VN Ren'Py Our Secret: Price of Forbidden Wishes [v0.4.5] [17MOONKEYS]

[Deleted member 3994251]

17MOONKEYS I'm a fan of UFO, great game with a big focus on milfs that delivers well. This game is in the early stages indeed but I don't see how it will expand too much in any meaningfull direction.
1. No sci-fi / magic / too paranormal or similar
2. Set in a basic house in bumfuck nowhere
3. Focus on mostly one milf character that doesn't look bad, but shes not unique either (there are at least 3-4 games with almost the same head, the only thing thats great is the body, which is great but its the same body as most milfs in your games)

None of these things are particularly bad but taken together they limit where the game's plot and thus scenes can really go. The horror genre as it was already said here isn't gonna be too popular by itself, you should design a hentai game around its scenes and bigger plot milestones, the setting is just there to help with that.

There are a lot of sh0ta 1ncest games out there, most of the popular ones are popular not despite but because they have all of the same usual characters, the mom, older/younger sis, hot aunt, cousins, milf neighbour, teacher etc. You don't need to make too generic of a game but I think you should reevaluate the setting of this one and where you want the story to go, especially in its current state where we're probably not gonna see many characters overall and new ones anytime soon.

If you already want it to be horror/paranormal then either:
1. Make a full horror game focusing on horror very obviously and add paranormal mommies (check out Infinity Realm, simple but the content is good)
2. Mix something similar into the already existing setup here, for example the MC wakes up the spirit inside that doll on the attic, she later on brings him into some underground paranormal coraline like new world and then you have 2 parts to the game, the normal above where later on the MCs family can move in or some neighbours somehow and the crazy world below with different events that would mix the two together depending on what you want exactly etc.
This would add uniqueness to the game with its horror elements and demon mommy type of models while also allowing you to easily add those characters whenever you want into the plot to spice up the updates and keep intrest in your game.

Personaly, I also would like to say that you should never switch your games to be sandbox, and in regards to all of your current and future games I would also suggest adding more:
1. Breastfeeding scenes
2. Choco mommies
3. MC cucking husbands

Good luck.

Very interesting, I thought about a lot ... Thank You!

 

[Master of Puppets]

I would definitely say that if you want a non-incest "mom", then something like a ghost whose own son died and who decides to make our guy her new son makes a lot more sense than a friend of his actual mother just deciding he should call her "mom" for no reason. Ghosts be crazy, you know? They often do things that would make no sense for normal people.

 

[Hegoz]

First Release is 0.4?

That's original nomenclature.

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

First Release is 0.4?

Yes.

That's original nomenclature.

What do you mean nomenclature?

 

[Hegoz]

What do you mean nomenclature?

It means Classification System.

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

It means Classification System.

Yeah that's original nomenclature.
0.4 - public version.
0.6 - only for patreons.
0.8 or 1.0 - next or last one.

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

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[multiplex1]

some of the dialogue in the beginning uses aunt or auntie after a while it uses mom. why is that?

 

[methusalix55]

hello
the whole criticism of the MILF's body hair and the change requests are completely incomprehensible to me and absolutely pointless!

if you don't like that, you can stick to "realistic" depictions such as shaved women in a medieval setting, or look at stranded women on a desert island who have no clothing or food, but are portrayed permanently "clean shaved".
you can find dare like it here without end!

I really hope 17MOONKEYS won't be deterred and won't change anything!

 

[antoniomontenegro]

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Atmospheric porn horror.
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Thread Updated: 2022-12-11
Release Date: 2022-12-11
Developer: 17MOONKEYS

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Version: 0.4
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Language: English
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(Pros, cons? What do you think is redundant? What would you add?)

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It's mom or auntie?

 

[Deleted member 3159354]

Any possibility of getting the latest Mac version of this game?
It was just getting good with the open robe at the end...

 

[The game master]

Can't wait to bang bang

 

[The game master]

Seriously dev pls try to update this game as soon as you can

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

Seriously dev pls try to update this game as soon as you can

Working on it, every single day.

 

[The game master]

Working on it, every single day.

Thank you so so much

 

[love381]

Thanks for the answer, the game has a lot of potential, I will follow and success to you

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

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[methusalix55]

Hi,

I'd say, someone must be on meth to love hairy female pits in 2022, (my not so nice opinion, and also is my choice not to like LIs with bird nest pits).

Warning, I wrote a book...
If you don't read the whole thing, you'll get mad, I know you will, you've been warned. -humor-


Again good luck to the Dev!

helloYaYa_UnTIN2

just because I myself and other people don't share your views and tastes, so we're on meth?
congratulations on this judgement. Politics, the advertising industry and other institutions need people like you!

for me personally, freedom of expression ends at the point where you start manipulating other people, discrediting them, or even publicly attacking them!
try to think about it, maybe you'll notice something!

 

[Joop501]

The game has a lot of possibilities

 

[Miraj]

Love your game Thxxx you very much and Marry chrismas