Honest Feedback.....
Interesting plot, but too light on back story and character development.
Story develops to fast, feels a little to rushed.... slow it down a little and let us get to know the characters more
so we feel more invested in them and in the story.
Renders are average, nothing to complain about or praise though either. But they are fine if the story draws
us in and captures us.....
Overall.... Promising start and I'm wishing you luck