VN Ren'Py Abandoned Our Story [v0.02] [SeblonGames]

heretic1

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Dec 22, 2019
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Don't know what you mean by victoria 1...? As I mentioned in the opening post, this is my first game and the first time that I am involved in creating 3d graphics. i know the lighting is not good but i hope it will get better as time goes on.

If someone doesn't like the game because of that, i can understand that.
so, you don't want to know if we like anything or not?
 

Seblon

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Nov 10, 2020
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Looks like the bestiality tag was removed, so I guess he changed his mind about adding it to the game? (good)
It's still planned for the future, but it will only be softcore bestiality and as I said, if you switch it off, you will not notice anything.
 
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I'm not a fan of large breasts myself, so I made them small on purpose. No promise, but maybe someone with even smaller breasts will come along. I will definitely keep it in mind.:sneaky:
They are actually rather big. Daughter and mother looks kind of the same age as it is now. Making the daughter smaller would make it more believable imho. If you don't agree forget about it and keep up the good work.
 
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Oliz82

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Mar 15, 2021
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Hello.

There's not much content to asses this game yet.

The worldbuilding is non existent for now since the MC is just in front of the stairs remembering the past with his wife before going to bed next to his daughter.
The characters' personalities, though rather briefly described, are nice.
The story isn't really clear though the evolution of the couple in the flashback was cute.
The art is correct for 3dcg characters. I was worried since the girls in the samples feel so young. My only problem was MC's hair (it feels like he putted the entire pot of gel). The girls' lips are thin, maybe too much. It's nice to see very visible cheekbones for once.

The intervension of your own avatar to guide us is a good and original idea.

You should explain more the circumstances of the wife's disparition (at work, shopping, jogging, on the road...) because she disappeared 2 weeks ago is too vague.

There are still problems in your writing. Some sentences were difficult to understand. Some disruptions in the middle of some phrases were off putting. Some spelling errors are still present and you forgot some capital letters. I was unconfortable while reading sometime (well, maybe that's just me).

Good continuation.
 

Walter Victor

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Dec 27, 2017
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It's still planned for the future, but it will only be softcore bestiality and as I said, if you switch it off, you will not notice anything.
"Softcore bestiality"!? What, does the MC dry-hump a sheep!? o_O

If I don't play the game, I'm sure I won't notice it.
 

Seblon

Newbie
Nov 10, 2020
28
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Hello.

There's not much content to asses this game yet.

The worldbuilding is non existent for now since the MC is just in front of the stairs remembering the past with his wife before going to bed next to his daughter.
The characters' personalities, though rather briefly described, are nice.
The story isn't really clear though the evolution of the couple in the flashback was cute.
The art is correct for 3dcg characters. I was worried since the girls in the samples feel so young. My only problem was MC's hair (it feels like he putted the entire pot of gel). The girls' lips are thin, maybe too much. It's nice to see very visible cheekbones for once.

The intervension of your own avatar to guide us is a good and original idea.

You should explain more the circumstances of the wife's disparition (at work, shopping, jogging, on the road...) because she disappeared 2 weeks ago is too vague.

There are still problems in your writing. Some sentences were difficult to understand. Some disruptions in the middle of some phrases were off putting. Some spelling errors are still present and you forgot some capital letters. I was unconfortable while reading sometime (well, maybe that's just me).

Good continuation.
First of all, thank you for this detailed text.

Next update will show exactly what happened on the day of the disappearance (from the point of view of the mc)

English isn't my first language. I would be very grateful if someone would like to correct the incorrect sentences and send them to me so that I can change them.
 
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