cities overaching plot (baddy monopolist Seymour vs socialist Emma/Perry's father).

You gotta experience having a landlord to understand. What really ticked me off is that Stan just accepted the rent hike without talking to the two girls first. You can't make that decision on your own if you are living in a shared space.

I don't know how your country works but here in my country we can actually negotiate with landlords when it comes to rent hikes.

 

[ffive]

Is Stan's underwear notable dirty vs whatever Lena and Louise running around?

Well, we know Stan isn't very concerned with hygiene:



his room is notably dirty, something that gets mentioned a few times and he acknowledges it. So i doubt he pays more attention to the state of his clothing.

Man, I'm trying to throw loser Stan a bone here and empathize a bit with this pityfull social awkward nerd not being able to be on good terms with his two dramatic room-mates.

 

[| Vee |]

Well, we know Stan isn't very concerned with hygiene:

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his room is notably dirty, something that gets mentioned a few times and he acknowledges it. So i doubt he pays more attention to the state of his clothing.

I literally got the first thought after watching this that "he has all the chances to get STDs without getting physical with anyone ever ". One and only case.

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

Well, we know Stan isn't very concerned with hygiene:

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his room is notably dirty, something that gets mentioned a few times and he acknowledges it. So i doubt he pays more attention to the state of his clothing.

Look at the size of that PC Case. You can shove a small child in there!

 

[yuvce]

Well, we know Stan isn't very concerned with hygiene:

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his room is notably dirty, something that gets mentioned a few times and he acknowledges it. So i doubt he pays more attention to the state of his clothing.

Why the fuck am I just noticing the lotion and toilet papers ffs?

 

[MF_DOOM]

I literally got the first thought "he has all the chances to get STDs without getting physical with anyone ever " after this. One and only case.

You got more chance of catching STD's from a toilet seat than from Stan.