VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[BlandChili]

It can be seen coming now, that relationship is quite romantic. Although as things come it seems to me that their relationship is going to be more open

Sure, the tone of it all is sweet and fluffy, they're just taking their sweet time to actually get anywhere. It's been like three or four chapters now of Lena going "Holly is special and I feel deeply for her, what does this all mean?"

The novelty of fluffy love wears out after a while when they keep beating around the bush with the same theme, especially when you really want things to progress and for the relationship to play an actual role in the story and the interactions with the other characters, other than Ivy that is.

 

[desmosome]

So what are the odds of Mike being Gillian's BF now? I don't feel like combing over the script, but Gillian said she came to town a couple months ago, right? What was Mike's timeline?

I had a stray thought that Lena's brother could be Gillian's BF. Lena's hometown is a different city, right? Lena's bro is a scumbag, so it fits a dude that might steal someone's girl. Maybe they moved into town a few months ago, and being the deadbeat that he is, he ran into financial trouble and needed help from Mom. Is that red strings enough for Eva?

 

[hotNess]

I audibly groan every time they mention their "very special friendship"

At this point Holly and Lena will be starting a family together before they confess.

Sure, the tone of it all is sweet and fluffy, they're just taking their sweet time to actually get anywhere. It's been like three or four chapters now of Lena going "Holly is special and I feel deeply for her, what does this all mean?"

The novelty of fluffy love wears out after a while when they keep beating around the bush with the same theme, especially when you really want things to progress and for the relationship to play an actual role in the story and the interactions with the other characters, other than Ivy that is.

I agree 100%. I'm just hoping that the next chapter will finalize their relationship for those that want to pursue it and not prolong it any further. What really has been going on for at least 3 chapters feels longer.

 

[SerHawkes]

I agree 100%. I'm just hoping that the next chapter will finalize their relationship for those that want to pursue it and not prolong it any further. What really has been going on for at least 3 chapters feels longer.

It shows the ineptude of Eva drawing out drama and things when it doesn't need to rocket fucking science complicated. Then again, shes gotta milk it for all its worth, while naturally shafting others for screen time.

 

[danilo]

So what are the odds of Mike being Gillian's BF now? I don't feel like combing over the script, but Gillian said she came to town a couple months ago, right? What was Mike's timeline?

I had a stray thought that Lena's brother could be Gillian's BF. Lena's hometown is a different city, right? Lena's bro is a scumbag, so it fits a dude that might steal someone's girl. Maybe they moved into town a few months ago, and being the deadbeat that he is, he ran into financial trouble and needed help from Mom. Is that red strings enough for Eva?

Those 2 possibilities could be quite accurate, at first I thought it could be someone like Jeremy but she would have to dress sexier to follow that stereotype, and she has been dating the other for quite some time. I liked your deduction, it would not have occurred to me. And if it's Mike, there would be a threesome between Mike-Gillian-Lena without Ian knowing

 

[Grubambio]

I am trying to locate the files which contain the images from scenes and such, can someone help me out with this issue

 

[mr.hong]

Is there any new changes in the previous chapter of the art?

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

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Just confess you two! You both know you want to >.<

Very in line with irl closeted lesbians and still confused lesbians. The worst case for these kind of couple is that they need someone not their partner to make them "aware" of their orientation.

 

[BlandChili]

Very in line with irl closeted lesbians and still confused lesbians. The worst case for these kind of couple is that they need someone not their partner to make them "aware" of their orientation.

Issue being that neither are at all closeted, even though Holly has supposedly conservative parents, she has not expressed a conflict in that regard ever and she can happily kiss Lena out in public view.

Holly and Lena are both professed to be bisexual women. Holly has been in a relationship with a woman before and Lena is very sexually confident. Sure, the "useless lesbian" trope hasn't spawned from a vacuum, but this isn't really an example of that.

They aren't even really worried about social perception either, Lena has, like, one line about this being her first time having deeper feelings for a woman, so this is just a case of Eva choosing that for some reason their relationship is forcefully extended into ceaseless vagueness.

 

[lukrame]

whats new in the update from the previous update? I dont see anything in the changelog.

 

[godoff95]

Cindy or the girl Alex cheated on Lena with (I don't remember her name). Because with Cindy I think I'm on the lover's route and she didn't ask me to leave anyone. For the other girl yes, Ian had to leave Lena, although I left that route because I didn't like it enough to leave Lena

Because you already left the others by choosing Cindy as lover. Ya in that path, there are Eskimos and Ian and Lena are casuals.

 

[oldschool34500]

I NEED A HEROOOOOOOOOOOO

A HERO TO SAVE MY LIFE

A HERO WILL SAVE ME JUST IN TIME.

find yourself a wife or go see a doctor

 

[jduk]

Those 2 possibilities could be quite accurate, at first I thought it could be someone like Jeremy but she would have to dress sexier to follow that stereotype, and she has been dating the other for quite some time. I liked your deduction, it would not have occurred to me. And if it's Mike, there would be a threesome between Mike-Gillian-Lena without Ian knowing

Or Mike fucking Lena and Gillian and Ian being a cuck can happen too.

 

[jduk]

Does anyone have an Alison fwb or/and relationship with Ian route save for pc? Would appreciate it a lot.

 

[oldschool34500]

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We need our cum. we are waiting for hero

why, do you drink it or eat it maybe?

 

[dobzzz]

Good update, my only gripe was that the cuck stuff really gets thrown at your face in this update even though my Ian hasn't acted like a cuck at all (I am playing the fuckboi route - Max pussy, ignore feelings).
Also like that Ian is slowly becoming jacked as fuck, which makes Mike kinda redundant since both share the same scenes.
We need Ivy next update - she is portrayed as the top girl in the pecking order, would be awesome if Iam can have a twisted relationship with her with both knowing that Lena likes Ian but not caring about it

dont watch gillian's scene then or tell us the truth u r playing the cuck path aint ya and loving it "wink" "wink". cuz it really really hard to get cucked in the playboi route. how do i know ? cuz i played almost all routes

 

[RabbitHole69]

I don't mind Holly's slut route as long as we also get an alternate path. My only issue is that her things keep happening in the background. Like, if you're telling us that she fucked someone else then atleast give some sort of option to play that full scene and not just give some pictures. Like, I found the car bj pic really hot. But, it'd have been even better if we got the whole scene either from Holly's perspective or from the other guy's.

 

[BlandChili]

I don't mind Holly's slut route as long as we also get an alternate path. My only issue is that her things keep happening in the background. Like, if you're telling us that she fucked someone else then atleast give some sort of option to play that full scene and not just give some pictures. Like, I found the car bj pic really hot. But, it'd have been even better if we got the whole scene either from Holly's perspective or from the other guy's.

No, the game shouldn't deviate from the MC's perspectives. I hate that in VN's.

Secondary-character-only scenes needs to be conveyed in ways that makes sense to the narrative perspective structure.

 

[oldschool34500]

I'm guessing they held down CTRL to fast-forward through all the dialogue and just watched the sex scenes on their routes.

many are here to masturbate, not to read a novel.

 

[RabbitHole69]

No, the game shouldn't deviate from the MC's perspectives. I hate that in VN's.

Secondary-character-only scenes needs to be conveyed in ways that makes sense to the narrative perspective structure.

I mean yeah that makes sense but there should be a way to watch the "behind the scene" scenes for secondary characters. Hell, Alison's threesome had more pictures than Holly's . Maybe this could be a gallery-only feature where we can check out how the whole scene played out.