VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

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Zara Scarlet said:
Well obviously, because that's the only way you can say anything for certain. If Eva makes a statement within the game contradicting that, suggesting that Ivy is in fact the biggest slut in the game, and she's had sex with all these people, whilst the games been ongoing, well that would be different. But at present all we have is insinuation at best, and a lot of theories being bandied around that prove nothing.
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Ivy is always a corrupting force in every facet of the game. Player choice only determines whether the corruption works.
 
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Hey everyone,

This week I finally got settled into my new place, though I’m still without internet at home (or furniture, dishes, or a washing machine), so I’ve been wandering from cafés to restaurants, begging for Wi-Fi just to get some work done. I haven’t been able to move forward with any new artwork, but I have been doing a lot of writing, which was long overdue.

I’d been feeling a bit stuck lately,between the move and the endless narrative possibilities of the new chapter, but the change of scenery seems to have helped recharge my creative energy.

One of the biggest challenges was figuring out how to structure the chapter: what scenes to include and how to arrange them. It had me pretty paralyzed for a while, so I’ve decided to just start writing and let the script develop more organically as I go. So far, I’ve got the prologue and the opening scenes written, and I’ve also prepared new sprites, both for new outfits and brand-new NPCs.

This week I’ll keep writing while I slowly furnish the apartment and (hopefully) get the internet situation sorted out. In the meantime, I’d love to hear from you:
What kinds of scenes or content are you hoping to see in the next chapter?
What would you like to explore? Let me know, your suggestions might spark some new ideas or reinforce the ones I already have.

Looking forward to reading your thoughts!
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Something, something, all the pretty model ladies fuck each other while Jeremy and Billy and whatever other fellas are present can only watch and not touch~ :whistle:

Hopefully they don't mind too much either... :unsure:
 
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SerHawkes said:
Ivy was stuck in the middle with Lena centric stuff.
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That's because it was suppose to be this way. Ivy, basically, was a character exclusively for Lena path, only occasionaly and for brief moments crossing with Ian if he was in the scene. It's only because of her popularity among Ian players that she now gets some content with male MC.
 
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Gicoo said:
her Lena-Seymour-cucked-by-massive-Dubai-sheiks-self-insert-fanfic-extravaganza didn't pan out
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Always wondered, why on earth anyone would believe that there was even a chance for it? It was clear from the start that ORS isn't about extreme fetishes, and from the first Seymour appearance - that he would never let anyone else touch Lena, if he is able.
 
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That's because it was suppose to be this way. Ivy, basically, was a character exclusively for Lena path, only occasionaly and for brief moments crossing with Ian if he was in the scene. It's only because of her popularity among Ian players that she now gets some content with male MC.
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I only got there around the chapter 9 rewrite, so I don't know how the first chapters were originally written, but Ian always shows interest in Ivy. On his side, she is clearly Jeremys love sex interest, he is going after her for the entire game and Ian/Lena can help or stop him, but that doesn't stop Ian, doesn't it? Cindy is Wade/Axel love interest and Ian is setup to swoop him from the get go, Emma is mainly Perrys love interest and the focus can shift greatly on Ian, Lena and a bit of Jeremy.
Also, until chapter 10, Ian can interact with her around three times and gain relationship points, so why include them if there was no further plans?

Esti said:
Always wondered, why on earth anyone would believe that there was even a chance for it? It was clear from the start that ORS isn't about extreme fetishes, and from the first Seymour appearance - that he would never let anyone else touch Lena, if he is able.
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Now I'm go to mansplain and what I observed and generalized doesn't apply to everyone, so it may not be gender/sex relevant.
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Generally, girls want to insert themselves in a story and become the main character, changing everything around them to their whims. Meanwhile boys are content to stay as an outsider and accept the rules of the story, they use the main character as a tool without needing to emphasize with them.
ORS two different point of views show this: On Ians side he "builds" his book and has to beat other men or convince other persons in quick time events. The focus is on winning girls and convincing other person related to his art, career and physical competition.
With Lena, the music and athletic options barely have gameplay. Her music or stalkfap path focus on her interactions with others, how they react on her. She has it far more easier to get every love/sex interest and the focus lies on how she feels about it, why with Ian it is a more challenging and competitive aspect to "conquer" a woman. Lena is also far more customisable regarding her past behaviour and present looks.

I hardly find a male equivalent of these really obsessive girls (who are a vocal minority) who greatly fawn over whatever popular man like Elvis, Justin Biber, Sasuke, Dr. Who, or Snape. They write elaborate fanfics in and build shrines and create an entire world in which them dating them is a natural fact. Boys may simp for girls and the most pathetic ones spent their life savings for them, but they rarely display that kind of "affection", it seems a more practical approach.

So in Andrea's case, she internalized her own sex life and sex fantasies (which she wants to display to the world, why else would she have a blog about it) on Lena. So whatever Andrea wants, Lena should naturally serve to experience it, ORS was supposed to be Andrea's outlet for her fantasies.
 
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Gicoo said:
Also, until chapter 10, Ian can interact with her around three times and gain relationship points, so why include them if there was no further plans?
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Because it could matter on Lena path, of course. Like Ian doesn't really interact with Seymour either (and I'm pretty sure they wouldn't fuck), but he can win his favor. Or with Axel, for that matter. Good Jess couldn't be fucked if I remember correctly. Gaining points and establishing relationships isn't indicative of sexual content to come. And, hey, I wasn't thrilled about situation with Ivy either, but never had my hopes up. Now situation is changing.

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So whatever Andrea wants, Lena should naturally serve to experience it, ORS was supposed to be Andrea's outlet for her fantasies.
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That makes sense. Thanks.
 
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Gicoo said:
I only got there around the chapter 9 rewrite, so I don't know how the first chapters were originally written, but Ian always shows interest in Ivy. On his side, she is clearly Jeremys love sex interest, he is going after her for the entire game and Ian/Lena can help or stop him, but that doesn't stop Ian, doesn't it? Cindy is Wade/Axel love interest and Ian is setup to swoop him from the get go, Emma is mainly Perrys love interest and the focus can shift greatly on Ian, Lena and a bit of Jeremy.
Also, until chapter 10, Ian can interact with her around three times and gain relationship points, so why include them if there was no further plans?
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Looks like the old guy has to explain the history of ORS here... Let me get a chair...

-Ahem ahem- Come here you youngsters. Daddy Hawkes here is going to tell you a story.

Ages ago, before Eva Kiss decided to rework her story for brain dead retarded ass reasonings, there was a time when Ian had a moment with Ivy at the bar, had he been semi cordial with Axel. At the time, Ivy and Ian would chat a bit with either version of Jess in tow and Ian after wards, depending on how he possible handled Axel (depending on his relationship with Lena) could give a kiss on the cheek before leaving the bar.

This in turn, after the first rework of Wade, was changed from the kiss on the cheek to a flirty exchange that was meaningless, all what similiar tied to being on semi decent terms with Axel.

This again was reworked to the most current version of the bar scene where we are now forced to hang out with Jeremy and get no measure of flirting or cheek kissing with Ivy at all.

So... to some measure, Ivy and Ian had some interest prior, but thanks to EK's failed measure of balancing things, among other skill issues she has, it's only in recent times she's "rewarding" Ian and Ivy with meaningless fan service and exchanges.
 
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Gicoo said:
Generally, girls want to insert themselves in a story and become the main character, changing everything around them to their whims. Meanwhile boys are content to stay as an outsider and accept the rules of the story, they use the main character as a tool without needing to emphasize with them.
ORS two different point of views show this: On Ians side he "builds" his book and has to beat other men or convince other persons in quick time events. The focus is on winning girls and convincing other person related to his art, career and physical competition.
With Lena, the music and athletic options barely have gameplay. Her music or stalkfap path focus on her interactions with others, how they react on her. She has it far more easier to get every love/sex interest and the focus lies on how she feels about it, why with Ian it is a more challenging and competitive aspect to "conquer" a woman. Lena is also far more customisable regarding her past behaviour and present looks.
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That's just how men and women function. Despite all the equality bullshit talk, men still have to conquer women and then women have the last word to choose.

Not every LI must be for both MC, where is my Ian/Axel romance? :KappaPride:
 
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