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as a recommendation or how to put it, own preference? You should put to let the MC rename or so I think, I don't know
I think it was v0.7 before it was abandoned only months afterwards he stared this and I agree iill wait to see if he Finnish it before I try it because I was a supporter now I have no faith he will even finish it seem he is just fishing for cashThat matters how? The old one got to v0.6 This one might not make it very far either.
Yeah, it's a rework. I hope you gonna enjoy itThis is a rework or something else? I like your old version, hope this will be better
Wow, thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm going to keep your words in mind when working on the next episodes. I will slow down the pace starting from episode 4 since the third one is already halfway to go. I really appreciate you spent your time to write down your thoughts, constructive criticism is always a good thing.I just played episode 1 and I like idea but the pacing of it is way too off. Only thing I really cared in first episode is beginning and the end(that part is intriguing) because it just jumps from one thing to another so quick and there is no substance in there or at least it is lost to us as reader/player. Like what is the point of catching teacher changing couple minutes into the game ? It didn't achieve anything, same with doctor scene as well. It is as we are late to the story.
For example that class geek has some beef with Ren but we weren't there when that started, why don't we play through that situation coming about since it can be used to shows us what kind of person Ren is.
So i think all of this needs to slow the fuck down and make us care about the world and characters. Show us who MC is as a person.You seem to have all of that figured it just needs to be showed to us.
Another thing to consider is increasing quality of renders and models, I understand how time consuming it is but it's worth in the end. Now I don't know if this is just bad camera angles,weird filters or scene are to short but I couldn't find models hot even tho they clearly are. I didn't get teased at all.
And last thing I noticed is music, it is too bland and doesn't fit the mood. Music is great tool so don't put it in for sake of it. That is just wasting time.
In any case I think this whole episode needs are rework because how it starts is what is going to make or break it for many people that try your game. You want to draw them in, and you are not going to achieve that with some blurred boobs 2 mins in.
Now don't get me wrong I love your idea and there is massive potential here, and that is the reason for this long post. In any case can wait for next update.
Sorry lol, but don't get me wrong here, I want you to prove me wrong. Not like you have to, but I love being proven wrong.