Perspective issue! 
Romance players will of course not like the slut path, and vice versa. The romance path is very mushy to me, it's not bad, but typical ego stroking and hearteyes. Slut paths are also typical, what else could they be? Writing is decent to good on both paths with minor ball dropping, overall well written, spectacular if you compare to 95ish+% of other AVNs.
Choice sets this one apart, and also sets the table for disagreements.
		 
		
	 
I respectfully disagree and I will explain why:
I do not dislike the principle of a sluth path, not at all. Actually, the slut path was my main playthrough until the club blowjob scene in Chapter 10. 
I thought the first ONS with Mike was hot, I thought Lena waking up Jeremy was hot, I thought cheating on Ian with Axel the first time was hot, damn, I even thought sex with Robert after the date with Ian was hot.
To me, there was a turning point on the slut path, one sentence announcing the downfall and EK losing her shit on the slut path, during the  toilets blowjob to Mark:
"One more seed I had conquered".
Damn, this was the most ridiculous line in the history of AVNs - until the "gimme ur alpha cock" of the Jack scene that is.
Since then, the slut path has been increasingly boring and mediocre. I wish it had not been. It is.
That said, I do agree that it is poorly written only in absolute terms, but that when you compare it to not just 95% but 99,9% of other AVNs it is still superior.