dontcarewhateverno

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I'm not an heroic fantasy lad, I'm more into classic literature, BUT each of Martin's update is like a hundred billion times more substantial than EK's updates, all paths included and that's a conservative estimation.
She's pulled off a masterstroke every now & again :KEK: , but in no way am I comparing EvaKiss' writing to George RR Martin's. I'm just joking about wait-time.
 

GokutheG

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I want to know who Mike's girlfriend is and who Gillian's boyfriend is. If one day Ian meets Gillian's boyfriend, I hope there will be a street fight
Getting into a fight with his ex's new boyfriend would make Ian be as pathetic as Alison's old boyfriend and just as deranged as Axel.

It's best for Lena and Ian to completely get over their exes.
 

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Lena/Ian relationship can blow up in like three possible ways, Ian/Holly gets its resolution one way or another, and Lena/Ian/Holly can become an actual thing. I wonder what's your idea of escalation if these are "holiday and chilling" in your eyes..?
By "holiday and chilling" I meant in the context that I don't think 4 more chapters is anywhere near enough to close out ORS because in the chapter 12 we've got, plot lines just started escalating. The escalation being the things you've wrote.
There are many other plot lines that are still ramping up and hasn't explode yet. 4 chapters of ramping up, climax and cooling off sounds like a rush to me.

I think 1 to 9 in general was good. But after 9, i think 10 to 12 the pacing is pretty slow. I think to wrap up everything, ORS at least would need at least to Ch 17 or 18, and that is if Ch 13 pick up the pace. So really, maybe even Ch 20 is more realistic
 

fatpussy123

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Ian and Louise suddenly being in love, while meeting irl only once in the bar, feels completely unbelievable, wtf is that?
Ian is not in love with Louise, he is interested in her since she slid into his dms and seems desperate, but not in love. Louise you can say is in love, but she has always gotten attached fast. Happened with both Jeremy and Lena. Personally I'd say she is in love with the idea of a guy like Ian giving her attention, especially over Lena.
 

Socrambus

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Ian is not in love with Louise, he is interested in her since she slid into his dms and seems desperate, but not in love. Louise you can say is in love, but she has always gotten attached fast. Happened with both Jeremy and Lena. Personally I'd say she is in love with the idea of a guy like Ian giving her attention, especially over Lena.
Even so, I think the threesome should be a requirement. That Ian only has to tell her that he likes her style and her favourite shitty movies it's kind of crazy. Maybe the threesome with Jeremy if Lena hogs his cock to establish some motivation or Louise peeking at Lena and Ian fucking, Stan style. As it is now, it feels unrealistic even for someone as clingy as Louise to shamelessly flirt with her best friend's boyfriend (specially if she is submissive to Lena).
 

Xupuzulla

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Even so, I think the threesome should be a requirement. That Ian only has to tell her that he likes her style and her favourite shitty movies it's kind of crazy. Maybe the threesome with Jeremy if Lena hogs his cock to establish some motivation or Louise peeking at Lena and Ian fucking, Stan style. As it is now, it feels unrealistic even for someone as clingy as Louise to shamelessly flirt with her best friend's boyfriend (specially if she is submissive to Lena).
I agree the threesome should be a requirement,it does feels like EK is trying to speedrun a Ian-Louise pairing.
Im not complaining through:p
 

good4451

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I belive Mike's girlfriend is Gillian since the story has toooo much coincidence
Jeremy and Mike are colleagues, and when Ian asked who went to the party with Gillian, Jeremy didn't mention Mike. I don't think Jeremy would intentionally conceal it. Jeremy mentioned that Gillian was having a party with a few Asian girls, so I doubt if Mark, who is Asian, is Gillian's boyfriend.
 
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ffive

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That Ian only has to tell her that he likes her style and her favourite shitty movies it's kind of crazy.
Have you met Louise? :whistle:

Kind of crazy when on dry boyfriend spell and ready to latch on anyone who shows her a smidgen of attention seems perfectly in character for her.

(that her character is more of a caricature is another, sad story)
 

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Ian punishing Lena, made me realise how fucked up was the second option when Lena asked him if he really loved her. My guess would be, the second option will be a perfect replica of Axel/Lena relationship. She'll just become his toy and Ian's gonna be super possessive about it.
 

Xupuzulla

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Have you met Louise? :whistle:

Kind of crazy when on dry boyfriend spell and ready to latch on anyone who shows her a smidgen of attention seems perfectly in character for her.

(that her character is more of a caricature is another, sad story)
For me how Louise acts with Ian makes perfect sense,is not like Lena ever shows real love to her.
You can tell why Jeremy was trying to keep his distance:KEK:
 

Socrambus

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I agree the threesome should be a requirement,it does feels like EK is trying to speedrun a Ian-Louise pairing.
Im not complaining through:p
I'm not complaining either, although I thought Ivy would be filling the place for the "cheating with your gf's bff" kink. You can't have too much of a good thing, I guess. But I'd prefer if the writing was better and if felt more earnt.

I find it hilarious that the game's logic doesn't consider "cheating" the fact the Lena can be fucking Louise, Holly and Ivy while still being with Ian. Porn game logic, I guess :KEK:
I'm not saying that fucking other girls doesn't count as cheating but I'd say it's not the same if your gf cheats with other dudes than if she cheats with hot girls and brings them to your bed for a threesome. The dishonesty it's not ok but it's just not the same.

Have you met Louise? :whistle:

Kind of crazy when on dry boyfriend spell and ready to latch on anyone who shows her a smidgen of attention seems perfectly in character for her.

(that her character is more of a caricature is another, sad story)
Come on, she's not the hottest girl around but if all she needs is someone pretending to like her favourite movies and some innocent compliment, she would be fucking a different guy everytime she goes out. I'm sure Jeremy showed way more interest and Lena has been her best friend for years.
 

dolfe67

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Even so, I think the threesome should be a requirement. That Ian only has to tell her that he likes her style and her favourite shitty movies it's kind of crazy. Maybe the threesome with Jeremy if Lena hogs his cock to establish some motivation or Louise peeking at Lena and Ian fucking, Stan style. As it is now, it feels unrealistic even for someone as clingy as Louise to shamelessly flirt with her best friend's boyfriend (specially if she is submissive to Lena).
He's bullshitting his way to her panties. But yeah Ian can choose 1 or 2 "heart"(love) options and it's not really believable at this point.
 
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ffive

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Come on, she's not the hottest girl around but if all she needs is someone pretending to like her favourite movies and some innocent compliment, she would be fucking a different guy everytime she goes out.
You'd think so, but then you have to remember that apparently Robert is a good option not just for Lena but also Holly. And that Perry can have a model like Cherry interested in him.

Baluart is apparently devoid of dudes.
 
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