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VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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dengl

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Gzoosos said:
Epilogue???? It is finished or not as i remember it's supposed to be 20 chapters
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The update now goes like
Chapter 11 Prologue alpha, Chapter 11 Prologue beta, Chapter 11 Prologue final
Chapter 11 alpha, Chapter 11 beta, Chapter 11 final
Chapter 11 Epilogue alpha, Chapter 11 Epilogue beta, Chapter 11 Epilogue final

There are new content in each stages, differences between alpha/beta/final are always bug fixes, typos, and maybe an extra scene.
So what should you expect after chapter 11 epilogue final will be chapter 12 prologue :LOL:. We are just slightly over half way if the 20 chapters planning stay true.
 
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Slick Bean said:
Practically every cameo acts and talks exactly like Axxel - absolutely disgusting subhuman garbage.

Seeing Lena finally manage to put a stop to such abusive toxxic degrading relations all throughout the game,
only to have her become just another mouth hole for evident loosers to use is a disgrace to this game.

Sure, enjoy this decadent deconstruction of all that ever made Lena fabulous.
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You realize Lena's actions during her bartending are all up to the player, and if you make her "another mouth hole for evident losers" instead of asserting herself and shutting them down, that's purely on you?

This complaint is pretty much like that bike image about NTR that gets posted every now and then in this thread.
 
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Turret

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zedascove said:
Did he/she explain why?
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Not really, but it is easy to see why. Eva today has massive problems with making everything fit at least with some air between it since she allows her patrons to influence the stroy too much. This is extremly obvious with how much screentime absolute dishwater characters like Cindy, Emma or Marcel get, a rising number of fetish situation for fetish´s sake in the story...

It is already coming into "The adventurous Couple" territory, where the Dev let himself lead around by the main patrons until the story became a mess the Dev disliked with a passion. Result? a complete new start!
ORS is headed the same way, unless Eva stops allowing patrons with zero ideas how to tell a fitting story, but high money donations to haywire the various chapter storylines.
 
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In epilogue Lena mentions that Mike's gf found out about his affairs. Lena learns about this from Jeremy, but in my saves Jeremy only said that he know Mike has gf. This is alpha build inconsistency or did I miss something ?
 
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Turret said:
Not really, but it is easy to see why. Eva today has massive problems with making everything fit at least with some air between it since she allows her patrons to influence the stroy too much. This is extremly obvious with how much screentime absolute dishwater characters like Cindy, Emma or Marcel get, a rising number of fetish situation for fetish´s sake in the story...

It is already coming into "The adventurous Couple" territory, where the Dev let himself lead around by the main patrons until the story became a mess the Dev disliked with a passion. Result? a complete new start!
ORS is headed the same way, unless Eva stops allowing patrons with zero ideas how to tell a fitting story, but high money donations to haywire the various chapter storylines.
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Do you really think that Ed's path would be better than Cindy's or Emma's?. You already have Seymour's to cover the old guy with younger girl target. And it actually makes some sense because at least he's a handsome rich old guy instead of a fat old guy about to lose his small business.
 
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With all the discussion about cameos it kinda sounded like BadJessica was an actual FI (Fuck Interest). As Ian I only ever went to get coffee and talk with GoodJessica, where it seemed like she might be in a committed relationship with Ashley. Is there a BadJess path?
 
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Socrambus said:
Do you really think that Ed's path would be better than Cindy's or Emma's?. You already have Seymour's to cover the old guy with younger girl target. And it actually makes some sense because at least he's a handsome rich old guy instead of a fat old guy about to lose his small business.
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My point is not about Ed or Seymour´s paths, it is the fact that Eva let too many mediocre cooks, but with above average donations, have a say about how the storylines should develop. And you know what too many cooks do to a stew! Iam really sure Eva regrets this now and we can see how she tries to save something in which her heart is not fully invested any longer. Too many unfitting bits and pieces the patrons forced into the story.
 
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fatpussy123 said:
Epilogue for chapter 11, not the whole game. Also the game will most likely have less than the initial projection of 20 chapters.
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I don't think having it done before 20 chapters is enough to cover the whole plots and subplots without being unsatisfying. Even in this chapter alone, there are many plot points that serve as early setup for future conflicts. There are new characters who need multiple chapters to develop and affect the story with a satisfying pacing. Considering that this is an interactive fiction where our choices matter and changes the plot, the variations needed for the narrative to satisfy the player's mix of choices is a lot. Take the Seymour/objectification or the Lena's family subplots for example. It feels like we're still on the early stages of those. We are getting to know more about Seymour and his designs, as well the dynamic Lena has with her family but they haven't really developed much. Personally, it feels like we're still 1/3 or 2/5 of the story without it being rushed. Of course, how dense future chapters will be will affect this.
 
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Again, why is everyone complaining about Lena slutting it up in the club, when previous club scenes have consistently had Lena slut it up. Is it because Marcel's black? Like seriously, I've never seen so much complaining about an update that actually moves the story forward and has content (I felt like the complaints about the chapter before the epilogue was somewhat justified for reference). Plus, the complaints are all contradictory, no one wants the same exact story. Maybe, we should just accept that it's impossible to have the story cater to every single whim of every single player.

Turret said:
Not really, but it is easy to see why. Eva today has massive problems with making everything fit at least with some air between it since she allows her patrons to influence the stroy too much. This is extremly obvious with how much screentime absolute dishwater characters like Cindy, Emma or Marcel get, a rising number of fetish situation for fetish´s sake in the story...
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Are you serious? Cindy is easily the most popular character (Yes, even outside of the confines of Patreon). I don't even like the character, but this is a silly complaint. If there was less Cindy content, do you know how much complaining would occur? Again, contradictory.
 
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Anyways... How about you guys put down the pitchforks and talk about the new girl... I think it would be really interesting if you could play puritan Ian (rejects all girls) and then meet this new girl for wife material. Just a simple girl with a simple job looking for a simple guy. Yay or nay?
 
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