VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Chemish]

Alison has a super hot body.

 

[varpep]

Lesbian relationships do have a high rate of domestic violence. Interesting... Who though? Lets find one from the cast of GGGB.

"Bad Ashley"? Would a max evil Ashley be beating up on Jessica? Possibly... She can bully her father, and Eva to death. I mean she is really bad. So, maybe... but she is kinda too much caught up in her own bullshit.

"Eva" There was no path to get those two together, although there could be a chance to have both in a threesome on bad jess path. I don't think she would be it. Because in that route Eva is subby, and Jessica is the one acting Domme to her.

"Iris" Iris is no angel, but I just don't see her beating up on Jessica. Plus, they never get together.

"Natasha" The cute redhead that is not Ashley... I just don't see her being mean to anyone. She is too... "Laid back".

"Ashley's Mom" I mean, she is a cruel bitch, but I don't really see those two hooking up. There is no line where they get anywhere near each other, but a remote possibility.

"Fat Bitch" That fat bitch from the club that is always a Karen... What is her name? I can not ever remember her name without looking it up. I think maybe "Rosa"? Yea, I could 100% see her being abusive. Plus she did make an appearance at the same club that Jessica has been to in both games. Possible? Having that hippo sitting on her face every night could why Jessica is in such a shit mood. It would make some sense too because she would have money. As she can get that good job if ash is not a good girl.

"Jasmine" The t-girl from GGGB. She is kinda tough, and likes it rough. She hasn't been seen in ORS yet, and her and Jessica never interacted much in GGGB. However Jessica was kinda close friends with Jack and Jasmine worked at the same place as Jack so I am sure they must know each other.

So assuming the abuser is a girl Jasmine & Rosa are my top two theories when it comes to returns from GGGB, but it could be some new character, or possibly someone else like Joline, or that seemingly nice shop attendent that will take a pic for Lena / Emma and can flirt with her as Lena later. I don't see it being a main cast female form ORS.

Possibly "Agnes" that old woman that is wealthy? I mean... It's possible. What if Jessica fresh out of porn went to try to be a model. Agnes then made her do some lewd stuff, and treated her like a whore. Her having tons of $$$ like Seymour level could put her as a "Mean Sugar Mommy".

So... Agnes (Rich Old Bitch), Jasmine (Aggressive T-girl) or Rosa (Fat Cow) all could get a kick out of pissing on Jessica's face and treating her like a whore.

I'd like to have what you're having

 

[Xupuzulla]

Imagine having to wait 7 chapters of Ian acting like Holly is a dog.
Imagine having to wait 7 chapters for a shitty sex scene where Holly almost bites Ian dick off.
Imagine having to wait 12 chapters to see Holly being sexy in a bikini.
Being a Holly fan is worse fate than death.

 

[ffive]

Ivy fans wishing she bit their dicks off 7 chapters in.

 

[fatpussy123]

Imagine having to wait 7 chapters of Ian acting like Holly is a dog.
Imagine having to wait 7 chapters for a shitty sex scene where Holly almost bites Ian dick off.
Imagine having to wait 12 chapters to see Holly being sexy in a bikini.
Being a Holly fan is worse fate than death.

Rent free

 

[Xupuzulla]

Ivy fans wishing she bit their dicks off 7 chapters in.

Dont get me started on Ivy fans,12 chapters of nothing but this being her only heterosexual sex scene

Spoiler: THE VIPER

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[DZE]

Was there any comment from EvaKiss if theres gonna be any sort of scenes or continuation for Lena's storyline?

 

[BlandChili]

Was there any comment from EvaKiss if theres gonna be any sort of scenes or continuation for Lena's storyline?

You can read the last update here

She's working on Lena's part and it will follow Ian's later. How long that will take is anyone's guess.

 

[rainnnnnn]

How do I get Perry’s interest in Emma to zero?
Even after getting all the scenes with Ian and her, I still get the convo with wade where Ian encourages perry to go for her

 

[Gicoo]

How do I get Perry’s interest in Emma to zero?
Even after getting all the scenes with Ian and her, I still get the convo with wade where Ian encourages perry to go for her

He always keeps a crush on her (something Ian can internaly mock him for, if he fucks Emma himself). Just don't wingman for him and give him advice, never adress the topic on your own. He will be too cowardly to make a move on his own.
Or pair him up with Cherry.

 

[seaoflove]

As already said, she only goes for Jeremy if Ian shows no interest in her. How dare she dates guys other then me! In particular, she jumps on Jeremy right after she sees Ian kissing Emma. If you/Ian expects her to be faithful while you/Ian can fuck around, you are beyond hope.
Anal: She even gives it a try and it doesn't work physically. She is only pushing for open relationships and threesomes because she thinks its what Ian wants and she wants to be as exciting for him as possible. If you deny those options, she is happy to carry on.

Emma doesn't need Ians permission. Ian just recommends her to Jeremy because he had good experience with her and is a bro to Jeremy. Jeremy got curious, asks her and she simply agrees.

Holly is the best wife material out of all these terrible options in this game (Our Red Flag), because she barely has meaningful flaws and is sort of perfect and a favorit of Eva. She wants to please and has issues with men, both very convenient flaws that the player is very happy to correct. I tend to prefer other girls because they have flaws, issues and aren't at Ians whim every second, but have their own ambitions and ideas of a good relationship. Threat them like trash and they call you out on it, defend themselves and may even break up. With Holly, you are on easy mode. I'd like her second book to fail and see how she takes that loss, but considering how well she is liked by everyone, it probably won't happen and she stays successfull in every playthrough.

Women can be categorized into 3 tiers.

Keeper, Sleeper, and Sweeper.

Keeper = Good Wife Material / Long term committed relationship / Start a family.
Sleeper = Fuck buddy / One Night Stand / Friends with benefits
Sweeper = Avoid romantic relationships as the juice is not worth the squeeze.

Alison is definitely not in the "Keeper" camp. She makes a decent "Sleeper". She is a fine "Practice Girl", but not wife material at all.

Emma borders on the "Keeper" camp, but she too is a "Sleeper"... I mean if you were a homeless guy or a junkie, she would be top tier super keeper.

Holly is a Keeper all the way. She is far beyond any other girl in the game in the Keeper camp. She is practically an angel. She is beautiful, and doesn't even know she is pretty. She is the smartest girl in the game by far if you actually listen to them when they talk. She is very kind and caring. She has high levels of empathy. She is nurturing and willing to help teach others. She is not very judgmental at least not in a negative way of others. She doesn't get by on her looks. She has an immense amount of creativity as she is a best selling author. She is polite and friendly. She seems to have a submissive side. She has some loneliness in her heart and she wants to reach out to someone who will love her. She isn't fat. She doesn't have a high body count.

Holly has her kryptonite. Ivy of course knows all of this, and Ivy is her poison. Ivy is the biggest sweeper in the game too. She has all the whore attributes, plus the drugs, and lying and sneaky shit. Pairing the best girl with the worst girl was definitely intentional.

There are justifications for Alison's actions of course as you have mentioned. She just seems to eager to hop in bed with someone new, and it seems like she doesn't care who.

 

[GokutheG]

How do I get Perry’s interest in Emma to zero?
Even after getting all the scenes with Ian and her, I still get the convo with wade where Ian encourages perry to go for her

I don't think his interest ever goes to zero. It seems to be an open secret known by everyone but Emma that he is into her. The best you can do would be to set him up with Cherry if you want him to not show romantic interest in Emma.

 

[Realm_Hero]

new update when?

 

[Gicoo]

I mean if you were a homeless guy or a junkie, she would be top tier super keeper.

Spoiler: we are talking about gardening, right?

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new update when?

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I will finish everything off in the following hours and hopefully be ready to release the Alpha in the following days, ideally tomorrow Friday or during the weekend.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Honestly, Jessica could have her own entire game with her as the protagonist. A sort of "Bad girl gone good." Try to be more innocent, and pure, but she has already seen the evils of this world.

Is it too late to save Jessica?

They could make it a platformer where you jump & duck to avoid all the flying cocks coming at her.

 

[SizeQueenShrine]

Women can be categorized into 3 tiers.

Keeper, Sleeper, and Sweeper.

Keeper = Good Wife Material / Long term committed relationship / Start a family.
Sleeper = Fuck buddy / One Night Stand / Friends with benefits
Sweeper = Avoid romantic relationships as the juice is not worth the squeeze

I guess you've just invented another message board game of making partner tiers around this:

 

[John Doe Jr.]

Excluding the MCs since I feel that's cheating since we're making the choices for them who is the best romantic partners irl? Personally, I really like Cindy and Alison and playing as slut Lena but as far as who would be best irl I think it might be Holly or Cherry

 

[seaoflove]

I guess you've just invented another message board game of making partner tiers around this:
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I didn't invent the Keeper / Sleeper / Sweeper system. I think

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puts it the best way.

 

[Birdnman993]

Good Jessica will shoot anyone down. She is not a cheater. Ashley is the person who brought her some stability during a time of chaos, and she will be loyal to the end.

Bad Jessica is a good woman that has made a lot of bad decisions and she was corrupted by modernity, and the partygirl lifestyle. She knows that she has "Hit the wall" so to say, and wants to be good. I think she has been hurt a lot by acting like a slut, and doing drugs. She wants to be a good girl / trad wife deep down. However, her emotional damage may be beyond repair at this point. She has been pumped and dumped one too many times. She got into porn. She started to realize that her body was all she was good for... Unlike other "Happy Variants" of Jessica. Such as when she ends up with Dave, they both like that drawing stuff and get along great. She may have some "Bad Boyfriend" at this point as well, but it's unclear who. She did have a busted lip, and she did need a place to stay. So, she may be shacking up with some abusive dude.

Honestly, Jessica could have her own entire game with her as the protagonist. A sort of "Bad girl gone good." Try to be more innocent, and pure, but she has already seen the evils of this world.

Is it too late to save Jessica?

Rather Bad Jessica was pushed into a spiral of self-destruction due to lack of parental support, it was not until she found a good Ash who cared about her that she was able to reconcile with her parents and find her passion for art again.

 

[TankDude]

Chapter 12 Status Report (8) and Alpha release
14 hours ago
Hi guys,
I've been working on the writing and playtesting this week, and I've managed to finish the part of the chapter I've been working on, as well as the two additional scenes I mentioned in my last post. I was waiting for the colorist to deliver the final illustrations, and I just received them, so I will start editing and finishing them off right away and finish off the update.
I have the feeling there's never enough playtesting, but the update should be solid and fully playable already. I will finish everything off in the following hours and hopefully be ready to release the Alpha in the following days, ideally tomorrow Friday or during the weekend.
While I was waiting for the art to be delivered I've also continued to write the follow-up to this chapter, and will continue to do so during the following days (and weeks) to have it ready as soon as possible. About 50% od the drawings for it are already done too, and 20% are fully edited.
Anyway, stay tuned for the upcoming release, it's almost here